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  • Horus1122

    Horus1122

    #33690623 - 11 months ago

    In reply to user-59f4cc5dcb079 thanks for the input I appreciate it also about the spelling my computer will sometimes just randomly open up a Microsoft tab when I'm writing something at any time so its hard to check my spelling but I'll improve on it I swear also holy punctuation batman wtf that made me laugh so hard 

  • Horus1122

    Horus1122

    #33690625 - 11 months ago

    In reply to user-59f4cc5dcb079 hells breath is a good one I think I might use that one and when I've improve the draft I'll post it here cause anything I post here is a rough draft but for a first time writing/ making a oc I don't think I did horrible

  • A-Tank

    A-Tank

    #33690708 - 11 months ago

    In reply to Horus1122

    Alright, cool. Take your time. I'm looking forward to the next draft.

  • A-Tank

    A-Tank

    #33690714 - 11 months ago

    In reply to Horus1122

    In reply to user-59f4cc5dcb079  but for a first time writing/ making a oc I don't think I did horrible

    Everyone's first draft sucks. That's how you learn and improve. If you want proof, just look at my OC (his 1st and 2nd drafts are on page 1 of the thread). He Was shredded (on another thread), but for all the right reasons. I factored all their criticism in, and launched his own story.

  • Horus1122

    Horus1122

    #33690970 - 11 months ago

    In reply to user-59f4cc5dcb079 thanks I appreciate the support dude 

  • A-Tank

    A-Tank

    #33691010 - 11 months ago

    In reply to Horus1122

    You know, I can't help but see Nolen's story as an upbeat, inspirational tale in which a boy off the street fights his circumstances to become a huntsman.


    Like something out of Rocky. I see Nolan beating up slabs of meat, beating up brick walls and concrete to toughen his hands and legs, running through the entire town building up his fitness level.


    Then when he is at Beacon, he just throws a fist up in victory as the sun sets.


    Then Beacon falls. Better luck next time, sport.

  • Horus1122

    Horus1122

    #33691137 - 11 months ago

    In reply to user-59f4cc5dcb079 wow really inspirational there until the end and PS love Rocky

  • Arita25K

    Arita25K

    #33691990 - 11 months ago

    Name: Henry Hyde

    Gender: Male

    Species: Human

    Age: 19

    Birthplace: Vacuo

    Height: 6’9 ft

    Weight: 227 lbs

    Eye Color: Brown

    Hair Color: Black

    Residence: Vacuo

    Symbol: A red horned devil’s face on right side, or part of it, and a green skull’s face on the left.


    Description: An unusually tall and well muscled young man, who has a little tan, with a multitude of scars across his chest and back, and a few strange square shaped scars imprinted onto his right shoulder. He wears a white tank top with dozens upon dozens of gashes, wearing a manica, or a steel armguard, with rows of squared pieces lined down his left arm, each one colored in green and red, whilst he wears a pair of tan cargo pants and heavy black boots. His right arm only has a steel and clunky pauldron, with a full green painted cover and a red devil’s face etched in, meant for some minimal defense. His face is usually covered up by a black face scarf with rows of red teeth painted on, and his head covered by a black head scarf as well with three green stripes, but behind it he has a rough face with some facial hair wrapping around his jaw and short trimmed black hair.


    Personality 1: Henry, whose the original, is a smart and rather concealing person who prefers to think most things through, but he’s actually quite kind once you get past most of his smartass remarks or his sarcastic tone of voice, but there are times where even Henry himself proves to be a rather agitated person and does his best to remain kind and passive, always seeing more than way to resolve an issue as well as making friends without fighting, and believes that you need a good plan before rushing into a fight.


    Personality 2: Hyde is a different person altogether, a combination of Henry’s more... daring side, someone who hates waiting for plans, someone who loves the thrill of a fight. He doesn’t care for anyone, not unless they see who he is, and usually likes to keep a leash on Henry’s body, usually the one who loves control and domination, and he’s a rude and foul mouthed person, someone whose a slave to his own sins and doesn’t mind hurting anyone to get what he wants.


    Weapon: A pair of Knuckle-Daggers, each one with sharp pins at the side of the them, not where the blades are, but at the blunt end of them, usually used by Henry who prefers to take combat close once he’s figured out a pathway or an attack pattern and how to counter his opponent, but with Hyde he charge in hacking and slashing at whatever he can, preferring to use the sharp ends, but ends up punching people sometimes. The Knuckle-Daggers have a mechanized curve, with a sharp fold, while the dull side of them have a button that allows them to fold in and out, when folded in they look similar to a small and very closed up triangle.


    Hyde himself wields a long rod capable of extending outwards, forming up a polearm, with a magnum chamber located at the top of the rod, hidden inside, and a barrel poking atop it. He can also use the Knuckle-Daggers and attach them in, allowing him to have a long ranged pickaxe with the benefits of more reach as well as cutting power. His polearm only uses Fire Dust, either to blast away at enemies, or act as a torch in a dark place. Henry prefers just the polearm rather than adding his Daggers or shooting considering his half of the semblance.


    Semblance: Boom Boom! 


    Description: The Boom Boom semblance allows one to generate both heat and gas throughout their body, allowing them to be able to cause an explosive blow to any opponent, or even spontaneously combust, causing a minor but powerful explosion to knock back enemies, and it can be channeled into his weapon and fists, able to deal blows that’ll hurt. However, considering that both personalities split, they’re only able to use certain aspects, Henry being able to use the gas, his body releasing gas from his body, allowing him to knock out unsuspecting enemies concerning the gas in his body, despite its volatility. Meanwhile, Hyde himself can generate heat to a certain limit, yet to be decided, and this heat allows him to generate a warm and burning temperature around him, also being able to heat up his weapons to better cut through most things or scorch someone if he chooses melee combat and lands a hit, burning the, slightly depending on the contact.


    Weaknesses: The semblance itself is hands on, it cannot be made to fire out explosions, even if channeling if you toss it while you’re channeling a weapon. Boom Boom also causes damage if the explosion is close to him when channeling explosive power. A premature explosion also can hurt his allies and himself if he doesn’t emit anything. The gas itself is highly volatile so even a match can set Henry exploding off dealing damage. Hyde’s semblance is a switch on, whilst giving his weapons an added boost and keeping enemies away, the temperature also affects Hyde who while tolerates it, cannot keep it on, and it also takes aura for every second he uses it. 


    History: Living in Vacuo was tough, that was obvious to anyone who lived there, but surviving it meant you were good with anyone... At least, that’s what most people believed if you didn’t live right in a makeshift tent for at least 9 years until you were taken away by bandits who killed your parents.


    Right, where do I begin? I was a runt, or at least, a guy who hated violence, even when I was a kid, I was terrified of the thought of Grimm, and truth be told, I was also pretty much a wuss when it came down to fighting... So I always tried using words, even when I was a small child, and my parents, who were nomads, always tried to teach me right from wrong, and I took to it like a fish in water.


    Then that changed once a group of bandits raided us, or in simpler terms, found it amusing to kill my family and eat me.


    Yes, eat me. 


    Next thing I knew I was taken under by one of the bandits who said I could be their newest addition, and with a little begging, and crying, I joined. 


    Years passed and I did exactly what they did, and failed at it spectacularly, mostly because I wanted to hold onto my teachings, or at least get things with money without having to steal, but it all changed on the day I was forced to take a life once I was 16. 


    That’s when the metaphorical dam broke and when I realized I started to... not care as much. It was strange, but ever since that day, I never seemed to remember what was going on, whenever we went out on a raid, whenever we looted, pillaged, and went in, I always seemed to have a blur instead of a memory, and my ‘family’ praised me. 


    Apparently I was one bad kid.


    I wasn’t the best fighter, not a frontal one, but I was the one who had plans, gave them to the group, and our raids were a lot more successful with less carnage and return fire on our part, making thing pretty easier for us, but they made it sound like I was the one who fought with them.


    Weird.


    Then it happened, on the next raid we were ambushed, a Huntsman was called in which shocked everyone of us, but the next thing I knew I saw my newest ‘family’ getting slaughtered left and right, and while I wouldn’t have cared much, I did care... They grew on me, and I grew with them, even if I’ll forever resent them for what they did, I can’t say I don’t care, nor forgive them for what they did, but in the end they’re all I have despite why I can’t forgive them. 


    That’s when I hear the voices, the yelling, the shouting, and I can feel a pounding in my skull, as if sirens were going off, chains rattling, and before I knew what even happened, I found myself looking at everything, but what was weird, was that I saw blackness around me, no movement, no feeling, just an empty blackness within the space I was, and I looked, and I could see my body moving on it’s own, pulling off an axe from the ground and roaring with laughter. 


    “NEVER STOP THE FIGHT! LET’S GO! SLASHY SLASH SLASH!”


    I was shocked by what happened because the next thing I see is my self attacking the Huntsman, someone who clearly was out of my league, but he persisted, and it took until we got some back up to fend off the Huntsman and retreat, and that’s when I met my alternate personality, 


    Hyde...


    Nothing was the same after that, I thought we could be friends, mostly after I realized he was an alternate personality when I was 17. We talked, well I talked, he shouted and argued for full control rather than be attached to someone who likes to think plans through and how not to harm people so much, at least without murder, so negotiations quickly dissolved into bickering and we hated each other with a passion.


    I kinda stopped trying to be peaceful with a jerk who literally calls me a Bag of Sand, and... well he was very expressive.


    Anyways, I left my surrogate ‘family’ after some time, wanting to live a life on my own, and maybe find something else besides raiding villages, or makeshift tents, or even attacking a factory here and there. 


    So, I began to wander afterwards, realizing that this whole life of mine was... Well what’s a better word than crap?


    Either way, I wasn’t alone on this journey, and Hyde wouldn’t let me go either, so it was me, Henry Hyde, with another personality right behind me every step of the way, but I really, really, REALLY, wished we didn’t argue so much.


    For now, it’s earn money, find a job, and maybe settle down...


    No, not even close. 


    So this guy is inspired by Krieg from the Borderlands, and from Jekyl and Hyde. I posted him somewhere else, but I’d like full reviews, and I understand if there are something’s that are wrong or need a rewrite, I’m accepting truth and I don’t mind if it helps my character be made or improves! I hope I did... somewhat well considering this is my first try at a RWBY OC. 

  • A-Tank

    A-Tank

    #33692569 - 11 months ago

    In reply to Arita25K

    So this is one crazy fellow, eh.

    Also, I can't help but giggle a bit at his semblance. What if he eats a ton of beans before a fight?

  • Arita25K

    Arita25K

    #33692571 - 11 months ago

    In reply to user-59f4cc5dcb079

    Just about, at least Hyde, Henry’s a smartass with a nice personality’s.


    Well, we’re going super nova if he eats that much in hear, and if Henry eats it, he’ll dispatch gas that’s putrid and even makes Grimm think twice. Like a skunk!

  • A-Tank

    A-Tank

    #33692583 - 11 months ago

    In reply to Arita25K

    Now we hold the key to defeating Salem. Silver Eyes? Get outta here.


  • bobbotfitz

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    #33693691 - 10 months ago

    In reply to animexrwby

    Can I get some help. I am trying to make a team for a fan-made animations but I am having trouble coming up with their names. The team name is SLVR, the team leader S is male, wolf faunus, color is silver. Second team member L is female, human, I have not figured out what color she would be yet, I am thinking lemon yellow. Third team member V is female, scorpion faunus, her color is purple, I want her first name to be Violet but I can't think of a last name, I mite not give her a last name because she is an orphan that never met her parents. The last member R is male, human, his color is red. If you need more information I will only give their backstories, what I am thinking for their weapons and part of their appearance's. I don't want to give to much information because I want to leave most of it for the animations. I can get everything else with the characters done but I need help with the names. Please reply soon, I want to get these characters done before I have to leave for boot camp next month.

  • AnimeAnnemarie

    AnimeAnnemarie

    #33693725 - 10 months ago

    In reply to bobbotfitz Why are you asking this one random person? What do you even want help with?

  • bobbotfitz

    bobbotfitz FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold

    #33693750 - 10 months ago

    I did not release I was replying to someone instead of just posting on the forum. I just need help with my character names. It is the only part I can not figure out for the characters I want to make.

  • AnimeAnnemarie

    AnimeAnnemarie

    #33693763 - 10 months ago

    In reply to bobbotfitz Have you tried looking up resources online with names for different shades of colors, or using google translate to look at color words in other languages?

  • bobbotfitz

    bobbotfitz FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold

    #33693767 - 10 months ago

    I have looked up different shades of colors but not color words in other languages. I will try that.

  • animexrwby

    animexrwby FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold Izac Neal

    #33696850 - 10 months ago

    In reply to bobbotfitz I apologize for the delay. I have been very busy. I have some ideas for your team SLVR. look up the other colors in different, or the same, language. 


    EX: Caeruleum is latin for blue.

  • animexrwby

    animexrwby FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold Izac Neal

    #33696851 - 10 months ago

    How about Violet Skorpios?

  • Malochroma

    Malochroma FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold Mollymaukery

    #33696884 - 10 months ago

    *Slides in like some sort of cool person IDK* Diiiiiid someone say that they were having trouble coming up with color names? 'Cause I have a lot! Over 1700, to be precise, though I'll have to do some editing to trim out the Volume 5 names and add stuff from the suggestions list.

  • bobbotfitz

    bobbotfitz FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold

    #33697111 - 10 months ago

    In reply to animexrwby Thank you for your suggestion, it is in the same direction I was thinking of for her, but I have already choose the character names and I am currently working on the character's bio's. I will be finished with them this week but I will not be able to start working on the animations until June. I am hoping I will get these animations out before next season of RWBY. Thank you for helping.

  • animexrwby

    animexrwby FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold Izac Neal

    #33697176 - 10 months ago

    In reply to bobbotfitz no problem. 

  • night-howler

    night-howler

    #33697928 - 10 months ago

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    night-howler

    #33697929 - 10 months ago

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    night-howler

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  • AnimeAnnemarie

    AnimeAnnemarie

    #33698059 - 10 months ago

    In reply to night-howler OMFG not another one of these. Why does it have to be half Grimm, WHY?!