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  • Monodramatic

    Monodramatic

    #33747038 - 7 months ago

    In reply to VoshTheStampede

    Should have worked on her landing strategy

  • PaperGodzilla

    PaperGodzilla

    #33747119 - 7 months ago


    Name: Lilian Hiver

    Race faunus lynxs

    Sex: female

    Color: White

    References: Lady De Winter from 3 Musketeers

    Job: freelance spy and assassin


    Appearance:  a tall beautiful woman with long straight dark haired and blue eyes. Her Faunus trait are retractable claws.   She usually wears a white off the shoulder dress complimented with a set of white opera gloves and white heels.


    History: she was born poor she swore she would never be poor again. She has spent her life stealing and manipulating to get what she wanted.  she has conned her way into the lives of a number of individuals taking and learning what she needed from them and throwing them away. This is how she got into beacon academy where she perfect her combat abilities. After getting what she wanted form the school, she left never becoming a licensed huntress. Instead she used the skills she has to work as a frelance spy and assassin.  She sells her services to who ever can offer her the most benfits. This has lead her to side with Salem who Lilian sees as the most powerful individual on the planet and as long as Lilian get to live what dose it matter what Salem dose to the rest of the world.


    Personality: Lilian is a sociopath Cunning and relentless she cares only for herself. She has a taste for the finer things in life and the trapping of wealth. She will do whatever she can to get what she wants. the lives of other only matter in what they can give her. She doesn't hesitate to kill and she is usually cold an efficient at it.


    Semblance: hydrokinesis: psychic ability to control and manipulate the movement of water and other liquids using the power of the mind


    Weapons: "Frost Kiss" rapier and daggers made of ice. by combining her semblance and using  ice dust, she shapes then freezes liquids into her weapons.  For ranged attack she shapes and throws the daggers.  Since ice can be broken and melted Lilian uses poisons and acids infused into the ice for a nasty addital effects. These poisons and acids giving the weapons different colors depending on what she uses . To create and enhance her weapons she use a set of dust tool, a pair of gloves with ice dust sewn in them and a multi chambered container of poisons and acids with a water dust crystal to dilute the poisons and give her water to manipulate


    Notes:

    -The name lillian is derived from the flower name lily. Lily white is a pure white.

    -Lily is also a references to the Fleur-de lis (flower of lily) a symbol of the french monarchy. In the story of  3 Musketeers Milady De Winter has a fleur-de-lis branded on her skin for past crimes.

    -Hiver is french for winter

    - In the book  poison is the favored weapon  Milady De Winter uses.

  • Ace-of-Rogues

    Ace-of-Rogues FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold Main Weapon: Rapier Wit

    #33747123 - 7 months ago

    In reply to PaperGodzilla

    The semblance is interesting, but besides that this reads like a generic mercenary femme fatale. I get that as you are drawing inspiration from Milady she would be femme fatale, but don't make that all she is.

  • AnimeAnnemarie

    AnimeAnnemarie

    #33747144 - 7 months ago

    In reply to PaperGodzilla The semblance is fine, but you have to be REALLY careful with how you use it in the story. This can get real OP real fast. Make it hard on her aura or impossible to do certain things, like use moving liquids instead of ones that stand still. Otherwise she could just fuck with someone's bloodflow and kill them instantly with nothing they can do about it. 

  • VoshTheStampede

    VoshTheStampede FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold For Science

    #33747160 - 7 months ago

    I have retconned Sugar Sweet into being a Grimm Reaper fanboy.

  • AnimeAnnemarie

    AnimeAnnemarie

    #33747220 - 7 months ago

    In reply to VoshTheStampede Seeing as this probably has to do with the newest episode, I'll have to get back to you on that next week I guess...

  • Ace-of-Rogues

    Ace-of-Rogues FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold Main Weapon: Rapier Wit

    #33747222 - 7 months ago

    In reply to AnimeAnnemarie

    If you want to see a teaser that will give you a good idea here's a link for it.

  • PaperGodzilla

    PaperGodzilla

    #33747240 - 7 months ago

    In reply to Ace-of-Rogues well I was going for the Mercenary Femme fatale so that aleast came across. I will probably tie her back story into some of the back story of some heroes I haven't writen up yet. 

    In reply to AnimeAnnemarie yeah messing with some ones blood flow just wouldn't be visally interesting. A simple fixs is that she can't affect liquids in living things because of their aura.   

  • AnimeAnnemarie

    AnimeAnnemarie

    #33747253 - 7 months ago

    In reply to PaperGodzilla Not all living beings have unlocked their aura though. Besides, there are other scenarios to think up where a hydrokenesis type power would be OP. I really think you should restrict her ability to use it somewhat more.

  • PaperGodzilla

    PaperGodzilla

    #33747260 - 7 months ago

    In reply to AnimeAnnemarie

    I didn't say unlocked, just having aura prevents her from affecting water in the body could also make it so the water has to be vissible so water in pipes would not be useable. As for op its not beyond the level of powers already shown in RWBY take Glynda goodwitch.  I also like to give my villians stronger abilties so their more of a chalange for the heroes 

  • Malochroma

    Malochroma FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold Mollymaukery

    #33747261 - 7 months ago

    In reply to VoshTheStampede

    Gonna have to update my color sheet to accommodate the new characters. Been meaning to fuss with that for a while.


    Worth it tho.

  • AnimeAnnemarie

    AnimeAnnemarie

    #33747265 - 7 months ago

    In reply to PaperGodzilla How you gonna use something you haven't unlocked, my man. Jaune couldn't use aura to protect himself before Pyrrha unlocked it for him either.

  • PaperGodzilla

    PaperGodzilla

    #33747267 - 7 months ago

    In reply to AnimeAnnemarie

    that same seen it is stated every liveing thing has Aura its a manifeststation of the soul. with training people can use it as a shield but every lineing thing has it. my idea is its not need as an active defences to block the power. so for simpler version of my idea the power dosn't work on living organisms.

  • AnimeAnnemarie

    AnimeAnnemarie

    #33747292 - 7 months ago

    In reply to PaperGodzilla I'm saying that having aura is not the same as knowing how to use it, but whatever. Do whatever you like.

  • VoshTheStampede

    VoshTheStampede FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold For Science

    #33747421 - 7 months ago

    new page:

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  • Ace-of-Rogues

    Ace-of-Rogues FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold Main Weapon: Rapier Wit

    #33747424 - 7 months ago

    In reply to VoshTheStampede

    Oh, a cliffhanger, thanks a lot.

  • AnimeAnnemarie

    AnimeAnnemarie

    #33747426 - 7 months ago

    In reply to rt-201812100218574938970 I personally think EITHER an invisibility OR "phasing through solid objects" semblance is powerful enough as it is, and doesn't need fear-inducing side effects. I say pick one power.

  • rt-201812100218574938970

    rt-201812100218574938970

    #33747446 - 7 months ago

    In reply to AnimeAnnemarie really I thought it was more of a downside the an actual power itself 

  • rt-201812100218574938970

    rt-201812100218574938970

    #33747448 - 7 months ago

    In reply to Ace-of-Rogues

    What do you mean

  • Ace-of-Rogues

    Ace-of-Rogues FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold Main Weapon: Rapier Wit

    #33747455 - 7 months ago

    In reply to rt-201812100218574938970

    "Cliffhanger" might not have been the best word but I was complaining about how Vosh's latest page ends in the middle of a countdown.

  • rt-201812100218574938970

    rt-201812100218574938970

    #33747527 - 7 months ago

    damn it deleted afterm editing probably because I did it from my computer

  • rt-201812100218574938970

    rt-201812100218574938970

    #33747528 - 7 months ago

    I made revisions

  • rt-201812100218574938970

    rt-201812100218574938970

    #33747536 - 7 months ago

    name:Thomas torbs-nick name ghost

    Gender:male

    Apearence:wears a full white suit whit white tie and black under shirt whith white leather gloves he mostly wears a half and half rheator mask hair color jet black wears a nice white bowler hat with black ribbon eye color black and has an x scar on right thumb

    Weapon of choice:wrist shooters that dual as spiked brass knuckles

    Personality:distant but want's to let someone in,very positive

    Skills:good at being unnoticeable/hiding/dissapearing

    Aura semblance:specter:phasing through solid objects

    History: Thomas had a hard time controlling his semblance at a young age causing him to phase through things at random like falling through and dropping things he never trained to be a huntsman but wanted to be one and was taught by his parents who were huntsmen in their younger days on how to fight his parent's died durig the attack on beacon and blames himself for his parents deaths because he could not help with semblance acting up on that day. From that point on he began to learn how to control his semblance he had no friends and no family he never let anyone close to him but he wants to let someone become close to him. he currently lives in an abandond mansion by himself a small distance away from a town only going out a night to get food and other items. he spends most of his time practicing controlling his semblance and hiding from the children who dare their friends to enter the strange house. but always longing for someone to interact with but avoiding people that wander into the mansion becoming a story the town people tell about a person who is seen In The house at first glance but not again

    Likes:people,animals,fancy food,huntsmen,nigh time

    Dislikes:Grim,daytime

    When I made this character I thought how would this look in an episode and thought of how it would play out team rwby,oscar,old lady,qrow wander into a nameless town looking for a place to stay the people recommend the mansion but issue a warning which they take but brush off as a story.after staying in mansion for the rest of the day the team already feels uneasy like they are being watched and sometimes thinking they see someone in the halls eventually setting a trap to catch what or whoever is in the house leading to a chase scene through out the mansion eventually catching Thomas and making him explain himself Thomas explains himself and give's breif back story but their interaction is intueupted by screams from the town it seems that the town is under attack from a pack of grim<--(tweak this)  the both team rwby and Thomas to team up and save the town and after the fight one of two things will happen 1. Team rwby introduces the town to their so called "ghost" and Thomas and the town become a joint community or 2 team rwby bring Thomas with them to help in their quest to protect the jin lamp iether ending giving Thomas the long searched friendship he wanted


  • rt-201812100218574938970

    rt-201812100218574938970

    #33747537 - 7 months ago

    So what ya think

  • VoshTheStampede

    VoshTheStampede FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold For Science

    #33747544 - 7 months ago

    In reply to rt-201812100218574938970


    Please use better formatting.