In reply to FlameHaze001
Dude, considering some of the OCs you've made in the past, I don't think you have room to imply the idea that something deserves criticism.
In reply to Jwebb1115
This OC is far from the worst I've seen, but there are a few areas that need some work and/or slight revision. Her personality section is good, but it could use a little bit more detail. As is, she seems a little one note. What kind of temperament does she have? What kinds of things make her angry? How good with people is she? Is she very by-the-book professional, following rules and orders without question, or is she a free rouge kind of professional, following her own moral codes and such? Is she only professional when in the work environment, able to let loose and have fun with friends when she's not in school or on a missions? Or is she very serious no matter the circumstances. Nothing you have for her personality section now is bad, I'd say it's actually rather good. It just needs more elaboration.
Weapons aren't my field of expertise, but I do have a few small points to bring up. First up, the energy aspect. I'm assuming that by energy, you're referring to the hard light technology we saw Velvet use during the season 3 finally. This isn't a bad thing, in fact it's rare I see anyone use hard light, but maybe readjust the phrasing to be a bit more clear on what you mean by 'energy'. There's a lot of different kinds of energy out there: heat, electrical, kinetic, potential, etc. You might want to also slightly clarify the 'blades' on the ends of the weapon's staff mode. I realized when I reread it that you meant they were spear heads, but because you just said blades, the first thing that came to my mind was Cinder's weapon from the flashback in season 3 episode 7. Other than needing to clarify some things and phrase things better, I think this weapon is really cool and unique! Especially by bow RWBY weapon standards. I especially like how she's not just using dust arrow heads, but is instead using dust cartridges to add effects to otherwise normal arrows.
Now for the only part of this character I don't really like: her semblance. It's not because it's a glyph thing and that's canonically a Shnee thing (although a bow wielder using glyphs does remind me of the fan made viridian trailer). What bothers me about this semblance is that it doesn't seem to do anything on it's own. What good would it do if she didn't have any arrows left? Wouldn't it just sit there and do nothing? On it's own, it's just a semblance that draws a glyph on something and then just...... sits there....... doing nothing........ the whole battle. I can understand wanting a semblance that easily mixes with dust for added effects, but I think you need to find a way to change it so it's not basically doing nothing.
Obviously this character still needs an appearance section and a history section, but judging it solely on what you've got finished, I think this character has a lot of potential! It needs some re-phrasing to make certain things more clear, and some extra details in the personality section, but other than that, it's an excellent frame work for the start of an OC.