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29 year-old male from Wilmington, DE
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My Poetry Page, "Who cares about poems"



My Favorite Poem
My favorite inspirations on poetry come from Heart aches, sad songs or actually any song, lost love, no love at all, looking for you out there somewhere, find me soon, hopefully tonight
:ALAN


My Favorite Poets
Elisabeth Bishop has a similar style to mine so I like her, I know how she must have felt, I wish I could have met her, she died, before my time
a poem people should read by her "breakfast song"

Tell me what you think I love to talk to people who are kind be friend of mine
EMAIL : ACE4756099@aol.com
we'll talk sometime



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My Poetry
ugly the night and fallen to the earth in desperation and hearing tears in the night to fall into the pools deepening farther in...torn by sunsets...fallen int..these times creeping in...the feeling...tearing me apart ...no where to hide from it...the end of my love..sinse the begining of time
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Into the stars of the fallen wind...cast from the light, destined to fail like the rest...my tearsured loved one...looking at the knife and falling on it without a second thought..turned to cold stone..its just the way it has to be
so here whe stand again fallen like the wind, autum leaves, my heart crushed wheat..no soul lingering from the shock...rolling waves in an ocean of feeling ...tossed in...painful dreaming...to end it without finding the answers to what I longed to know
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Take me away hold these dreams, toss them out into the sea costing me my pride, my tears deeper then wounds, these cold hearts, my dreams falling apart infornt of my very eyes, the cold uncaring you, my mind unfeeling, destined by you to fear the wind, a meaningless thought, love cold, no more feeling, hold out your hand, feeling close to you, even though I can't be anymore, drawing my light from you, lost from my sight, grace of losing my loss of fate, I loved you, you never told me the truth, looking out this closed eyes, tears inside, not like I can just forget you, but it has to be done,
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can you feel its my chest beating on, moonlight in your eyes moving over the earth at the speed of light, my vision blurring, the alknowing lovers not apart of my thoughts as my heart holds somany regrets,you meant something to me but I have to deny it now, my tears they will be shed for you....here I am, hiding my true nature behind the waning thoughts kept to myself, her eyes finding me in the night no where to ....runing out of breath my heart is climbinh out of the unearthly dawn help me be a human, don't let me fall down, I coudn't take it agai
n, love me as I let my hair blow in the wind...
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my eyes they cry tears for you, it was unfair, a game I played by toying with your heart all I could do was runn away, turning away from the light of day, to meet the night and forget the sunset beeliveing I'd find my heart, no longer feeling your touch, my eyes tearing up, my mind torn apart, the glowing of the earth, a special place in this soul for you even when your gone, unfair the winds of change stealing love away from us all challenging everyone to lash out and climb out of this whole....too deep to have anyone, the act of descertion the battle warring on within the crying for my sins I apologize to you for being a wimp, the long battle weary darling, I'm crying, screaming, wanting to be with you, but it wasn't meant to be

close the door, tell me what love is for, heart cannot move on anymore, the tears of a loved one mean my sins, my life, not worth the whistling wind, turning away from duty to hold out in a life time, long for heavens reverence, love me like we were meant to be, not the fake ones I’ve known a flase angel calling my name haunting my dreams, tearing upart my heart from mmy chst its useless, it can’t help me, the day will bring another disgrace, hold out you eyes for my life, let me fall, let me swim in doubt, till I’m full, let the wind heal wounds, tell me truths, tell me what ZI’m longing to hear as the sounds start again the casual lives of my friends knowing nothing hating their happiness, alone in the night, crying for life, give my light.

Tell me who it is I am, allow me to find out, kissing a stranger, looking out for the meaning, no one knows, it’s a cruel joke, wandering alone, is just the way it is, falling from the sky, drwoning in my own blood, my tears puddles, they keep me company now, linger on and show me how to be strong, feel your skin, feel the wind, the way you smiles making me want nothing more, awakening from a prefect dream to the real world uncaring, tossed into the mess, of people scrambleing all of them alone too, no one understand you the way I do, kissing your hands, tell me what to do, fallen warrior, having given in to loves trick, pity him the harm to his soul can not be undone he wants to be left alone, needing to have feelings again, his paradice taken from his dream.

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tell me of the destined wind, show me the light, let it shine through me, crying on my pillows as the heart beats on somber tones, the crying of the wind for our soul, intertwinded and lost, toghther the future, predetermined and yet I'm lost missing your touch, a fear that i will wait a life time, to find the tenderness inside the bitter rights, my wandering soul, walk alone, tell t
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Name Alan M. Burke
Occupation Slacker
Birthday November 12th, 1982
Interests Red vs. Blue anime poetry drawing watching tv halo sometimes TEX random ladies
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Music all kinds
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TV Shows um.......angel was good its canelled now....um..