It's up

I feel better about this one than the last one.

The revising of Chapter 5 would have meant me rewriting the whole thing. I hated it. Anyways, that one was up last week as well.

Now we're getting into the thick of the plot. As always, positive comments or constructive criticism are welcome.

Don't forget the that Family Halo 3 Mega Bowl is in less than two weeks. If you want to be a part of it, be on either mine or Jedipoet's friend list and be on Halo 3 that weekend. The Grand Champ gets as many mods as I have at the time (943 as of this journal.)

Enjoy.