My first video in my seriesMy awesome video Yes, hello again people. This is my video I made just today. It's the first in a series of shorts that I plan to make. It may have terrible acting, camera views and some not high quality sound but I only hope to improve with practice So constructive criticism is always helpful. So thanks to you few who will watch this.
EDIT: I changed the link. It should go to the video now, and to the account that I'm deciding to stick to.
My first video in my seriesMy awesome video Yes, hello again people. This is my video I made just today. It's the first in a series of shorts that I plan to make. It may have terrible acting, camera views and some not high quality sound but I only hope to improve with practice So constructive criticism is always helpful. So thanks to you few who will watch this.
EDIT: I changed the link. It should go to the video now, and to the account that I'm deciding to stick to.
I have a few tips for you to help you in your next video:
1. Do multiple angles for scenes. It is very hard to make a shot last longer than 5-10 seconds. Since I'm assuming you will be using the camera to shoot the scenes and be perspective of the clone, you could have had the camera inside to box looking at you while you were reading off the paper. The intro scene could have also used some more shots of you walking outside of the door and retrieving the package. Overall, just try to keep shots short. Watch some RT Shorts and really study the shots they make and see how long they last and why and when they cut.
2. Acting is something that is hard to get right. The more important part is a good script. Once you tailor a script to how an actor behaves/acts makes acting easier to do. Practice makes perfect for this stuff. You've really got to see where it falls and where it succeeds and learn from that.
Hope I helped and wasn't too harsh! Much luck to you! Film making is very fun and rewarding.
Thank you. And not to harsh. I know what you mean. I'll try and get someone else to help me next time with the camera so I'm not so worried about all the different things so I can focus on the acting a bit more. But thank you for the constructive criticism
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I have a few tips for you to help you in your next video:
1. Do multiple angles for scenes. It is very hard to make a shot last longer than 5-10 seconds. Since I'm assuming you will be using the camera to shoot the scenes and be perspective of the clone, you could have had the camera inside to box looking at you while you were reading off the paper. The intro scene could have also used some more shots of you walking outside of the door and retrieving the package. Overall, just try to keep shots short. Watch some RT Shorts and really study the shots they make and see how long they last and why and when they cut.
2. Acting is something that is hard to get right. The more important part is a good script. Once you tailor a script to how an actor behaves/acts makes acting easier to do. Practice makes perfect for this stuff. You've really got to see where it falls and where it succeeds and learn from that.
Hope I helped and wasn't too harsh! Much luck to you! Film making is very fun and rewarding.
Post edited 4/12/12 3:25PM
I'll try and get someone else to help me next time with the camera so I'm not so worried about all the different things so I can focus on the acting a bit more.
But thank you for the constructive criticism