but i'll compromise and leave this here if you not only post what you're referring to in the actual thread, rather than trying to lead people some place else.... AND invite others to post their own work [this does not mean posting mitch hedberg videos - as much as i love him.. it HAS to be your own] in the thread.
if you post the embed code for a video, i'll embed it.
I enjoyed this set more. It rolled pretty smoothly, and made me laugh a good couple of times. I liked the way you made fun of the stage, the college kids bits ("What happened??" haha), and the dig at yourself for being "too young." The "ooob'd at me" pun was neat, too.
...Annnd now I'll never be able to order at Taco Bell again with a straight face.
Nice to see ya on stage again, dude! Pretty clearly and strongly presented this time (or just a better quality vid, heh), had a good closer (mmm, pretzels), and I loved that almost-sex-offender anecdote.
Thank you so much! Ive been working at it, I hadn't been up in awhile, Mostly due to a college competition I was in, and I didnt do well, but I love it so I got back up! And the pretzel comment was a reference to an earlier comedian working at a mall pretzel place, fun stuff!
I want to post my college competition video but I cant get it, here's a link
You're a pretty funny dude. but I must agree with the above posters, Your shorter stand ups have a smoother flow then the longer.
Maybe interacting with the audience a little more, I've seen a few comedians and I love when they call out the front row and poke fun at them for a bit. So a little less joke telling and more improv and I'll be waiting for your comedy central special :P Good luck man.
This is pretty good. I got some good laughs. The Taco Bell one, and the one with the college kids wanting Taco Bell are my favorites. As a college student in a town with a Taco Bell... you've got it down pat.