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skirsch999
skirsch999
#1   Posted 5 years ago
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This what I think should happen in the next episode, actually this is a script I wrote, I am going to paste it scene by scene, so the first scene now, and the second scene in 20 minutes, and so on here we go:

Still on Burial Mounds Donut Sarge and Tucker are out in a newly found warthog scouting the area…

Donut: (In side seat) Wow, the future isn’t like the present.

Sarge: (Driving) No duh cupcake.

Tucker: (Gunner) No sign of Church, he must be in the past.

Shows them in the distance driving around and zooming out to show an elite looking over them from his vantage point by gun turret, he has an energy sword in hand.

Tucker: WOAH!!! What was that?

Sarge: (Gets out and stands next to gunner position) What?

Tucker: I thought I saw something.

Sarge: Well what was it?

Elite takes cover behind wall.

Tucker: I don’t know, but it was weird.

Sarge: Well I don’t think it exists, just after effects from being sent through time. It is going to take some getting used to.

Donut: Yeah…like how my underwear was white before we got blown up, but now it is all wet and yellow.

Sarge: Ahh…Donut?

Donut: Yeah.

Sarge: Just get back in the warthog.

Tucker: Warthog, is that what you call this thing?

Sarge: Yeah why?

Tucker: (As they are driving away) I always thought it looked more like a puma…

They get back to where they started and the others aren’t there. Out of warthog now.

Sarge: Where are they?

Tucker: This is where we left them.

Donut: Maybe they left a note.

Search around…
MCHammer
MCHammer
#2   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to skirsch999, #1:

I like it so far...but Donut sounds a bit like Caboose.
topher123890
topher123890
#3   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to skirsch999, #1:

Lol, I liked the puma line...
soxman522
soxman522
Sox fan
#4   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to skirsch999, #1:

dude thats wiked good u just make it up or uv been talkin 2 people bout it nice story line i liked the puma line 2
skirsch999
skirsch999
#5   Posted 5 years ago
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The next two scenes I am going to post as one...so here you go:

Meanwhile on the level Midship, a covenant ship, Grif, Simmons, and Caboose are standing in the middle of the disc over the middle of the level. Surrounded by 5 elites, all wielding swords.

Caboose: Where are we?

Griff: I am sick of being thrown from place to place, I am leaving.

Starts to walk away, elite takes a swipe at him, he runs back.

Griff: Or I am staying right here.

Simmons: I think they are covenant.

Caboose: What are covenant.

Griff: Shut up, I don’t think they see us…

Goes black…Elite growls.

Behind Donut, Sarge and Tucker. They are looking over Burial Mounds

Tucker: Well first Church now them. Why do people just disappear on me?

Donut: Probably because-

Sarge: Donut?

Donut: Yeah?

Sarge: Shut up.

Donut turns around to see elite standing there.

Donut: Ahh…guys?

Tucker: SHUT UP!!!

Tucker: Is he always this annoying?

Hear elite growl.

Sarge: Donut I thought I told you to get something to eat. (Turns around)

Sarge: What the-

Tucker: (Turns around) Oh my god…

Goes black hear a swipe with sword.

soxman522
soxman522
Sox fan
#6   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to skirsch999, #5:

thats a wiked good story i like how its more plot based not made for humor
skirsch999
skirsch999
#7   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to soxman522, #6:

i still try to throw jokes in...I mean jokes are what make RVB great
KhaosFlame
KhaosFlame
#8   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to skirsch999, #1:

i really liked the part when donut said "yeah...like how my underwear was white before we got blown up, but now its all wet and yellow"hahah that was funny and yeah he does kinda sound like a caboose
soxman522
soxman522
Sox fan
#9   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to skirsch999, #7:

i no wat u mean but in these late episodes there mostly goin for the laughs rather than the story
and he does sound like caboose
skirsch999
skirsch999
#10   Posted 5 years ago
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Time for the next scene:

Back on Midship same situation as before.

Caboose: (Whispering) I am going to try and talk to them. (Turns around to elite) Hello there what is my name? Oh wait, I mean, what is your name?

(1) Elite from other side of room: (In a growling voice) He is just a dumb rookie.

Out of no where someone drops down behind leader elite (1) and punches him in the back. Guy disappears into shadows.

Another elite: CATCH HIM!!!

Goes into shadow, noises of a fight. A minute later Tex is walking out being guarded by the Elite.

Caboose: It’s Tex!!! Good to see you Tex!!! What’s up.

Tex: (Grumbling and sarcastically) It’s good to see you too, Caboose.

Back on Burial Mounds.

Sarge: Well this is it.

Donut: What?

Sarge: We have two options…1. We can run away and try to lose it, or B We can get in the warthog-

Tucker: (mumbling) Puma.

Sarge: -and crush it. I vote B.

Donut: B as in plan B or B as in Bubblebath…I like bubblebath.

Two more elites drop in behind them.

Sarge: Today is a good day to die, charge.

Tucker: No dude…today is a good day to surrender.

Donut: No I think today is a good day to-

Sarge: Donut, for the love of god, SHUT UP.

Blackness.
soxman522
soxman522
Sox fan
#11   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to skirsch999, #10:

it just gets better and better
MCHammer
MCHammer
#12   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to skirsch999, #10:

I like where this is going...
soxman522
soxman522
Sox fan
#13   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to MCHammer, #12:

ya me 2
skirsch999
skirsch999
#14   Posted 5 years ago
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Next scene (this one is a short scene so post itme till next will be less time):

Back to the covenant ship.

Caboose: So nice covenant person-thingy…what’s up.

Rookie Elite looks up.

Ranking Elite: Don’t fall for their primitive tricks.

Rookie elite looks at ranking elite: What he wanted to know what was up?

Turns to Caboose: Earth is up there, but it won’t be for long, because we have a hole plan to destroy it.

Tex: Howzat?

Rookie: Like this: First we-

Rookie gets hit on the back of the head and knocked out.

Ranking elite: Traitor.

Rookie on ground: Sorry…uhhh…Now will you let me back up.

Ranking Elite: Fine, but if that happens again…(Takes a swipe with sword)

Caboose: (whispering to Elite) Is he always like that?

Rookie: Like what?

Caboose: Mean to other people.

Rookie: Only in the morning.

Caboose: (Turns to ranking elite) Looks like someone has their grumpy pants on.

Hear a sword slash and screen goes black.
soxman522
soxman522
Sox fan
#15   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to skirsch999, #14:

nice line by caboose thats awsome
skirsch999
skirsch999
#16   Posted 5 years ago
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Next scene:

Sarge Donut and Tucker back on burial mounds. In tunnels.

Sarge: What are those thingys ya got there?

Elite (Brandishing sword)

Sarge: Oh, I see.

Tucker: (Pinned to wall by elite) Ah no! Just let me go. No wait kill me, but just stop it.

Elite slashes him down.

Tucker: Come on that just hurt there is no way that could kill me.

Donut further down the hall talking to elite.

Donut: Ahh….Truth.

Elite: Where is Earth?

Donut: Darn it, I always get fooled.

Elite: ANSWER.

Donut: I don’t know. Ask Sarge.

Elite: Sarge?
skirsch999
skirsch999
#17   Posted 5 years ago
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Next scene for my few and loyal fan:

Sarge Donut and Tucker back on burial mounds. In tunnels.

Sarge: What are those thingys ya got there?

Elite (Brandishing sword)

Sarge: Oh, I see.

Tucker: (Pinned to wall by elite) Ah no! Just let me go. No wait kill me, but just stop it.

Elite slashes him down.

Tucker: Come on that just hurt there is no way that could kill me.

Donut further down the hall talking to elite.

Donut: Ahh….Truth.

Elite: Where is Earth?

Donut: Darn it, I always get fooled.

Elite: ANSWER.

Donut: I don’t know. Ask Sarge.

Elite: Sarge?
ievi
ievi
#18   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to skirsch999, #1:


Wow, this is really good. do you have any real writing experience?
skirsch999
skirsch999
#19   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to ievi, #18:

not really I am just trying to have some fun

Next scene:

Back on ship. Griff and Simmons are shoved back onto disc over middle of level.

Tex: Back so soon?

Griff: Shut up…girl.

Tex punches Griff.

Griff: Sorry, I forgot, please don’t hurt me.

Simmons: You are such a baby.

Griff: NO I am not.

Simmons: Yeah

Griff: How do you like it. (Punches Simmons)

Simmons: That didn’t hurt.

Griff: Well how about this? (Punches him again)

Simmons: Still no.

Griff: Well how about this? (Punches Simmons as it fades to blackness)
skirsch999
skirsch999
#20   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to skirsch999, #19:

This is the last scene for today but if you want the full script send me a message. I plan to have another bunch of scenes as a sequel to this tommorrow:

Shows a banshee flying into base on coagulation on (Blood Gulch Halo 2) Elites, Tucker, Donut, Sarge and the banshee are all in hangar under base.

Sarge: Why do I have the feeling like I know where we are.

Tucker: I know what you mean.

Donut: Where are we though?

Sarge I don’t know, but keep your mouth shut for our sake.

Tucker: SO how did you get the pink armor anyway?

Donut: It is not pink it is light red.

Sarge: (Coughs) Pink

Donut: I got blown up, and when I was revived they let me take a lighter shade of red .

Tucker: Oh…I still think it is pink.

Donut: Well Mr. Blue guy-

Tucker: MY name is Tucker.

Donut: Well Tucker…

Sarge: Shut up Donut for the last time your armor is pink.

Donut: (mumbling) Just you wait and see. (walk up on top of base)

Sarge: I know this place…

Fades out.
MdVyNe938
MdVyNe938
#21   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to KhaosFlame, #8:

Yes, you should change Dount there, and replace him with Caboose.
skirsch999
skirsch999
#22   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to MdVyNe938, #21:

Yeah I saw my mistake, but as the scenes go on I think I make him more Donutish
soxman522
soxman522
Sox fan
#23   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to skirsch999, #22:

this is really good u shud keep posting the story and u shud make him more donutish
skirsch999
skirsch999
#24   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to soxman522, #23:

if u read my last reply you would know that there will be another forum called a fans RVB episode...part 2
skirsch999
skirsch999
#25   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to skirsch999, #24:

actually I will continue here: next scene:

On Coagulation surrounded by gaurds.

Sarge: Well I guess I saw that one coming.

Tucker: What?

Sarge: Coming back to our very own box canyon.

Tucker: Yeah. You ever get that feeling like you are at home, but you aren’t?

Sarge: What?

Tucker: Oh Nevermind.

Sarge: What, you want to talk about it?

Tucker: No

Sarge: You Sure.

Tucker: Yeah.

Sarge…anyway, where is pretty in pink?

Tucker: What?

Sarge: Where’s Donut?

Tucker: Oh…He said something about a bath, but I am not sure.

Sarge: (Calling into base) DONUT!!!!

Donut: (from in base not visible) Yeah.

Sarge: Get up here.

Donut: OKAY!!!

You see the back of Sarge and Tucker, but you can’t see Donut. Sarge and Tucker Turn around and wuickly turn back.

Sarge: How many times have I told you we are not in Spain!!!

Donut: You told me to get up here as qui-

Tucker: Yeah, but really man put on some clothes.
Donut: Well my clothes are in the laundry all I have is my old red armor if it is still here from when we used to live here.

Sarge: Well put it on.

Donut: Okay. I’ll Be Right Back.

Tucker: I am scarred for life.

Sarge: It is just disgusting.

Tucker: I know.

Sarge: The fact that he and I are going to have the same color armor again…disgusting…

Tucker: Wait…I thought…

Fades out.
soxman522
soxman522
Sox fan
#26   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to skirsch999, #25:

dude thats wiked good its a wiked good staory and has some awsome lines u shud rite another episode
skirsch999
skirsch999
#27   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to soxman522, #26:

the last scene was the beginning of one
soxman522
soxman522
Sox fan
#28   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to skirsch999, #27:

awsome but next time right it all together because i got confused i thought they were all different episodes
skirsch999
skirsch999
#29   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to soxman522, #28:

kk I m working on new one now
soxman522
soxman522
Sox fan
#30   Posted 5 years ago
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In reply to skirsch999, #29:

nice i cant wait untill its finished
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