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    • TheNeosonic

      WD: Cameron Issue#3 Part 3

      9 years ago


      Page 18
      1- Jade (a black female, with long, dark hair and green highlights, her clothes are mainly green) and Genesis (white male, large stature, strong build, wears jeans and a muscle shirt) come running around the corner.

      2- Cameron pulls out a small communicator out of her pocket.

      Cameron: Bobo, lock onto my position and bring the Skylark.

      3- Maverick, Jade, and Genesis are standing together and blocking the path.

      Maverick: It’s over.
      Cameron: Not over, just interrupted.
      Jade: Is this the wall?
      Cameron: Hey Lady, the names Cameron.

      4- Genesis is looking her over.

      Genesis: I wish I ran into walls like that.
      Cameron: I’ll bet you walk you into a lot of walls.

      5- Jade is laughing.

      Jade: Wow, she knows you.
      Genesis: Whatever.

      Page 19
      1- Maverick steps forward.

      Maverick: Ok, come with us, we would like to ask you some questions.
      Cameron: Oh no, no questions today.



      2- Genesis and Jade step forward as well.

      Maverick: You can’t beat us all.
      Cameron: Don’t have to.

      3- Show the Skylark at the top of the debris hovering at the end of the alley, with the cockpit open.

      Cameron: Gotta fly.

      4- Show Cameron run down the alley.

      5- Maverick, Jade and Genesis run after her.

      6- Cameron gets to the top of the debris.

      7- Cameron leaps into the Skylark.

      Page 20
      1- Show the Skylark fly off and the Defenders standing at the top of the debris.

      Genesis: Let’s get back to headquarters.
      Jade: Come on.

      2- The Serenity headquarters is underwater, it is still a similar design to the other headquarters. Star, Echo, Maverick, Jade, and Genesis are all talking in the control center.

      Echo: Who was she?
      Maverick: She said her name was Cameron.
      Echo: That is it?
      Maverick: Yeah.

      3- Star goes over to the main computer.

      Star: I’ll put it in and see what the computer brings up.
      Echo: While you’re at it, send a message to the other Defenders and let them know about it.
      Star: Got it.

      4- On the view screen is Falco.

      Falco: Uh, yeah, we had a run in with her earlier in the day.
      Echo: And you didn’t tell us about it?
      Falco: We were looking into it further.

      Page 21
      1- Same scene as four on page twenty.

      Falco: Did you find anything?
      Maverick: Personal humiliation was about it.
      Falco: I hear yah.

      2- Show Star at the computer.

      Star: Without more information, the computer is useless.

      3- Show the view screen again.

      Falco: We’ll keep searching, and let you know this time if we find anything.
      Echo: Good.

      4- The view screen is off now, and the Defenders are in a circle talking.

      Jade: Do you think we will ever see her again?
      Maverick: Count on it.

      Page 22
      1- Show Cameron on the Solstice in the hangar bay with Bobo.

      Bobo: More problems?
      Cameron: Just not my day. I’ll meet you on the bridge, I need to get changed.

      2- Show Bobo and Cameron (she is wearing tight spandex pants and a tight tank-top) on the Bridge of the ship.

      Bobo: So now what?
      Cameron: Well we still need those supplies.

      3- Cameron walks up to a Navigation map (it is of the Earth, the Earth looks a little different, I have a concept)

      Cameron: We will just have to find somewhere else to lay low and get supplies.

      4- Show Cameron with a large smile.

      Cameron: How about beach front property.

      5- Show on the Navigation map Australia



      End of page caption: Until Next Time.

    • TheNeosonic

      WD: Cameron Issue#3 Part 2

      9 years ago

      Page 9
      1- Cameron leaps forward toward the door.

      2- She is rolling forward in the air; while in the air, she is grabbing her two disruptors from under her jacket.

      3- She is blasting the ceiling and wall as she lands on the back of her neck and upper back to continue the roll.

      4- The ceiling and wall block the path to the door.



      5- Show an amazement look on everyone’s face.

      Maximus: How did she do that?
      Mace: How did she hit you?
      Falco: I’m in love.

      6- Show Falco moving extremely fast and arrive at the back door on the other side. Falco is speaking into his wrist communicator.

      Falco: She’s gone.

      Page 10
      1- Show Falco and his team on the Stingray (the inside has the flight controls at the front and many other work stations along the sides, at the entrance is an arsenal)(also on the ship is Shine, she is a white female, she is blind, she wears a bright white robe with a hood that she wears and a bright white cloth over her eyes, she carries a white staff)

      Falco: I am trying to figure out how she kicked me and how she knew I was behind her?
      Mace: It was pretty impressive.
      Shine: Figures it would be a woman to show you guys up.

      2- Show Mace working on a computer.

      Mace: I am trying to track her. She must have had a vehicle nearby.
      Maximus: Any luck?
      Mace: Not yet.
      Falco: Keep trying.

      3- Show Cameron in a small ship (The Skylark, small ship maybe two or three people could fit in it. I have a concept design) flying toward a large ship. (The Solstice, it is a very large ship, like a flying base and it is her home, it can hold it’s positions in the air, I have a concept design)

      4- Show the Skylark in a hangar bay on the back of the ship, it is large enough to hold maybe three small ships or two medium sized ships.

      5- She walks off an elevator on to the bridge of the ship, it is a fairly large room, many computers along the wall, and a main navigation area toward the front, Bobo (A small boxy robot, he can extend his legs and arms) is near the navigation computer.

      Bobo: How did everything go?
      Cameron: Worse than usual. Ran into some snags, and didn’t get any supplies.
      Bobo: Now what?
      Cameron: We can’t stay here, they will be looking for me, I’m sure. Set course for Serenity.

      Page 11
      1- Falco’s team is in the main control center at their Headquarters in Tombstone. (very similar to the HQ in Cadillac, except their base is on the outskirts of town in an old mine, for future reference)

      Falco: I can’t believe she got away.
      Maximus: She’s good.
      Mace: Yeah, we probably should let everyone else know what has happened.



      2- Same scene as 1

      Falco: Why?
      Mace: If she has a ship, she may travel. This will let everyone know to keep an eye out.
      Shine: He has a point.

      3- Show Falco standing next to Maximus.

      Falco: Let’s see what we can find first.
      Mace: Alright.

      Page 12
      1- Show the Solstice flying over Serenity.

      2- Cameron is talking to Bobo, on the bridge.

      Cameron: Put us up high so no one sees us, I’ll head down from there and try to get some supplies.
      Bobo: Yes.

      3- Show the Skylark flying down toward Serenity.

      4- The Skylark lands in an alley.

      5- Cameron is standing on the sidewalk of a street, it is relatively empty, the buildings are mostly vacant. She has a sorta sad look on her face.

      Cameron: Even the greatest cities still have slums.

      Page 13
      1- Maverick is walking down a different street in a different, nicer part of the town.

      Maverick: It’s been quiet this morning, what a relief.

      2- Show Cameron enter into a Resource shop just down the street from Maverick.

      3- As Maverick reaches the corner of the store, he hears Cameron.

      Cameron: Thanks for the supplies, I won’t forget you, promise.

      4- Show Cameron now running from the Resource shop, with supplies in hand, and the shopkeeper standing at the entrance yelling at her.

      Shopkeeper: Stop! Bring that back! Somebody help! Thief!

      5- Maverick is running after her.

      Maverick: Hey! Come back here!

      Page14
      1-Show Maverick stop running and pick-up a rock, once they turn down an alley, it is a wide alley with a large overhang at the end of the alley.

      Maverick: I got to stop the chase.

      2- Small shot of the rock being charged in his hand.

      3- Maverick throws the rock and hit’s the overhang.

      4- The overhang explodes and falls to rubble, blocking the path for Cameron.

      Page 15
      1- Cameron turns around toward Maverick.

      Cameron: Neat trick.
      Maverick: Why are stealing?
      Cameron: A girls gotta eat.

      2- Show Cameron looking intensely at Maverick.

      Cameron: And you are blocking the only exit.
      Maverick: Just give the stuff back, and then we can talk.
      Cameron: You can talk, I’m leaving.

      3- Maverick blocks her path.

      Maverick: I can’t let you do that.
      Cameron: You won’t have a choice.

      4- Cameron drops the supplies, and grabs his arm and throws him aside.

      5- Maverick then grabs her by the shoulder, at which she then grabs his hand.

      6- Cameron flips Maverick over and kicks him down.

      7- Maverick is laying on the ground.

      Maverick: Alright, that’s it.

      Page16
      1-Maverick gets up and punches at her, she dodges it.

      2- Maverick takes another swing and she dodges that.

      3- She grabs him, jumps up while holding him and kicks him in the chest.

      4-He falls into the wall.

      Maverick: Nice move.
      Cameron: I’ve got more.
      Maverick: You’re gonna need ‘em.

      5- Maverick grabs her and spins her around.

      6- He releases her toward the wall.



      Page 17
      1- Cameron runs up the wall and flips around so she lands on the ground facing Maverick.

      2- Maverick then spin kicks her and she is then knocked over onto the ground. She looks up at Maverick with a smile.

      Cameron: That’s more like it, put some effort into it.

      3- She gets up, grabs Maverick and spins him around.
      4- She pins him against the wall, and his wrist communicator goes off.

      Communicator: Hey Mav, where you at?
      Maverick: I kinda hit a wall.

      5- Maverick pushes off the wall and knocks her back.

      6- Maverick grabs her jacket.

      7- Cameron slides out of the jacket and spins away.

    • TheNeosonic

      WD: Cameron Issue #3, Part 1

      9 years ago

      World Defenders: Cameron Issue #3

      Page 1
      1- Intro Page
      World Defenders: Cameron
      Show a picture of Cameron (short, dirty blonde hair, brown leather bomber jacket, white blouse, and tight blue jeans, she is a rather attractive woman (under her jacket behind her back is where she has her two special pulse disruptors)) standing with her two pulse disruptors (they are specially designed, I have concept designs).
      Created and Written By: Michael Johnson
      Art By:

      Page 2
      1- Show an alley in Tombstone. (city where Falco’s team is) Cameron is walking in the alley.

      Cameron: World isn’t what it used to be.

      2- Show two thugs come up behind her with clubs in hand.

      3- (Close-up of her face) Her eyes widen.

      4- She spins the opposite of one of the thugs swinging his club, and she spins along his arm, grabbing the club with her left hand and hitting the guy back with her right hand.

      5- The other thug looks at her in surprise.

      Thug: Don’t make me hurt you, just give me anything that you got.

      6- She looks at him with a puzzled sarcastic look.

      Cameron: Ok, sure.

      Page 3
      1- She reaches back under her jacket.

      2- She pulls out one of her disruptors, and points it at him.

      Cameron: This?!

      3- Cameron blasts the ground right in front of the thugs.

      4- Both thugs are running down the alley.

      Cameron: Muggings used to be such an art form, those guys really lacked the finesse.

      Page 4
      1- Cameron is walking down the street now, heading towards the local Resource Shop. (It is a grocery store and miscellaneous store)

      Cameron: Need to get supplies.



      2- Cameron is outside the store and looking through the window, in the window she can see another group of thugs robbing the place.

      Cameron: Man, is there a convention in town or what?

      3- Cameron is in the store now, there are four thugs with electric batons (short club that are electrical at the top of the club).

      One thug: Hey guys look at what we got here.
      Another thug: We must be lucky.

      4- Show Cameron with a half smile.

      Cameron: Or really, really unlucky.

      Page 5
      1- Shows one thug rush her, and show her side step him, and use a spin kick to his back.

      2- Two thugs come at her from opposite sides, she hits one thugs hand upward and grabs the others arm.

      3- She takes the thug that she is holding and makes him shock the other guy.

      4- She then takes that guy and whips him around and throws him out the door.

      5- (close-up of her face) Her eyes widen.

      6- The last thug rushes her from behind, she jumps and does a forward spin, with the heel of her foot swing up into his chin and knock him back.

      7- She lands with on one knee, one foot, and one hand on the ground, she looks up at the first thug she hit in the back, and just glares at him.

      8- The thug drops his baton and runs.

      Page 6
      1- The shopkeeper is in total awe, and just looks at her.

      2- Cameron starts grabbing some food and other supplies.

      Cameron: Well, I guess this will suffice as payment for saving you and this shop.

      3- The shopkeeper looks surprised.

      Shopkeeper: Now you’re robbing me?
      Cameron: A girl’s gotta eat. I mean it is the least you could do?

      4- In walks Falco, Maximus, and Mace (Black male, he has dark hair, T-shirt and jeans).

      Mace: Don’t move!
      Falco: Who the heck is she?



      5- Show Cameron look at them and roll her eyes.

      Cameron: The names Cameron and you guys are kinda late, I already took care of the thieves.
      Maximus: All I see is you with a handful of stuff.
      Cameron: Bad timing, that’s all.

      6- Maximus steps forward with a very serious look.

      Maximus: I am afraid so.

      Page 7
      1- Show Cameron put the stuff on the counter.

      Cameron: You know what? It’s a little crowded in here, and I prefer a party of one, see yah.

      2- Show Cameron heading for the back door.

      Falco: I don’t think so.

      3- Show Falco moving extremely fast. (his power suit gives him the ability to move at great speeds)

      4- Falco is now standing in front of Cameron blocking the door.

      Falco: You’re not going anywhere.

      5- Show a look of annoyance on Cameron’s face.

      Cameron: You aren’t that charming.

      Page 8
      1- She bends her knee up, as to kick him.

      2- Show Falco moving fast coming around behind her.

      3- (close-up of Cameron’s face) Her eyes widen.

      4- She then thrusts her leg back.

      5- She kicks Falco back after he stops behind her.

    • TheNeosonic

      WD: Nicky Ray Issue#2, Part3

      9 years ago

      Page18
      1- In walks Darkhart and two other bots, Angie is unconscious.

      Darkhart: Hello Nicky Ray.

      2- Show the look of fear on Nicky’s face.

      3- Darkhart waves with two fingers toward Nicky, and one of the bots aims a stun disruptor.

      4- The blast hits Nicky and for a second he is covered by a bluish like field.

      5- Darkhart is walking out of the room.

      Darkhart: Bring the boy.
      Bot: What about the woman?
      Darkhart: Insignificant.


      6- One of the bots is carrying Nicky out of the room while a bot follows him and one of them is about to blast Angie, when Nitro comes crashing through the window.

      Page19
      1- Nitro blasts the one aiming at Angie with his phase disruptors.

      2- He dodges the blast from the second one, by rolling out of the way.

      3- Nitro shoots the head off that one from the crouched position out of the roll.

      4- Nitro checks Angie to make sure she is alright and looks toward the door that the bot went out.

      5- Show Nitro chasing down the stairs into the dining room.

      6- The bot has dashed out the door and Nitro is soon behind.

      7- View from outside showing the other bots blasting toward the doorway and Nitro diving out of the way just in time.

      Page20
      1- Wheeler and Carl come racing down the driveway blasting the bots.

      2- Nitro is returning fire from behind the cover of the door.

      3- The two ships take off and leave the remaining couple bots.

      4- All the bots are destroyed and Nitro has met outside with Carl and Wheeler.

      Nitro: Where’s you…
      Wheeler: Gabe called us after you helped him.
      Nitro: Where is Nicky!?

      5- Show Darkhart entering his ship and looking over toward the Defenders, while the bot takes Nicky on to the ship.

      6- Show Nitro look over and see Darkhart and raise his weapon to blast him.

      7- Show Darkhart with a burst of light from his visor, blast just in front of Nitro.

      Page21
      1- The ship is gone and Nitro, Carl, and Wheeler are laying on the ground.

      2- Nitro is the first to get up.

      Nitro: NO! I’m going after them!
      Carl: We don’t know where they went, how are you going to find them?
      Nitro: It doesn’t matter, I won’t lose anybody else, I can’t!

      3- Carl has gotten up and is helping Wheeler up.

      Carl: You can’t let past incidents cloud you judgment. Let’s go back to base and let the other Defenders know what has happened. This isn’t a normal kid to warrant Darkhart’s involvement. We should get help.
      Nitro: No, I am going. I won’t stop till I find Nicky Ray!

      4- Show Nitro fly off into the air, Carl and Wheeler watch as he leaves.

      Wheeler: Now what are we going to do?
      Carl: The only thing we can; let the Defenders know what has transpired.

      Page22
      1- In the Holo-con Room, Carl is talking to the other Defenders and explaining the situation. He looks concerned.

      Carl: So he has left with out any idea where he is going.
      Star: I don’t understand.
      Carl: I think it has something to do with blaming himself for the death of the Vice-Director.

      2- Show Maverick.

      Maverick: He can’t do anything right, and now he’s basically awol.

      3- Show Echo and Star standing near Carl.

      Echo: Why do you think Darkhart was after the boy?
      Carl: Not sure, but Nitro did seem to think there was something different about the boy, maybe there actually is.
      Star: I think you guys should try to find out everything you can from there.
      Echo: Yes, and the rest of us will be keeping a watch for Nitro and this boy.

      4- Show Falco and his group behind him.

      Falco: We will start searching around here and keep an eye out. And Carl, if you need anything, call us and we’ll be there.
      Carl: Thanks Falco.

      Page23
      1- Show the Holo-con room at the Command Center near Serenity. So Echo and Star should no longer be holograms and they are alone.

      Echo: Don’t worry Star, everything will work out.

      2- Show Echo heading for the door.

      Echo: Everyone is looking for him and this boy, all we can do is try to help in anyway that we can.

      3- Echo is gone and Star is all alone.

      Star: I hope he comes back safe…

      4- Close up shot of her face, she has a tear come from her eye.

      Star: … to me.



      Bottom of the page quote: Until Next Time.

    • TheNeosonic

      WD: Nicky Ray Issue#2, part2

      9 years ago

      Page8
      1- Show the front door being knocked.

      Voice (Angela): Just a minute.

      2- The door opens and Angie (wearing a sports bra and skin tight exercise shorts) is at the door, she is very surprised, and embarrassed.

      Angie: H-Hi Carl. Jason I thought you would be alone.
      Jason: Why?
      Angie: You are the only one that just shows up and you have always been alone before, everyone else calls.
      Jason: Oh.
      Angie: Come in while I get changed.

      3- Carl, Jason, and Nicky are standing in the dining room (there is a very large table with chairs surrounding it, a nice chandelier is hanging above the table, there is a very nice display case in the corner with really old China in it, photos are on the wall of Angela and her family and a couple of Jason, there is an entrance to the Kitchen, the Living room and the Family room, with stairs leading up to the second story in between the doors to the kitchen and the Family room).

      Carl: Remind me never to call again when I come over.
      Jason: Very funny.

      4- Have Angie come down the stairs she is in blue jeans and a sweatshirt.

      Angie: What is it?
      Jason: I was wondering if you would like a roommate?

      5- Angie has a huge smile.

      Angie: I have been waiting to hear you say that.
      Jason: Not me.
      Angie: HUH?

      6- Show Nicky come from behind Jason and Carl.

      Jason: I meant him.
      Angie: Who is he?
      Jason: A kid Nitro found in T.C. and asked if we could look after him till he found out more about him.

      Page9
      1- Have Angie kneel down to talk to Nicky.

      Angie: What’s your name?
      Nicky: N-Nicky R-Ray.

      2- Have Carl and Jason look at each other in amazement.

      3- Back to Angie kneeling with Nicky.

      Angie: Hi Nicky, I am Angela Winter. Where’s your family?
      Nicky: Dead.
      Angie: Everyone?
      Nicky: Yes.

      4- Show Nicky and Angie walking to the Kitchen.

      Angie: You look hungry.
      Nicky: Yes, and what room am I goin’ to be stayin’ in?

      5- Angie has a puzzled look on there face.

      Angie: Why do you ask that?
      Nicky: Because you are letting me stay here.
      Angie: How did you know that?

      6- Nicky is eating in the kitchen at the island counter, while Angie is in the dining room talking to Carl and Jason.

      Jason: So, can he stay here?
      Angie: Yeah, but he already knew that somehow.
      Carl: What do you mean?
      Angie: He asked what room he would be staying in, and I never even said anything about it.

      7- Have Nicky come into the room. He is directing his conversation toward Jason.

      Nicky: You guys are really nice, I am glad that you found me.
      Jason: I didn’t find you, Nitro did.
      Nicky: Oh, OK.
      Jason: Where did you come from?

      Page10
      1- Show the Black Dominion base in the Nevada Valley.

      Caption: Meanwhile in the Nevada Valley.


      2- Show two henchmen in a large room very dim, and in the corner they are talking into is pitch black.

      One Henchman: Darkhart, the kid is missing. The bots are scouring everywhere, I…
      Darkhart: You lost the boy, that is a failure. That is intolerable.

      3- Show a bright silver light coming from the where Darkhart’s eyes would be on his helmet; the eye area is solid thin line across the eye area.

      4- Show a silver blast come from his eye area and kill the one henchman.

      5- Have the second henchman scared to death and looking into the dark corner.

      Darkhart: You are in charge of finding the boy, take all the bots and ships you need, but bring me the boy alive. Now go!

      Page11
      1- Carl and Nitro are at the Cadillac Control Center. Carl is at the computer working on trying to find out everything he can about Nicky.

      Nitro: Did you find anything?
      Carl: Not really, at least nothing to speak of. He was at a family reunion being held on the Las Vegas Strip when the war hit there. He was the only survivor found.
      Nitro: Wait. The only survivor! That whole town was decimated by that first hit. I think there is more to this boy than meets the eye. First surviving the bomb, and then his comment about my finding him.
      Carl: He was just saying he was happy about being with good people.
      Nitro: Well, how does he know we’re good people?

      2- Carl gets up from the computer and starts heading for the door to the hangar bay.

      Nitro: Where are you going?
      Carl: I-I got some errands to run.
      Carl (thinking): A very personal errand.

      3- Show Carl in the hangar bay, Wheeler is waiting for him and he is holding a disk.

      Carl: You have what I asked for?
      Wheeler: yeah I got all the video feeds and info from the shooting, but what do you want it for?
      Carl: It doesn’t matter, just don’t tell anyone, got it!
      Wheeler: Yes.

      4- Carl is driving off in the car out of the hangar bay. Wheeler just stands there and watches.

      Wheeler: Something is seriously wrong with him.



      5- In the Control Center Nitro is standing at the computer still researching Nicky, Wheeler is behind him.

      Wheeler: Is everything alright with Carl?
      Nitro: I think so, he just said that he had some errands to run.
      Wheeler: What are you doing?
      Nitro: Just trying to find out more about…

      6- Show a look of interest on Nitro’s face.

      Nitro: Look at this; it says here that Nicky was taken from a Colorado Reservation about a year ago, and they think he was abducted and he hasn’t been seen since.
      Wheeler: Do you think he ran away and has been wandering till he ended up here?
      Nitro: I don’t know, but Nicky should.

      Page12
      1- Show Jason arriving at Angie’s house in the car. Nicky is out playing with Angie’s black lab. Nicky is cleaned up and has new clothes on.

      2- Jason is out of the car and walking up to Nicky.

      Nicky: Hi Jason.
      Jason: Hi Nicky, I wanted to…
      Nicky: To ask about my history and where I have been since the Reservation.

      3- Total look of shock on Jason’s face.

      Jason: Yeah, and how do you know that.
      Nicky: It doesn’t matter, you are good people and I like it here.
      Jason: Don’t you think it is important that we know more about you?
      Nicky: No.

      4- Jason is in the house now with Angie, Nicky is still outside playing.

      Jason: Angie have you noticed anything; different about Nicky?
      Angie: I don’t know, he seems to have like a sixth sense or something, but he is a great kid, extrem

    • TheNeosonic

      World Defenders: Nicky Ray,Issue#2 part1

      9 years ago

      World Defenders : Nicky Ray

      Page1
      1- Intro Page
      World Defenders: Nicky Ray
      Show a picture of Nitro running in a house after a bot (this will be a common robot that the Dark Dominion uses) carrying Nicky Ray (13 year old boy, very blonde hair, blue eyes).
      Written by: Michael Johnson
      Art by:

      Page2
      1- Show the Captain’s office of the Traverse City Police department. Inside at the desk is Captain Rick Stubbs (short white male, with short dark hair).

      2- Show the Capt. At the door of his office yelling out.

      Capt.: Simpson! Get in here!

      3- Show Lieutenant Gabrielle Simpson (tall white male, brown hair, dark jacket) walking toward the Captain’s office.

      4- Gabe is in the office with the Capt.; the Capt. Is sitting at his desk and Gabe is standing on the other side of the desk.

      Capt.: We just got a call; I want you to go check out the old grocery super center.
      Gabe: I was just on my way to lunch, can’t you send one of the new guys?
      Capt.: Gabe can’t you just do what you’re told, just once?
      Gabe: Well…
      Capt.: Or the most you will be doing is mopping the floors.
      Gabe: Alright, alright, I’m going.

      Page3
      1- Show Gabe in the garage walking toward a futuristic motorcycle (this is Gabe’s personal bike, it should have double wheels in the front and back that are directly side by side, main colors are blue and red).

      Gabe: Why do I get stuck doing this, maybe it is all the wise cracks.

      2- Gabe is on the bike racing through the streets.

      3- Have Nitro flying above the city and have him see Gabe driving through the streets.

      Nitro: Looks like Gabe.

      4- Gabe pulls into the parking lot of a large building that has a lot of damage.

      5- Show Nitro land behind Gabe.

      Nitro: Hey Gabe.

      6- Gabe jumps around and is totally startled.

      Gabe: Oh it’s you.

      Page4
      1- Same scene, but Gabe is more relaxed now.

      Gabe: You gotta stop doing that, you’re gonna give me a heart attack.
      Nitro: Sorry Gabe, but I just figured you would know I was there Officer.
      Gabe: Your sarcasm is always so welcome, but even a cop can get caught off guard.
      Nitro: My mistake.

      2- Show Gave start walking toward the buildings entrance.

      Nitro: So what are you doing here?
      Gabe: Checking a disturbance, or something like that.
      Nitro: Want some company?
      Gabe: Sure.

      3- In the old store there is a lot of damage to the interior, but it is still in decent shape.

      4- Show in a far corner of the building a small shadow moving.

      Nitro: Did you hear that?
      Gabe: Hear what?

      5- Show Nitro grab one of his disruptors.

      6- Nitro begins hovering over to the corner that the noise came from.

      7- Gabe comes over to the corner and moves a large board out of the way.

      8- Show Nicky Ray (he is very dirty and frightened, he is wearing tattered clothing).

      Page5
      1- Nitro is on the ground next to Gabe and has put his disruptor away.

      Gabe: It’s just a kid.
      Nitro: Hey kid come on out, we aren’t going to hurt you.

      2- Show Nicky not as concerned but still weary.

      Gabe: We’re friends, it’s okay.

      3- Nicky comes out, Gabe and Nitro just look at each other.

      4- Same view just with Gabe kneeling down to be level with Nicky.

      Gabe: What’s your name?
      Where’s your family?
      Why are you here?

      5- Just show Nitro looking at Nicky.

      Nitro: Don’t talk much do ya kid?



      Page6
      1- Show Gabe and Nitro off a little ways from Nicky so he doesn’t hear.

      Gabe: He seems to be traumatized.
      Nitro: Yeah could be from the war.
      Gabe: I’d like to know where his family is.

      2- Same scene.

      Gabe: He is going to need a place to stay until I can find out more about him.
      Nitro: I’ll look into things when I get back and see what I can find.
      Gabe: He still needs a place to stay.

      3- Nitro looks at Gabe and looks like he doesn’t like what Gabe has to say.

      Nitro: What are you implying?

      4- Gabe and Nitro are still talking. Gabe has a large smile on his face.

      Nitro: No way! I’m not that good with kids, and…
      Gabe: I’m sure you can handle it. Besides, he would get put in a Reservation otherwise.

      5- Nicky runs up and hugs Nitro.

      Nitro: Thanks.

      Page7
      1- Show Nitro flying and holding Nicky; Nicky is holding on very tightly.

      Nitro: Don’t worry kid.

      2- Show Nitro talking into his wrist communicator.

      Nitro: Carl?
      Comm.: Yeah, what do you need?
      Nitro: Bring the car to the outskirts of Cadillac.
      Comm.: What for?
      Nitro: To pick up the new kid.
      Comm.: Uh, OK!?

      3- Have Carl standing next to the car on the side of the road; he looks very surprised to see Nitro flying toward him with the kid.

      4- Show Nitro landing near the car.

      Carl: You weren’t kidding when you meant kid.
      Nitro: No, I was serious.
      Carl: So why do you have him?



      5- Show Nicky Ray standing near Nitro and Carl while they talk.

      Nitro: He was alone when Gabe and I found him, and some how I got stuck babysitting till we find out about the kid.
      Carl: So what is the plan? We can’t take him back to the Command Center.
      Nitro: I was thinking Angela.
      Carl: Should be interesting.

      6- Carl is at an old farm house (white house, large, fenced in acreage, long driveway with trees lining it and railroad tracks going through the driveway, and lining the tracks are lilac bushes) waiting for Jason to arrive.

      Carl: What’s your name?

      7- Jason pulls up in another car.

      8- Jason gets out of the car and walks up to Carl.

      Carl: Quite the conversationalist.
      Jason: Yeah. Lets go.
      Carl: Yeah, lets.

    • TheNeosonic

      World Defenders: Nicky Ray,Issue#2 part1

      9 years ago

      World Defenders : Nicky Ray

      Page1
      1- Intro Page
      World Defenders: Nicky Ray
      Show a picture of Nitro running in a house after a bot (this will be a common robot that the Dark Dominion uses) carrying Nicky Ray (13 year old boy, very blonde hair, blue eyes).
      Written by: Michael Johnson
      Art by:

      Page2
      1- Show the Captain’s office of the Traverse City Police department. Inside at the desk is Captain Rick Stubbs (short white male, with short dark hair).

      2- Show the Capt. At the door of his office yelling out.

      Capt.: Simpson! Get in here!

      3- Show Lieutenant Gabrielle Simpson (tall white male, brown hair, dark jacket) walking toward the Captain’s office.

      4- Gabe is in the office with the Capt.; the Capt. Is sitting at his desk and Gabe is standing on the other side of the desk.

      Capt.: We just got a call; I want you to go check out the old grocery super center.
      Gabe: I was just on my way to lunch, can’t you send one of the new guys?
      Capt.: Gabe can’t you just do what you’re told, just once?
      Gabe: Well…
      Capt.: Or the most you will be doing is mopping the floors.
      Gabe: Alright, alright, I’m going.

      Page3
      1- Show Gabe in the garage walking toward a futuristic motorcycle (this is Gabe’s personal bike, it should have double wheels in the front and back that are directly side by side, main colors are blue and red).

      Gabe: Why do I get stuck doing this, maybe it is all the wise cracks.

      2- Gabe is on the bike racing through the streets.

      3- Have Nitro flying above the city and have him see Gabe driving through the streets.

      Nitro: Looks like Gabe.

      4- Gabe pulls into the parking lot of a large building that has a lot of damage.

      5- Show Nitro land behind Gabe.

      Nitro: Hey Gabe.

      6- Gabe jumps around and is totally startled.

      Gabe: Oh it’s you.

      Page4
      1- Same scene, but Gabe is more relaxed now.

      Gabe: You gotta stop doing that, you’re gonna give me a heart attack.
      Nitro: Sorry Gabe, but I just figured you would know I was there Officer.
      Gabe: Your sarcasm is always so welcome, but even a cop can get caught off guard.
      Nitro: My mistake.

      2- Show Gave start walking toward the buildings entrance.

      Nitro: So what are you doing here?
      Gabe: Checking a disturbance, or something like that.
      Nitro: Want some company?
      Gabe: Sure.

      3- In the old store there is a lot of damage to the interior, but it is still in decent shape.

      4- Show in a far corner of the building a small shadow moving.

      Nitro: Did you hear that?
      Gabe: Hear what?

      5- Show Nitro grab one of his disruptors.

      6- Nitro begins hovering over to the corner that the noise came from.

      7- Gabe comes over to the corner and moves a large board out of the way.

      8- Show Nicky Ray (he is very dirty and frightened, he is wearing tattered clothing).

      Page5
      1- Nitro is on the ground next to Gabe and has put his disruptor away.

      Gabe: It’s just a kid.
      Nitro: Hey kid come on out, we aren’t going to hurt you.

      2- Show Nicky not as concerned but still weary.

      Gabe: We’re friends, it’s okay.

      3- Nicky comes out, Gabe and Nitro just look at each other.

      4- Same view just with Gabe kneeling down to be level with Nicky.

      Gabe: What’s your name?
      Where’s your family?
      Why are you here?

      5- Just show Nitro looking at Nicky.

      Nitro: Don’t talk much do ya kid?



      Page6
      1- Show Gabe and Nitro off a little ways from Nicky so he doesn’t hear.

      Gabe: He seems to be traumatized.
      Nitro: Yeah could be from the war.
      Gabe: I’d like to know where his family is.

      2- Same scene.

      Gabe: He is going to need a place to stay until I can find out more about him.
      Nitro: I’ll look into things when I get back and see what I can find.
      Gabe: He still needs a place to stay.

      3- Nitro looks at Gabe and looks like he doesn’t like what Gabe has to say.

      Nitro: What are you implying?

      4- Gabe and Nitro are still talking. Gabe has a large smile on his face.

      Nitro: No way! I’m not that good with kids, and…
      Gabe: I’m sure you can handle it. Besides, he would get put in a Reservation otherwise.

      5- Nicky runs up and hugs Nitro.

      Nitro: Thanks.

      Page7
      1- Show Nitro flying and holding Nicky; Nicky is holding on very tightly.

      Nitro: Don’t worry kid.

      2- Show Nitro talking into his wrist communicator.

      Nitro: Carl?
      Comm.: Yeah, what do you need?
      Nitro: Bring the car to the outskirts of Cadillac.
      Comm.: What for?
      Nitro: To pick up the new kid.
      Comm.: Uh, OK!?

      3- Have Carl standing next to the car on the side of the road; he looks very surprised to see Nitro flying toward him with the kid.

      4- Show Nitro landing near the car.

      Carl: You weren’t kidding when you meant kid.
      Nitro: No, I was serious.
      Carl: So why do you have him?



      5- Show Nicky Ray standing near Nitro and Carl while they talk.

      Nitro: He was alone when Gabe and I found him, and some how I got stuck babysitting till we find out about the kid.
      Carl: So what is the plan? We can’t take him back to the Command Center.
      Nitro: I was thinking Angela.
      Carl: Should be interesting.

      6- Carl is at an old farm house (white house, large, fenced in acreage, long driveway with trees lining it and railroad tracks going through the driveway, and lining the tracks are lilac bushes) waiting for Jason to arrive.

      Carl: What’s your name?

      7- Jason pulls up in another car.

      8- Jason gets out of the car and walks up to Carl.

      Carl: Quite the conversationalist.
      Jason: Yeah. Lets go.
      Carl: Yeah, lets.

      Page8
      1- Show the front door being knocked.

      Voice (Angela): Just a minute.

      2- The door opens and Angie (wearing a sports bra and skin tight exercise shorts) is at the door, she is very surprised, and embarrassed.

      Angie: H-Hi Carl. Jason I thought you would be alone.
      Jason: Why?
      Angie: You are the only one that just shows up and you have always been alone before, everyone else calls.
      Jason: Oh.
      Angie: Come in while I get changed.

      3- Carl, Jason, and Nicky are standing in the dining room (there is a very large table with chairs surrounding it, a nice chandelier is hanging above the table, there is a very nice display case in the corner with really old China in it, p

    • TheNeosonic

      First issue of World Defenders

      9 years ago

      Please check out my first issue of World Defenders in my journal and please leave comments.

      I use that as inspiration to help me write, it is quite encouraging.

      Thank you.

      Issue 2 is finished and will be up soon.

    • TheNeosonic

      WD: A Beginning part IV

      9 years ago

      Page 18
      1- In Mt. Pleasant at CMU. Have a large stage and podium set up with lots of chairs and people sitting in them. Have a small camera crew. The camera should be small, compact and futuristic looking.

      2- Show the main entrance hallway of CMU. Show the Dir., V. Dir., and Jacobs in the hallway.

      Jacobs- “Sir, everything is ready. There is still time to change your mind.â€Â
      Dir. Hernandez- “No, let’s go.â€Â

      3- Show the Dir. On the stage at the podium, have the V. Dir. Standing next to him, and Jacobs is at the stairs leading up to the stage. Have soldiers scattered throughout the crowd and on the stage. Have Carl in an aisle seat with the crowd. Show Nitro hovering above the stage off to the side.

      4- Nitro hovering and talking into his wrist communicator.

      Nitro- “What’s your positions?â€Â
      Communicator- “Maximus here, I’m behind the stage.â€Â
      - “It’s Carl, I’m in the crowd.â€Â
      - “Wheeler here, I’m at the Stingray.â€Â
      - “Last but not least, it is I, Falco, I’m checking the outlying area.â€Â

      5- Show a building very far away, a view from the building toward CMU, and have a special one-man flying speeder (make it special- it will be Jake McMasters personal speeder, none other like it), have Jake kneeling with a special sniper rifle (one of a kind, and it uses bullets instead of lazers.)



      Page 19
      1- Show Jake with the rifle preparing the weapon.

      Jake- “Time to impact the World.â€Â

      2- Show Nitro looking around towards the building Jake is at.

      Nitro- (thinking) I should check that building.

      3- Have Nitro talking into the communicator.

      Nitro- “Wheeler, have you scanned all the buildings?â€Â
      Communicator- “Not all of them yet.â€Â
      Nitro- “Check the one far off, directly across from the stage.â€Â
      Communicator- “Sure thing.â€Â

      4- (small shot) Show Jake aiming.

      5- (small shot) Show the building from Nitro’s point of view and have a light shine off the weapon.

      Nitro- (thinking) OH NO.

      6- Show Nitro flying toward the building (when Nitro flies he has one arm outstretched and the other is bent and turned toward him.)

      Nitro- “Shooter on the far building!â€Â

      7, 8, 9- (small, close-up shots) Show face shots of Carl, Falco, and Maximus (one for each shot, all with looks of surprise and fear.)

      10- (small shot) Trigger being pulled.

      Page 20
      1- Show the V. Dir. Push the Dir. Out of the way and the bullet hit her in the chest. Various people in the crowd scream.

      Crowd- “AHHHHH!â€Â

      2- (small shot) Show Nitro turned to see what has happened. His fists are clenched.

      3- (small, distant shot) see the speeder blast off into the air.

      4- Show Falco with the V. Dir. And Maximus behind him. Show Jacobs and military men escorting the Dir. Off the stage.

      Maximus- (yells) “Medic!â€Â
      Falco- (Surprised look) “She was shot with a bullet.â€Â

      5- Show Carl standing in the aisle while people are scattering around him. Carl is looking toward the direction the speeder went. He has a confused and shocked look.

      Carl- (thinking) This is too familiar.

      6- Show the viewscreen back at the Cadillac Control Center. Have Ch.1 World News on.

      Michael Johnson- “Vice- Director of NeoAmerica Martha Drake was terminated this evening when she saved Director Hernandez from assassination.â€Â

      Page 21
      1- In the Holo-con room; holograms of Echo, Star, and Maverick; Falco, Maximus, Wheeler, Carl, and Nitro are all there.

      Maverick- “Way to go!â€Â
      Star- “That’s enough!â€Â
      Echo- “She’s right.â€Â

      2- Maverick’s hologram is gone.

      Echo- “It’s nobody’s fault.â€Â
      “We just pick ourselves up and keep going; our job isn’t done.â€Â
      “Do we have any leads?â€Â

      3- Show only Carl. He is looking away from them.

      Carl- (thinking) One, but an impossible one.

      4- Show Falco and Maximus.

      Falco- “No hard leads, but this big of a hit, I’d put my money on the Black Dominion.â€Â
      Echo- “Look into it, but keep all options open, that’ll be all.â€Â

      5- Everyone has left except for Echo, Star, and Nitro.

      Nitro- “It’s my fault, I had a feeling and didn’t follow it.â€Â
      Echo- “You did everything you could, you can’t blame yourself.â€Â
      Nitro- “If I had just went to the building instead of relying on everyone else to check it out.â€Â
      Echo- “If you start doubting yourself and not relying on people, you will fail.â€Â



      Page 22
      1- Same scene, only showing Nitro.

      Nitro- “I guess.â€Â

      2- Echo has left. Star is there and has gotten closer to Nitro.

      Star- “Nitro.â€Â
      “You’re one of the best of us, and many of the others look up to you.â€Â

      3-Have Nitro leaning against the wall and Star put her hand on his shoulder. She has a look of affection.

      Star- “You have to be strong not only for them and me, but yourself as well.â€Â
      Nitro- “Thanks Star.â€Â
      “I’ll be OK.â€Â

      Page 23
      1- (shot takes up the whole page) Full body shot of Nitro, he has his back to the shot. He is alone. He has taken off his helmet and it is hitting the floor. His left hand is on the wall with his head on the wall.

      2, 3, 4, 5, and 6- (thin, small shots) The helmet is dropping from his right hand until it hit’s the floor. Should seem like the helmet is falling farther down in each shot till it hit’s the floor.



      Bottom of the page quote- Until Next Time.

    • TheNeosonic

      WD: A Beginning part III

      9 years ago

      Page 13
      1- Annika Saint is standing outside the large doorway of the Ryker Ind. MHQ. Above the doorway etched in gold have “Ryker Industries†most of the Ryker buildings ore the same, but this is the most elaborate.

      Saint- “I have just received word that Bruce Ryker has made it his personal mission to get every Reservation world wide to its highest quality possible.â€Â

      2- Same view.

      Saint- “He plans to provide material for buildings and repairs, and as many Creds as needed to purchase supplies and provide wages for the volunteers.â€Â

      3- Show the large doors open, two men in full body armor walk out in front of Bruce Ryker (tall male; thick, wavy locks of light brown hair; well trimmed goatee; dark gray suit.)

      Camera man- “It’s him!â€Â

      4- Show Saint walking up to the group and the two guys close together, you can still see Ryker in the shot behind the guys.

      Ryker- “It’s OK boys.â€Â

      5- Show the view screen in the control room with Carl and Nitro sitting there watching the screen. On the screen show Ryker and Saint talking.

      Ryker- “Who might you be?â€Â
      Saint- “Annika Saint, Channel 1 World News.â€Â
      Nitro- “Man she’s something!â€Â
      Carl- “If Angie heard that, you’d be dead.â€Â
      Nitro- “Yeah, but she’s not here. Besides, she knows I care about her.â€Â

      Page 14
      1- Show a large desert with some buildings scattered around, some buried under the sand. Note- Nevada was completely destroyed during the war, nothing is really left, referred to as Nevada Valley.

      - “Somewhere in the Nevada Valley.â€Â

      2- Show a building covered by the sand with only a door visible.

      3- Show a dark room. There is a view screen and two figures standing there; it is too dark to see the figures clearly. One figure (Darkhart is thin, has a cape and a smooth helmet.) Other figure (Jake McMasters same height and build as Carl McMasters. They are twins.) Future reference- Jake is blonde. On the view screen is the same broadcast that was just on with Annika Saint and Bruce Ryker.

      4- Same scene as 3.

      Darkhart- “What a wonderful thing.â€Â
      Jake- “Why?â€Â
      Darkhart- “It’s a simple way to reach millions and influence all of them at once.â€Â

      5- Same as 3 and 4. But on the viewscreen go back to Michael Johnson in the Broadcast room.

      Darkhart- “I can strike fear into everyone, and show them the future.â€Â
      Jake- “What’s your plan?â€Â
      Darkhart- “Simple, you’re going to take care of a very powerful symbol in your usual flare, for all to see.â€Â

      Page 15
      1- Control Center Cadillac, show Carl working in his area. It is late night, most of the lights are off.

      2- Show the computer near the view screen and on the control panel a big blinking light.

      3- Show Carl pushing the button and on the screen is Echo.

      Carl- “Echo do you know what time it is?â€Â
      Echo- “This couldn’t wait.â€Â
      “Get everybody to the Holo-con room.â€Â

      4- Show Carl push another smaller button for the intercom system.

      Carl- “Hey guys, they’ve called a special meeting, so hurry!â€Â

      5- Show Carl, Nitro, and Wheeler outside the Holo-con room door.

      Nitro- “What’s this about?â€Â
      Carl- “Didn’t say.â€Â
      Wheeler- “It must be important.â€Â

      6- Show everyone in the Holo-con room.

      Nitro- “This better be good.â€Â
      Echo- “Actually it’s terrible.â€Â



      7- Show Star stand up.

      Star- “I’ve intercepted information that has plans to assassinate the Director of NeoAmerica.â€Â
      Wheeler- “You can’t be serious?â€Â
      Echo- “Even if it’s not true, we can’t take that chance.â€Â

      Page 16
      1- Holo-con room, show Echo at the end of the table and everyone else around the table look at him.

      Echo- “Nitro, we think it would be best if Falco’s team came and helped out on this one.â€Â
      Nitro- “Any help is appreciated considering the circumstances.â€Â

      2- Show Falco (He wears a power suit and a helmet that covers from the nose up, it has a front silver visor for the front, the colors of this suit are silver, blue and black. On the arms above the hands are two openings that shoot out lazers as his weapon.

      Falco- “My team should be there in about an hour.â€Â
      Nitro- “We’ll have the carpet rolled out.â€Â
      Echo- “Tomorrow at 5 PM is when the director is to give his speech.â€Â
      “I would assume they want to do it live.â€Â

      3- Have Maverick in the scene slamming his fist down.

      Maverick- “I told you, now ‘cause of the news, it‘s happening all over again.â€Â
      “I’m sick of this.â€Â

      4- Show Maverick’s hologram disappear.

      5- Scene back to Echo.

      Echo- “While your teams are covering that, the rest of us will cover everywhere else; just in case this is a decoy.â€Â
      Falco- “Let’s do this.â€Â
      Echo- “Good luck Defenders.â€Â

      Page 17
      1- Show the Hangar bay. It has a large ship (The Stingray, it is similar in shape to a stingray, very large, black and shiny, the cockpit is set back toward the center of the ship) in it now.

      2- Show Falco and Maximus (a large black male, bald, close to seven feet tall, wears regular clothes, he has extremely thick skin and has extreme strength.) getting out of the Stingray.

      3- Show Falco and Maximus being greeted by Nitro, Carl and Wheeler outside the ship.

      Nitro- “Glad you guys could make it, but where is Shine and Mace?â€Â
      Falco- “Couple of things came up, so they had to stay behind.â€Â

      4- Same shot as 3, but different angle. Showing the ship in the background.

      Carl- “How’s my ship!?â€Â
      Maximus- “The Stingray is fine, you got to stop worrying so much.â€Â
      Carl- “Hey, that’s my baby.â€Â

      5- Show Nitro and Falco walking toward the Control room.

      Nitro- “Well let’s get a plan.â€Â

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