11 years ago
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11 years ago
That cop found out how sharp Tack really is. Huh? Huh? Huh?Seriously, though. That was pretty cold blooded of Tackman.And Tack's the heart, eh? Interesting start.Chopper's is some kind of meta-eating-power-gaining-lad....right? Or something. Let's find out.
Ã¢â‚¬Å“Well, it turns out that the sand that I turn into has the ability to give people super strength and endurance for a while.Ã¢â‚¬Â
Ah, that explains it.Baraxis and Brodie, I smell rivalry forever now.Good chapter again.
its kicking mission being fulfilled.
Awesome chapter! Tack's thing was awesome and ties in well with stuff I have planned. I liked his.Brodie is awesome, as always
Awesome possum, dude!
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Very cool!first off, I like the commentary between characters on the "You know what I can do" good stuff, I like it when writers stretch peoples powers into creative ways.Good intro for Tack!I dig the way you write dialog....flows well.I am especially glad you are keeping a regular schedule!!
Loved it. Brode is an ass.
Very good sir, I enjoyed it a lot.
In reply to ErokDragun, #1:Sounds good.
I have it cued up, but I got to roll for now....I will read it later and comment properly