Ok everyone as you all may or may not know is I write poetry. I love the element of fire, no im not a pyro, and I wrote a really symoblic poem about it. Please review and maybe even mod me.

Fire

The fire can take life From fire life is given

From fire destruction comes From fire creation begins

From fire life ends From fire life begins

From fire comes the dangers of life From fire comes the promises and ambitions in the hearts

From fire comes a bad person From fire comes the spirit of a poet

From fire comes danger From fire comes protection

From fire comes my ambition to succeed From fire I become the person who I am

From fire I throw down the hate in my enemy From fire comes the forgiveness I feel towards people

From fire comes who I am, and Who I will be forever.

Tell me what you think