Atomis

Male
from Wilmington, DE

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    • my webpage cause aol is a bunch of punks

      10 years ago

      Atomis




      My Poetry Page, "Who cares about poems"



      My Favorite Poem
      My favorite inspirations on poetry come from Heart aches, sad songs or actually any song, lost love, no love at all, looking for you out there somewhere, find me soon, hopefully tonight
      :ALAN



      My Favorite Poets
      Elisabeth Bishop has a similar style to mine so I like her, I know how she must have felt, I wish I could have met her, she died, before my time
      a poem people should read by her "breakfast song"

      Tell me what you think I love to talk to people who are kind be friend of mine
      EMAIL : ACE4756099@aol.com
      we'll talk sometime




      Expressive Poetry Links
      See home pages about literature


      My Poetry
      ugly the night and fallen to the earth in desperation and hearing tears in the night to fall into the pools deepening farther in...torn by sunsets...fallen int..these times creeping in...the feeling...tearing me apart ...no where to hide from it...the end of my love..sinse the begining of time
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      Into the stars of the fallen wind...cast from the light, destined to fail like the rest...my tearsured loved one...looking at the knife and falling on it without a second thought..turned to cold stone..its just the way it has to be
      so here whe stand again fallen like the wind, autum leaves, my heart crushed wheat..no soul lingering from the shock...rolling waves in an ocean of feeling ...tossed in...painful dreaming...to end it without finding the answers to what I longed to know
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      Take me away hold these dreams, toss them out into the sea costing me my pride, my tears deeper then wounds, these cold hearts, my dreams falling apart infornt of my very eyes, the cold uncaring you, my mind unfeeling, destined by you to fear the wind, a meaningless thought, love cold, no more feeling, hold out your hand, feeling close to you, even though I can't be anymore, drawing my light from you, lost from my sight, grace of losing my loss of fate, I loved you, you never told me the truth, looking out this closed eyes, tears inside, not like I can just forget you, but it has to be done,
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      can you feel its my chest beating on, moonlight in your eyes moving over the earth at the speed of light, my vision blurring, the alknowing lovers not apart of my thoughts as my heart holds somany regrets,you meant something to me but I have to deny it now, my tears they will be shed for you....here I am, hiding my true nature behind the waning thoughts kept to myself, her eyes finding me in the night no where to ....runing out of breath my heart is climbinh out of the unearthly dawn help me be a human, don't let me fall down, I coudn't take it agai
      n, love me as I let my hair blow in the wind...
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      my eyes they cry tears for you, it was unfair, a game I played by toying with your heart all I could do was runn away, turning away from the light of day, to meet the night and forget the sunset beeliveing I'd find my heart, no longer feeling your touch, my eyes tearing up, my mind torn apart, the glowing of the earth, a special place in this soul for you even when your gone, unfair the winds of change stealing love away from us all challenging everyone to lash out and climb out of this whole....too deep to have anyone, the act of descertion the battle warring on within the crying for my sins I apologize to you for being a wimp, the long battle weary darling, I'm crying, screaming, wanting to be with you, but it wasn't meant to be

      close the door, tell me what love is for, heart cannot move on anymore, the tears of a loved one mean my sins, my life, not worth the whistling wind, turning away from duty to hold out in a life time, long for heavens reverence, love me like we were meant to be, not the fake ones I’ve known a flase angel calling my name haunting my dreams, tearing upart my heart from mmy chst its useless, it can’t help me, the day will bring another disgrace, hold out you eyes for my life, let me fall, let me swim in doubt, till I’m full, let the wind heal wounds, tell me truths, tell me what ZI’m longing to hear as the sounds start again the casual lives of my friends knowing nothing hating their happiness, alone in the night, crying for life, give my light.

      Tell me who it is I am, allow me to find out, kissing a stranger, looking out for the meaning, no one knows, it’s a cruel joke, wandering alone, is just the way it is, falling from the sky, drwoning in my own blood, my tears puddles, they keep me company now, linger on and show me how to be strong, feel your skin, feel the wind, the way you smiles making me want nothing more, awakening from a prefect dream to the real world uncaring, tossed into the mess, of people scrambleing all of them alone too, no one understand you the way I do, kissing your hands, tell me what to do, fallen warrior, having given in to loves trick, pity him the harm to his soul can not be undone he wants to be left alone, needing to have feelings again, his paradice taken from his dream.


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      tell me of the destined wind, show me the light, let it shine through me, crying on my pillows as the heart beats on somber tones, the crying of the wind for our soul, intertwinded and lost, toghther the future, predetermined and yet I'm lost missing your touch, a fear that i will wait a life time, to find the tenderness inside the bitter rights, my wandering soul, walk alone, tell t

    • I got a job...no 3 jobs

      12 years ago

      Atomis

      why is it when you don't have a job its hard as hell to find work but then what you do you have more then you can handle and no more free time :(

    • new years with no one to kiss...

      12 years ago

      Atomis

      I' sorry but this is hell...I'm in hell...I kinda new this was gonna happen....again....come on ball drop and people will be kissing without me...damn hoildays...:(drunk2.gif
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    • man...thought today was new years eve lo

      12 years ago

      Atomis

      well need to think about the date lol....new years resolutions...everyone's got one?

      I love the movie cars lol favorite scene
      "my name is lightening macqueen I'm the famous race car I need you to call my team so they can come and save me...do you understand....wait wait don't leave me ....here ....................I'm in hillbilly hell"
      this movie is fantastic one of my new favorites....

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      I'm a preseasional instrument of speed and aeromatics lol

    • ok ok....

      12 years ago

      Atomis

      been distracted lately how was everyone's xmas...I had a truck break down on me in the middle of a highway...started smoking...luckily there was a shoulder for me to pull over on...found out the mechanic left the oil cap off....so my my engine blew a rod straight through the oil pan......a friend of mine hit her head and ended up in the hospital for xmas.....wouldn't tell me boo....says she's really sick .....worries me wouldn't you be worried...if one of your friends....or one of you guys were making frequent visits to the hospital....

    • um...yeah

      12 years ago

      Atomis

      17c.jpg Shaka kaun...what a name...

    • AIR GEAR

      12 years ago

      Atomis

      ok I give the anime AIR GEAR is fantastic...need a second season...it deservies it facinating draggs you into their world for sure

    • wash the traces

      12 years ago

      Atomis

      who has my space....?????....I guess I do...its more like an after thought a friend told me too...not so sure about it...

      here a poem to those who need a random thought

      Wash over me
      drain away the stains
      crushing under the strain
      giving instant grace
      its grippin
      full fill dreams
      caught in your head
      my heart
      broken
      as you go higher
      without me
      forgetten
      in the darkness
      its sting
      peaceful distain
      welcoming it...
      leting the cold emptyness in...

    • BOOM' BA

      12 years ago

      Atomis

      happy holidays everything is in full swing earlier days......traffic is at a stand still and your late for work what do you do? A)drive on the shoulder B)sit there and stew C)curse and complain about the guy in front of you D) Read a newspaper E) check traffic reports on the radio F)brush your teeth G) all of the above ?????????????????????

    • Your a mean one Atomis

      12 years ago

      Atomis

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      ITS THE MOST WONDERFUL TIME ....05.jpg
      OF THE YEAR
      to be working here
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      there'll people for roasting and heros for toasting...and customers handing you dough..
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      there will be will be sales of great gloryies of XMAS's tally's of sales long long ago...(5.6 mil last year)
      fear...for its here
      its the stone cold brokest year...
      happy happyness here...
      insert your cash here
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      for this is the most wonderful time of the YEAR!!!!!!!!
      INSERT YOUR MODS HERE, for charity lol

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  • Comments (47)

    • Atomis

      11 years ago

      wow that is scarey

    • zonetrooper

      12 years ago

      herro?! .....ningaWIZARD!? W.T.F.?!

    • zonetrooper

      12 years ago

      give this good mod pplz!! yay for spartan samaraieS?! wtf..?

    • belle

      12 years ago

      ahahha thanx but there prolly wont be some new stuff for a while...if im doing any art work n that itl be for schol..they wont be finished for ages :)

    • belle

      12 years ago

      pardon ? lmao sorry i dnt get it :$ smiley3.gif

    • belle

      12 years ago

      aw hey thankyou for the mods n comment :D

    • ulovekelly

      12 years ago

      lol sorry ill put a new one up

    • SamAreEye

      12 years ago

      they made a real show outta naruto...man I gotta see this one...wonder how many episodes it ran

      No. I highly doubt that they'll do something so cheesy. But then again Japan has made anime into live action before. But that picture is just cosplay. You know, when people dress up as their favorite characters. Just like my newest pic and the one I'll be posting tomorrow!

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    • SamAreEye

      12 years ago

      um.......angel was good its canelled now....um..

      Yeah. That was a big WTF?!!! for me. I miss that show.

      smiley0.gif ~Funky

    • BkRoseKitty

      12 years ago

      Haha, thanx fer the comment :P

    • 180

      13 years ago

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    • oodoughnut

      13 years ago

      i did have a picture that had me flippin everyone off i took it off for more important stuff

    • nofxmn1

      13 years ago

      NINJA WIZARDS!!!

    • Wolf_Lord

      13 years ago

      thanks for the comment

    • BkRoseKitty

      13 years ago

      Hell Yeah! Hahaha

    • Atomis

      13 years ago

      wow so if you become a doctor you'd be like patch adamspatch-adams-poster01.jpg

    • Valacar

      13 years ago

      Hmm DNA.. I guess I could.. Use diffrent colors for A-T C-G. Sure.. Souldnt be too hard.. hehe I made a Ramdom DNA Generator and Splicer from an Excel document. Diffrent color for each one. Helps to have actually studied Genitics and DNA. hahaha..

    • Atomis

      13 years ago

      lol man thats pretty funny......can you do DNA that rocks

    • Valacar

      13 years ago

      Poodles are easy.. Its the multi-Balloon ones that get hard.. I tried to do a Bart Simpson and got lost.. then one of the balloons popped..

    • Valacar

      13 years ago

      HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!

      A little late but I just got home. ;)

    • wrapper310

      13 years ago

      No...

    • fizshigol

      13 years ago

      so this horse walks into a bar and the bartender asks, "why the long face?"

    • blood86

      13 years ago

      huzzah for FLCL!!!!!!

    • Atomis

      13 years ago

      Talking is good I just messin with you lol

    • funiemonkie2

      13 years ago

      i dont spam, i just talk........ alot i guess smiley0.gif

    • no_good_name

      14 years ago

      you've been....
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      ^_^

    • Dreamen16

      14 years ago

      "Friendship is like a popsicle on two sticks, when the friendship breaks, so does the popsicle, making everything a mess"

    • Dreamen16

      14 years ago

      hey, you haven't been around in 2 weeks or so...so I'm wondering if you are still alright.

    • wrapper310

      14 years ago

      Total time online: 0d 0h 53m

      So not a nerd you are.

    • Atomis

      14 years ago

      I love randomness I'm a random kinda guy lol ::grins:: thanks for the shout out love those ::smiles::

    • Dreamen16

      14 years ago

      A random hello on a random day at a random time in a random place. Hope that this random message makes you smile and stays on your face for a while.

    • Atomis

      14 years ago

      nah thats all a matter of opinion

    • DarkRiku

      14 years ago

      Yeah you started on here a month or so after I joined, and your doing much better than me

    • Atomis

      14 years ago

      I like comments on poetry life.......religion philosophy....whatever give shout outs to your mom lol

    • Atomis

      14 years ago

      Why is a raven like a writing desk?

    • Atomis

      14 years ago

      tell me when to stop breathing and I'll try my best

    • Atomis

      14 years ago

      bouncing from 9 to 10 in karma and then back again....when I get lazy it drops back down lol.....I'll stay in this range if I can

    • Atomis

      14 years ago

      ::looks around and nods:: who knew lol

    • no_good_name

      14 years ago

      you have plenty of friends!
      :)

    • GodisAFlag

      14 years ago

      urs aint bad either

    • AbyssalAura

      14 years ago

      Atomis... kool name... like "Atomic".

    • Atomis

      14 years ago

      Yea, best friend me myself and I we carpool to class

    • wrapper310

      14 years ago

      I did the same thing with the friends button. Even though I am a friend to me they won't let me be one.

    • GodisAFlag

      14 years ago

      lol yea they mock u mercilessly if u hit the add friends button on your own name (ah did it on axident ah swear)

    • Atomis

      14 years ago

      This is interesting where did my pictures go? oh well lol its not really that important

    • Atomis

      14 years ago

      Sleep is for the weak and those who are actually happy with their lives

    • Atomis

      14 years ago

      Um friends I need then cause they won't let me be my own best friend

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