DanielZhu1

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  • Activity

    • Reboot,

      3 years ago

      DanielZhu1

      I'm thinking of rebooting my profile soon, I'll still have the same name and picture, and I'll make sure to keep all my friends though.

    • chapter

      3 years ago

      DanielZhu1

      do you think including a chapter that describes some of his lessons in detail would be acceptable?

    • going back

      3 years ago

      DanielZhu1

      I got some reviews from some people, and with them I will be improving the 1st part of the story. Things will be changed, and even new chapters will be added. Wish me luck

    • Completion of the 1st arc

      3 years ago

      DanielZhu1

      Well, its finally here. I hope to get a lot of reviews, after which I can improve my story writing. Give it a read guys. I really hope you'll all like it.
      www.fanfiction.net/s/9860028/1/RWBY-The-Journeys...

    • story

      3 years ago

      DanielZhu1

      I'm going to hold off on posting until I finish the current story arc. This time I'm going to make sure its high quality.

    • fanfiction

      3 years ago

      DanielZhu1

      www.fanfiction.net/s/9860028/8/RWBY-The-Journeys...
      If I get any reviews on it I'll make some improvements, if not I'll repost as is.

    • delay

      3 years ago

      DanielZhu1

      I've got a big English paper to do, so my updates may be delayed.

    • Comments and reviews

      3 years ago

      DanielZhu1

      I'm not getting nearly enough
      Anyone know anyway to help me get more?

    • RWBY side story, the journies of Lan ch7 part 6

      3 years ago

      DanielZhu1

      Exhausted, Lan collapsed onto his back and stared at the Grimm with a grin on his face and the sweet taste of victory (and blood) in his mouth.
      The Grimm gave one agonized cry and collapsed onto its back, its armor falling off it in different sized chunks and disintegrating on the grass. In a few minutes all the armor had fallen off and a man sized piece of blackness was all that remained there.
      Lan yelled out in triumph, and the wolves that could move ran over and began covering him with congratulations and saliva (mostly saliva).
      "Ah, guys' Lan said, brushing away the many tongues "I couldn't have done it without out yo'”'
      He then noticed that the blackness was peeling away from the man-shaped form, revealing flesh and blood beneath. In a few seconds the shadows were gone and lying there was an injured old man with a long beard.
      The wolves growled and began to make their way towards the figure, but Lan sat up and called them back. He didn't feel anything dangerous from the old man and had felt the Grimm's presence disappear. This man wasn't dangerous, in fact he felt familiar, very very familiar.

    • RWBY side story, the journies of Lan ch7 part 5

      3 years ago

      DanielZhu1

      Responding to Lan's scathing comment, Ernest forced himself back onto his feet and turned to stare at the boy. Lan pointed to himself, pointed to the Grimm, pointed to Ernest and each of the wolves and then made a circling motion with his arms. A normal person wouldn't have understood this at all, but being together for two years, Lan and the wolf pack understood each other. So Ernest understood that Lan needed him to distract the Grimm. Barking in understanding, Ernest then turned and howled at the pack to get them organized again, and then ran into the fray.
      Planting his feet firmly into the ground, Lan began channeling the aura in his body into his right arm. Byakko had warned Lan about overusing his aura, but now wasn't the time for reservation. It was do or die. The wolves were organized once again, and even though there were fewer of them, they made up for it with their increased ferocity and desperation.
      Lan had saturated his right arm with as much aura as he could muster and found that he still had aura left in him.
      "Can't waste my one attack' Lan thought "If I can't fit the aura into my right arm I'll send it to other place.'
      Lan filled his left arm with aura as well, and placed the little bit left into his legs to give himself an explosive dash. He was ready now and began watching for an opening.
      The wolves were visibly exhausted now and were barely able to keep the Grimm off balance, many of them succumbing to wounds and falling to the ground. Noticing that Lan was ready, Ernest barked out a command to the remaining wolves. The wolves then leapt away from the Grimm and began glowing red, putting in the last motes of their aura. Before the Grimm could react, the wolves began using the multi-directional aura tackle again. The attacks were so fast that the Grimm couldn't even react; it was being hit from every direction and was struggling just to keep its balance. Seeing this, Ernest and 3 other wolves went for the coup de grace, and launched a synchronized attack, which struck all four of the Grimm's limbs and finally threw it off balance.
      "Thanks guys' Lan thought, pulling back his arm,
      He then launched himself forward, exploding off the ground with a blue glow and flew through the air towards the Grimm. The Grimm saw the attack coming and tried to bring up his arms in time to block the blow, but it was too late. Lan threw his punch and connected with the barrier surrounding the crystal. The two energies collided with each, forming a storm of blue and reddish-black light where they met. Lan's arm screamed in pain as the energy from the barrier tried to force it away, put Lan pushed forward, ignoring the pain and focusing only on crushing his enemy. Cracks were beginning to appear in the energy field now, but the aura in Lan's right arm was beginning to dissipate as well.
      Yelling out a war cry, Lan pushed his arm forward. The barrier exploded in a flash of blue and red light, sending the surrounding wolves flying in all directions and staggering the Grimm. Lan cried out in pain as he felt every bone in his right arm shatter, but he gritted his teeth and fixed his eyes on his opponent. Running forward with a yell, Lan raised his left arm and threw a second blow. This time his fist connected firmly with the crystal and discharged all of offensive aura he had stored in it. The Grimm was blasted backwards and slammed into a tree in the edge of the glade.
      Low on aura, Lan's body couldn't take the force to the blast either, and as a result the bones in his left arm were also shattered.
      Lan stood there, his breath ragged and his arms hanging uselessly at his sides. He looked up towards the Grimm, smiling, but his smile fell once he saw the Grimm start to rise. The crystal on its chest was now cracked in many places and was leaking reddish-black light, but it was still intact and the Grimm was still alive.
      Lan began panicking, both of his arms were broken, and he couldn't risk damaging his legs in case he needed to run away.
      "I've got to finish this!' Lan thought "But what can I use to'”!'
      It was then that he remembered something doctor Krueger told him.
      "The hardest bone on your body is your forehead; a fist would break if it came in contact with it.'
      "Alright' Lan thought straightening up "This is it'
      Flowing the last motes of aura to his skull, Lan began to charge forwards towards the Grimm, who was still struggling to get up. Yelling, Lan slammed his left foot into the ground and blasted himself towards the Grimm head first. At that moment the Grimm brought its head up to see the situation...and saw a blue meteorite heading straight at it.
      The Grimm struggled to get up, trying to get out of the way or at least block the blow, but it was still too exhausted from the previous attacks and could barely move.
      Lan's head collided with the crystal in Grimm's chest, light shooting out in every direction as the cracks in the crystal widened. The Grimm struggled against the attack and began pushing back.
      "There's something you should always remember monster!' Lan yelled as he pushed forward "The heroes always win!'
      Lan suddenly felt energy swelling up inside of him, flowing throughout his body and then heading towards his skull, filling it with power he never knew he had and overwhelmed what little energy the crystal in the Grimm's chest still possessed.
      With a yell, Lan thrust his head forward and shot all the energy out. The energy burst forward, shattering the crystal in the Grimm chest, shooting right through it. The energy then widened and blasted through a vast area of forest behind the Grimm. The Grimm stood there twitching; a fist sized hole in its chest, behind it was a path of destruction, the forest torn apart.

  • About Me

    I hope my story can live up even a little bit to the standards of the creators of RWBY

  • Comments (24)

    • RadioShower

      3 years ago

      Nnnnnnneeeevvvvveeerrrmmmmiinnnddd.

    • RadioShower

      3 years ago

      Bro, I see you're writing a story. If I were you, I would sign up on FanFiction.net and post your stories there. It would be much more accessible.

    • EthenBoswort

      3 years ago

      Dude you have a Brilliant Mindoro have come up with these amazing RWBY stories! I mean you could write the books for RWBY if they do make them into books.

      • DanielZhu1

        3 years ago

        In fact introducing that one character may take up an entire chapter in itself, but it will help emphasize something later on... oh well I'll see.

      • EthenBoswort

        3 years ago

        I recamend you adding another child to the story, one who is hurt and comes stumbling into the town missing an arm and his other arm is to badly broken to use anymore so the village engineer and blacksmith make the boy new arms, he is about the same age as Lan, but he is the only survivor of the Grimm army that destroyed his village. Do you think that will work?

      • DanielZhu1

        3 years ago

        What can I do to make my stories better. and also can you recommend my stories?

    • stieben117

      3 years ago

      Is your profile pic a animation on Lan?

      • stieben117

        3 years ago

        Oh okay, it's pretty cool looking!

      • DanielZhu1

        3 years ago

        no, he is the secondary portagonist of Asura's wrath: Yasha, but Lan's future abilities will have a lot in common with yasha

    • ubetterhope FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold

      4 years ago

      hey you know they used your nun-chuck idea on the latest RWBY right?

      • xRyu

        4 years ago

        You do realise how long it takes to create 3d animations at this quality?

      • DanielZhu1

        4 years ago

        no, sun wukong in the journey west really did use a staff, and it only makes sense to let it become nunchucks with guns on the end, I think monty thought of that himself, (or another member of rooster teeth,)

      • EvanRB

        4 years ago

        Yeah that was weird when I saw that and thought of this guy

    • Radius55 FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold Site Admin

      4 years ago

      It's fine if you leave suggestions for productions, but please do not comment on every staff member with them. Only a handful are actually involved in any given project. So do your homework and find out which ones you should talk to before you spam them.

      • DanielZhu1

        3 years ago

        Okay, thank you for your advice.

      • Caiti FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold Velvet Scarlatina

        4 years ago

        It's okay to have ideas, mate, but instead of pushing them down our throats - make the content yourself. You'll most likely have better luck doing that anyway as Rooster Teeth is a huge production company and the RWBY team already have a very clear vision of the future volumes. I will not recommend you, I'm sorry. What I do recommend is that you create your own content. I wish you all the best.

      • DanielZhu1

        4 years ago

        okay, well I found one staff member who does talk to me, so maybe I can strike up a friendship, then maybe they can recommend me, on that note would you like to be friends with me?

      • Radius55 FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold Site Admin

        4 years ago

        Comments and Twitter are just about the only way. And, yes, some staff rarely read either. Nothing you can do.

      • DanielZhu1

        4 years ago

        Okay, just two last things, one how can I EFFECTIVELY communicate with members of the team. and two can you please stop referring to it as spam? It's giving me the willies in my stomach.

      • Radius55 FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold Site Admin

        4 years ago

        Yes, I read the post. Can't comment either way as I'm not that interested in RWBY. Just Google RWBY production team and focus on them. But spamming every staff member makes you look unprofessional.

      • DanielZhu1

        4 years ago

        sorry, I just thought that some of them may be able to recommend me. RWBY is just something that really resonated with me, and I just wanted to help. In fact, have you read my post? I think you would find some of the ideas good.

      • Radius55 FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold Site Admin

        4 years ago

        Almost all of them have their real names on their profile and a short description of what they do at RT. You're spamming web designers, store managers, IT guys, and people working on completely different projects. There are only three or four people with creative license for RWBY, and they can be found with a simple Google search. So please stop spamming every staff profile you see.

      • DanielZhu1

        4 years ago

        Yes, I know, but seeing as a lot of them don't use their real names on their rooster teeth accounts, some people in other projects may be able to recommend me to them, and they don't check their posts very often and I want to know what they think of my ideas.

      • DanielZhu1

        4 years ago

        It's just that many of them don't put their real names on their rooster teeth profiles and/or use strange pictures.

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