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    • Before we get to Fullmetalgelion....

      13 years ago

      Deadbeat34

      ...I'd like to thank all who helped me with my work yesterday, you guys kick ass.

      Second, before I put up the ch. tonight, I want to direct your attention to a fandub parody of Eva that I belive deserves some attention, wether you all know it or not...

      Behold, Evangelion: ReDeath!

      The plot is as follows (taken from here):

      The gist is, Gendo, seeking to become the Uberpimp, accidentally caused the 2nd impact by playing Prince's "1999" in the year 2000, breaking some cosmic expiration date. Shinji wanders around trying to find out what these things called 'melons' and 'nookie' are, Misato & Ritsuko catfight over Kaji, Bob Dole and Di$ney attempting to take over the world, and then climactic battle with the eleventeenth angel and the coming 3rd impact.


      I was wondering if you guy could provide me with a link to donwload this movie, as I think we all wold enjoy this film....

    • DDT

      13 years ago

      Deadbeat34

      Before Rachel Carson's book, "Silent Spring" brought up accusations that DDT caused cancer and harmed bird populations by thining their eggshells, DDT was a chemical hero. A pesticde that had maximum effectivness when it came to stoping the spread of Malaria, Typhus, and other Insect and Mosiquito born diseases...

      Should the ban on DDT be lifted to combat these diseases once again? Or is the human risk to great? State your opinon in my comments and provide an explination. Mods will be awarded to all who do this (note, that means opinon AND a detailed explination, I need something to work with)....

      Your help is desperately needed! The sooner I get your data means the sooner I'll be able to finish this assignment and put up the next chapter of Fullmetalgelion!

    • the_me

      13 years ago

      Deadbeat34

      Having been absent from the site for a while (or at least until the few times I could get here and make a few comments), I was not initally aware of what happened to a good friend of mine, the_me. I was also unaware of the speculation as to whether or not this was a stunt he was pulling to get mods.

      I'll be honest with you, I hope it is a stunt. If only for the sake of knowing that he is okay. If it is true, then he will be in my thoughts and my prayers, and I hope you'll keep him in yours as well.

      the_me43baddb4d73b6.jpg

      Fullmetalgelion will return by mid-week this week.....

    • Omake Time!

      13 years ago

      Deadbeat34

      For the sake of improvement, please leave critiques in the form of comments…

      Neon Genesis Evangelion gets BLEACHED!!!

      Author’s Notes: If Fullmetalgelion is my regular running serial, think of this three chapter short as being nothing more than an omake. Don’t worry your pretty little head; Fullmetalgelion will be back next week. The reason I do this is because, though Bleach is my favorite series, I have yet to write a fan fiction for it. I came up with a premise for two Eva/Bleach crossovers: one funny, one serious. The following story is the funny one, and it will be completed in three chapters at random intervals, enjoy. BTW, this fan fiction in no way crosses with Fullmetalgelion, thin of it as a separate universe. As for timeframe, it takes place between Angel attacks. Which ones? I don’t know, you decide.


      (Opening Theme: “CHANCE!†by UVERworld)

      Track. 1 (Waltzing Dead)

      Asuka Langley Soryu gave a small sniffle. “H-How was I supposed to know this was going to h-happen?†she cried as she wiped away her tears with a handkerchief. “D-Don’t worry Asuka,†said Major Misato Katsuragi rather nervously. Before the two, lying unconscious in the hospital bed before them, was Shinji Ikari. IV’s and sensors riddled his body as a monitor opposite the women beeped softly. “After all,†said Misato, “It’s not like we’re always able to anticipate the outcome of our actions.†“’Anticipate the outcome?’ SHE KNEW DAMN WELL WHAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN!†screamed an angry Shinji Ikari.
      The Shinji that had just screamed in anger was significantly different from his counterpart in the bed. For one, while the unconscious Eva pilot was dressed in hospital gown, this Shinji wore what seemed to be a black robe similar to the type worn by samurai, and while on the subject of samurai, a rather impressive katana was sheathed at his side. Despite having just yelled in extreme anger, the girls next to him did not react. In fact, they acted as though no sound was made at all. The only person who did react to Shinji’s outburst was Rei Ayanami, standing behind the girls and clamping her ears. She shot a very cross look at the black robed Third Child.
      “You know, aside from Ayanami, of course, they’re not gonna hear you.†At that moment, a tall boy with spiked red hair walked through the wall. He wore robes that were identical to Shinji’s, but the sword he carried was vastly different; it was as tall as the boy, and lacked a hilt and a guard. All in all, it resembled a giant kitchen knife. “Honestly, too all those who can see you right now, you look like a raving idiot,†said Ichigo Kurosaki, giving Shinji his own set of cross looks. “That aside, when are you going to let it go? It was just a joke.†“I don’t think throwing me down five flights of stairs constitutes a joke,†grumbled Shinji. It was at that moment that a loud beeping radiated from Shinji’s robes. After rummaging around for a bit, Shinji pulled a cell phone from his pocket. “Damn,†he said, “another Hollow.†He turned to Ichigo, “Per our agreement, I’d better go get this one.†Shinji flew past Asuka and Misato, through wall, and out onto the rooftops of Tokyo-3.
      Ichigo turned to Rei, “You coming?†Rei nodded in reply as Ichigo went after Shinji. Rei turned to Asuka and Misato, “I’m afraid I must be on my way.†“Oh, OK then, see you later Rei,†said Misato. “Bye, Wonder Girl,†said Asuka. Rei left the hospital room and made her way to the streets of Tokyo-3. She moved into a secluded alleyway, before wall kicking her way to the roof. A short while later, she managed to catch up to her Shinigami companions. “About time, Wonder Girl,†said Ichigo. “Please do not call me that,†replied Rei, though her ever-present monotone had given the statement, her eyes shot daggers at the red headed god of death. “I’m curious about something,†inquired Shinji, “why don’t you ever say that to Asuka when she calls you that?†Rei sighed, “the same reason for your 180, Ikari.â€Â
      Indeed, ever since being violently torn from his flesh by the merciless enemy that was the concrete stairs in Misato Katsuragi’s apartment complex, Shinji had gone from being weak willed and introverted to violent and over bearing (almost like the person responsible for his recent spiritual dilemma). It was eventually explained by Ichigo, that in a few rare cases, being torn from one’s physical form sometimes rids one from their mental inhibitions. As was the case with young Ikari, the child who was wrapped around the fingers of so many would more than willingly take the sword at his hilt and ram it through the head of his own father (Ichigo has made a point of keep Shinji as far away from Central Dogma as possible).
      Shinji was about to respond when a loud howling interrupted him. “It’s close,†said Ichigo, as Shinji grabbed the hilt of his blade. Hoping over the next building revealed to him his target. Its form resembled a giant cockroach, that is, if it wasn’t for the large hole in its center and the giant white skull-like mask that served as its head. It was over in an instant. Shinji drew his blade and rammed it through the monster’s head, as he had done more than a hundred times before for the past two weeks. The beast soon dissolved, and it became apparent to the young Shinigami what the monster had been after. Crouching in the corner was a young girl of seventeen years. A small chain flowed down from her chest, it was rattling slightly, as the girl was shaking. Shinji cringed at the sight of the girl, he remembered her, or at least, her remembered landing his Eva on top of her.
      He approached her, sword in hand. A bright glow enveloped the young ghost, as Shinji placed the end of his blade on her forehead, leaving a stamp when he removed it. “I’m sorry,†he whispered as the girl sank in the light. “Nice work,†said Ichigo, “let’s goâ€Â.

      To be continued….

      (Ending Theme: “Namidaboshi†by Puppy Pet)

    • Fullmetalgelion pwnzorz joo!

      13 years ago

      Deadbeat34

      For the sake of improvement, please leave critiques in the form of comments…


      Neon Genesis Evangelion:
      The Fullmetal Alchemist


      Author’s Notes: I see that the stunt I pulled last week has gotten your attention. The spoiler I gave is way, WAY far in the future, and as I write this chapter from the backseat of a car, as I am on a trip this week, I promise to stick with Fullmetalgelion to its end. You may notice some new characters in this chapter, and the multiple head injuries they will be giving Ed. Enjoy. Fan art is still needed, SERIOUSLY.

      ***

      Rei: Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To attain…

      Asuka: Something of equal value must be lost, that is alchemy’s first law…

      Shinji: Of equivalent exchange. In those days, they believed it to be the worlds one and only truth.

      (Opening Theme: “Promised Land 2005†by L’arc~en~ciel)

      Ch. 8 (Doctor’s Orders…)

      “Good morning Major Katsuragi, let me brief you on what has happened so far today. At 10:18 AM this morning, the plane from Armestris landed in the Tokyo-3 International Airport. Colonel Roy Mustang, First Lieutenant Riza Hawkeye, Major Alex Armstrong, Second Lieutenant Jean Havoc, Second Lieutenant Heymans Breda, Sergeant Major Kain Fury, Warrant Officer Vato Fallman, and one unidentified civilian disembarked from the plane at 10:23 AM. At 10:30 AM they were greeted Commander Ikari and Sub-Commander Futsyuki, as well as a Tokyo-3 delegation. At 10:45 AM, the Military personal attended the public briefing by city council. As of now they are proceeding to the official briefing at NERV headquarters.â€Â
      “And what of the civilian, Maya?†yawned a very tired looking Misato. “The civilian, identified as technical surgeon Dr. Winry Rockbell, broke off from the main group before the public briefing and proceeded to the primary hospital in the geo-front, she should be arriving there shortly.â€Â

      ***

      It was silent in Edward’s hospital room. Well, as silent as having Shinji, Rei, Asuka, and Al visiting could be anyway. “Well, it just goes to show you sixth child,†Asuka said as she sighed heavily, “this is what happens when you charge in with no idea as to what you’re doing.†“But wasn’t it Ed who figured out how beat the monster? And him who delivered the killing blow?†chimed in Al. “He’s got you there, Asuka,†said Shinji. A loud thwack sounded in the room as Asuka’s cane (which, despite completely recovering her mobility, she kept around for the coming reason) made quick work of Shinji’s head. Edward was chuckling, “what’s the matter? Afraid of being upstaged?†At these words, Asuka became livid. “You know what?! I wish that someone would come in here and beat you half to death with a wrench!â€Â
      Almost as if on Asuka’s words, the door of the room flung open. Standing there was a young girl, no older than any of the pilots. She had pale, long blonde hair and bright blue eyes. She was wearing what looked to be a sterilized mechanics outfit, but this aside she would of looked rather beautiful, had it not been for the face of pure anger (one which rivaled Asuka’s) she was wearing. At sight of her, both Ed and Al started shaking, their faces contorted in fear. The girl’s eyes moved on to Edward, in the hospital bed, and she muttered something in German.
      Asuka was confused, “T-the arm?†Not a second later, did the girl pull a significantly large wrench out of her pocket, and point it at the still shaking Edward. She began shouting a long string of very colorful German curses (some that made even Asuka blush) as she ran over to Edward and Al and began fiercely beating them each in rapid succession with the wrench. The pilots backed away from the scene, even Rei was slightly frightened by the girl’s rage. It was some time before the girl noticed the pilots cowering in the corner of the room. She left the battered and bruised brothers, and walked over to the children. She put on here cutest possible smile, shook each of their hands, and said in perfect Japanese, “Hi! My name is Winry Rockbell, it’s nice to meet you all!â€Â
      Thirty seconds of silence pervaded before Shinji managed to choke up a response, “It’s n-nice to meet y-you to.†“Nice to meet you? IT’S NEVER FUCKING NICE TO MEET YOU, YOU DAMN HARP-,†but Ed’s words were cut short by a wrench in between the eyes. Winry turned to face the battered alchemist, “Listen up Ed! I’m going to say this in Japanese so the EVERYONE here will understand. I don’t care how important whatever you have to do is; it’s no excuse to get yourself nearly killed! Seriously! Do you have to get into a fight at every possible opportunity?†“It wasn’t like he had a choice this time!†interjected Al. “And exactly what do you mean by that?!†“Well,†began Ed. “SPIT IT OUT!†“I WAS ORDERED INTO COMBAT! SO SHUT UP ALREADY!†“O-ordered?†Winry wore an expression torn between horror and confusion, she sighed as she moved towards Ed, grabbed his shoulder, hit a switch and hence released Ed from the tangled mess that was once his arm. “Oh well, I’m gonna need at least a day to fix this, until then, I hear by discharge from this hospital.†“D-discharge?†Edward asked, obviously confused. “Oh!†said Winry, a smile on her face, “I almost forgot to tell you! In order to get me into the country, Colonel Mustang gave me a special Military dispensation. In other words, you’re looking at Doctor Winry Rockbell! Oh! Almost forgot! The Colonel wanted to see you as soon as you were out of here, so I suggest you get going†“Oh joy,†said Ed sarcastically, thoughts meeting with the Colonel bearing a less than pleasant weight on his mind.

      ***

      While his arm was in repair, Edward got himself dressed back into his normal attire, and made his way to a private conference room in Central Dogma. A room that, oddly enough, had windows overlooking the Eva cage; Edward walked through the door.

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    • zOMG Fullmetalgelion spoiler!

      13 years ago

      Deadbeat34

      Behold! A small peice from a chapter in the far future! Enjoy, speculate and anaylze, your on your own for figuring out this one....

      Feel free to post speculation in commnets....

      Here is teh Spoiler:

      Ed was down. He was in pain. Now more than ever was he convinced that he was going to die. He began hallucinating, his mind dweling on some on the sights, faces, and voices that his life had beheld. "You'll never understand! Congradulations, your a dog of the military now. If you think that your arugment has persuaded me, your wrong. You and I aren't so different you know. Why do you think we succeded where you and your brother failed? All State Alchemists MUST DIE! Big brother, HELP ME! It amazes me Edward, all this time you've been sitting on a power greater than the philosphers stone, and yet you never realized it...

      ....all this time you've been sitting on a power greater than the philosphers stone, and yet you never realized it....

      ...you've been sitting on a power greater than the philosphers stone....

      ...sitting on a power....

      ...a power....

      Ed opened his eyes, his pupils had become a bright red. EVA-05's jaw line broke open, and both it and it's pilot let out a blood currdling howl....

      :Teh spoiler ends!

      Enjoy! And once again, feel free to speculate in the comments! New Ch. up later this weekend!

    • The Anime Fans Strike Back!

      13 years ago

      Deadbeat34

      Before we do the Fullmetalgelion thing this week, there is something that I have been wanting to do for ages....

      As many of you anime fan know, the liscencing firm known as 4kids Entertainment has been the bane of the anime world for the longest time. Taking great series, and butchering them to death to make them "kid/America friendly". (Believe it or not, these are NOT the guys who ruined Naruto, that was VIZ media, and their crime is the result of half-assed job, not total debasement like 4kids, even though what VIZ media did was horrible, their crimes are NOTHING compared to 4kids.)...

      While scanning the Net, I found THIS....

      Originally, I was planning this whole Revolution Idea, but now I just say join and fuck around with them until your banned, that'll give em' a nice shock....

      If you can, report any damage you do back here so that we can keep record...

      Edit: SHIT! I have to call it off, it looks like the forum admins and mods check all the posts before they appear on their boards (clever bastards) so we must retreat and regroup for now, until a way around this can be determined...

      For a better reference to what 4kids does to anime, look here:

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    • Fullmetalgelioned in the face!

      13 years ago

      Deadbeat34

      For the sake of improvement, please leave critiques in the form of comments…

      Neon Genesis Evangelion:
      The Fullmetal Alchemist


      Author’s Note: Well, as of this chapter, I’m bringing in more of the FMA cast, this will lead to some humor, and some extremely serious moments. But mostly humor. I also apologize for the delay in the production of this chapter, but as the below will show, it was worth your wait. I’m also consider putting the chapters in a downloadable PDF format rather that posting them here, but I want to know of your willing to download rather than just read it here. Fan art is still needed, SERIOUSLY.

      ***

      Rei: Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To attain…

      Asuka: Something of equal value must be lost, that is alchemy’s first law…

      Shinji: Of equivalent exchange. In those days, they believed it to be the worlds one and only truth.

      (Opening Theme: “Promised Land 2005†by L’arc~en~ciel)

      Ch. 7 (Fullmetal Alchemist Strikes Again….)

      Silence pervaded in the NERV control room. Despite the numerous blaring claxons and alarms, all the personal were rendered speechless by the recent display of Alchemic power that had been demonstrated by Edward Elric not moments ago. All around the room, dropped jaws had fixed themselves upon the faces of everyone viewing the primary screen. Everyone, except for the two people situated at the top of the command center. “So, that is the power of Alchemy?†asked the stern faced Deputy Commander Kozo Futsyuki. “Indeed, though I never expected it to translate to the Eva so well, I suppose the committee has once again outdone itself when it comes to ‘correcting their mistakes’,†replied Commander Gendo Ikari, sinister smile upon his face.
      “Maya,†whispered Dr. Ritsuko Akagi, “when this is over, I want a complete readout on what exactly transpired in the last five minutes, do you understand?†“Yes, I do understand, Dr. Akagi,†Maya said, the look upon her face is one which few ever dared to wear in the presence of a superior, “I will also take note that, during the course of the battle, your hand came dangerously close to the mechanical arm’s deactivation switch. Be advised that if you were to ‘accidentally’ hit that switch, that Unit-05 and its pilot would be lost right now.†Ritsuko was agitated, “I understand that Lieutenant Ibuki. Do you understand what the rank ‘Lieutenant’ entitles you to?†“Yes ma’am, I do, I apologize for questioning your authority,†said Maya, nothing but poison in her voice.
      “Um, Hello? NERV guys? You listening?†Ed’s voice had just come over the monitor, indicated by the popping up of a small red square on the main screen with the words “EVA-05 SOUND ONLY†on it in bold black letters. It was calm and collected, very different from the child that was hallucinating moments ago. Misato went over to a vacant terminal and pressed the “respond†button, “we are here, Ed, what’s up?†“Would you do me a favor Major? Put Al on a private line with me.†“Oh!†said Misato, somewhat surprised by the Fullmetal Alchemist’s unusual request. Al, who up until now was doing his best to keep out of the way of the NERV personal in the control room, stepped forward. A few keyboard clicks later, Misato handed Al a telephone that allowed him and Ed to talk. “Big Brother!†Al began, voice filled with excitement, “I’ve been watching from down here! That was amazing! I didn’t know you could use alchemy with th-WHAT DO YOU MEAN HOMUN-I mean, uh, how can you be sure of that? We haven’t tested that yet! Oh! I get it! Sure thing! I’ll get right on it!†Al hung the phone up; “Ed wanted me to ask you guys if your sensors were able to get any readings on the monster.†“We tried,†replied Hyuga, “but so far we haven’t been able to penetrate its skin, something in its epidermal layer is preventing us from getting a reading.†“Okay then,†said Al, “My brother has a plan to let us find out what this thing is…â€Â

      ***

      “Shinji! SHINJI! Are you all right?†“Yeah, I’m fine. For the most part, that is.†Unit-02 was helping a heavily damaged Unit-01 up, and Asuka’s eyes were darting between Shinji (who was floating in a small image beside her) and the “Angel†(which was still reeling from Ed’s earlier blow). A portrait of Edward suddenly appeared next to the Second Child looking rather smug, “Well, well, well, showing some concern for others for a change, aren’t we, Madam Supreme Bitch Soryu?†“BITE ME, MIDGET!†screamed Asuka. Although obviously pissed at the “midget†comment, Ed kept his cool, “Listen up, I know how to kill this thing. But before we can do that, there is something we need to take care of, so we need to keep it busy while the boys downstairs get everything ready.â€Â
      “How long?†gasped Shinji, clutching the places on his body that mirrored the areas where Unit-01 had been damaged. Edward sighed, “Ten minutes, at the least.†“T-TEN MINUTES?!†screamed Asuka once more, “Are you insane?†“You wouldn’t be the first one to ask that lady.†Ed said rather flatly, cutting his communications with Unit’s 01 and 02, <and to be honest, I hope you’re not the last.> Edward was still staring the creature down. It had stopped reeling and now was staring back at Ed. Ed was sure that if the creature could change its expression, it would look pretty pissed right about now. “NERV guys,†said Ed, bringing up the Command Center on the monitor as he clapped his Eva’s hand together and “retracted†the blade he had made moments earlier, “can you send me a distance melee weapon? You know, like a spear or something?†“Misato gave a cunning grin, “One spear, coming up!â€Â
      The building next to Edward suddenly split open, revealing the end of a long pole. “Hey! Thanks guys!†Ed grabbed this and pulled it out of its holster. However, the look of satisfaction he was wearing turned into disdain when he saw the spear in full.

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    • Why Fullmetalgelion is late this week...

      13 years ago

      Deadbeat34

      I'm packing more crap into this chapter than you can handle, an arc ender for all time if you will.

      There will be laughs, tears, mysteries, and the introduction of more characters from the FMA universe (I though Ed and Al were getting kind of lonely)....

      The chapter will be up either tonight or later tomorrow, until then, feel free to speculate in the comments...

      TTFN...

    • Fullmetalgelion: Back and Badass

      13 years ago

      Deadbeat34

      For the sake of improvement, please leave comments…

      Neon Genesis Evangelion:
      The Fullmetal Alchemist


      Author’s Note: Originally, this chapter was supposed to be an omake, but I left myself in a tight situation is the last chapter, so I figured I’d finish up this arc before having my fun. Fan art is still needed.


      Rei: Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To attain…

      Asuka: Something of equal value must be lost, that is alchemy’s first law…

      Shinji: Of equivalent exchange. In those days, they believed it to be worlds one and only truth.

      (Opening Theme: “Promised Land 2005†by L’arc~en~ciel)

      Ch. 6 (The Deadly Sin Known as Lust… Part 2: Baseline of Equivalency)
      “Entry plugs inserted! LCL injection complete! Pilot’s are synched and ready to go!†“Good, patch me through to the pilots, Hyuga.†“Yes ma’am.†“Okay, listen up! The enemy is less than 10 clicks outside the city, as soon as you’re on the surface, grab your weapons and move to safe positions. Perform coordinated attacks in groups of two.†“Yes ma’am!†Said all four of the Eva pilots over the monitor. “Hyuga, can you give a line to Ed alone?†asked the Major. “Sure thing.†A few clicks of the keys later, Only Ed’s monitor remained on the screen. “Nervous, Ed? Combat tends to be a bit unnerving.†“Not so much actually, strange enough as it is, I’ve been is situations like this before,†said Edward with an air of confidence; <it’s just that it has never been on this SCALE before>.
      “Okay then, good luck Edward,†a few more keystrokes, and Ed’s picture had left the screen. “The Evas are on the launch pad ma’am, whenever you’re ready.†Major Katsuragi gave a slight nod, she turned forward, facing the crowd of technicians before her, knowing that her words would once again plunge them all into a world they had not a part of since the death of the last Angel. “EVANGELION LAUCH!â€Â

      ***

      As these words blared over his monitor, Ed heard the sound of lock bolts being released. Almost at once, he felt the g-forces press his body down to the seat as him and his Eva were sped upwards to the fortified city above. The sky above was cloudy and gray, filled with the same foreboding the pilots were carrying. As the locks clinging Unit-05 to the scaffold came undone, Ed moved toward the building that had opened up to reveal housing for two rifles, one of which was in the hands of Unit-02. Ed grabbed the other rifle, it normally wasn’t his preferred method of combat, but he had little choice at the moment. Of in the distance, Unit-00 had clamped to itself a positron rifle, and was standing at the ready. Standing at the edge of the city, Unit-01 had a large, kantana-like SEI blade in its hands. It was vividly scanning the horizon, awaiting the approach of the attacker.
      “We’re taking the mid position, move your ass dumkfroff!†shouted an agitated Asuka. “Quit your bitching, I’m moving,†said an irritated Ed. “Excuse me!†retorted Asuka in anger, “Where the hell do you get off on calling me bi-“ however, Asuka’s words were suddenly interrupted by the sight of Unit-01 flying right in between the two and into the building behind them. Ed and Asuka turned to face the form of mankind’s newest enemy.
      Ed was frozen in terror. Next to him, Asuka unloaded multiple rounds at their attacker. The bullets flew through the air and hit their target, dead-on. Black-reddish blood sprayed everywhere, as the monster was knocked slightly back. Shinji, having got up off the ground, grabbed his blade and ran towards the beast. He raised his blade and put large gashes into creature before jumping back a good five blocks. “Rei! Now!†A large part of its mid-section simply disappeared under the stress of Rei positron rifle, right before a large explosion encompassed the monster. “You see that, Sixth Child?†said Asuka watching the smoke from the blast, her voice triumphant, “that’s how we do things in Tokyo-3!â€Â
      Down in the control room, dead silence prevailed among the masses. As everyone held their breath, waiting to see if their attack was a success. Misato was the one who broke the tension, “I-is it dead?†Her answer came in the form of high-pitched screams from Shinji. From the smoke, two lance-like appendages pierced Unit-01’s chest on both sides. Shinji struggled against them, trying to physically pull the lances from the body of the unit, but to no avail. As the smoke, the monster itself came into view, the parts damaged in the initial attack being renewed by the black-cackling light surging through its body.
      Without mercy, it took Unit-01, still struggling against its recent impalement and lifted Shinji into the air, at least 60 feet. Then, with tremendous force, it brought him crashing down, slamming the Unit head first into the pavement below. In his entry plug, a small amount of blood issued from Shinji’s mouth and mixed into the LCL around him. He tried to get up, but with surprising speed, the “Angel†was on top of him, having pulled its lances from his chest upon impact. It placed its foot on top of the unit and knocked Shinji back down to the ground. With one if its “hands†placed over Unit-01, it began to extend and retract the lances in rapid succession, stabbing Shinji repeatedly in a different spot each time. The scene sent a chill through Ed’s spine, somewhere in the back of his subconscious, the face of the homunculus known only as Lust gave a wicked and sickeningly sinister smile.

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    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      I know what you mean, Abe's making this rather enjoyable...

    • HeavyYeti

      13 years ago


      When the 2nd Bound was introduced, did you hear that music? It's the same song that we've been hearing earlier throughout the series, but all...vampired up. Organs and what now...I loved it.

      This filler is actually turning out to be rather good stuff.

    • Biolith

      13 years ago

      And I finally find a group elsewhere in the world that likes Bleach...

    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      Thanks!

    • wigglepie13

      13 years ago

      happy v-day!
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    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      Would love to, but lack the ability, or patience, to use IRC (yes, I am aware tha my machine is fucked up...)

    • Teh_master

      13 years ago

      #animerefuge in the rizon servers

      Hello, This is what me and a friend made last night, Its For the people of Red vs Blue to get togeather and RP,Talk about well anything Anime on RVB Fourms and such. I hope you guys like it first 2 people get Admin!

      once again

      #animerefuge in the rizon servers

      If you have any questions please PM me or just drop on in~

    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      That was the next ep preview folks! A big hand to scientist13! To answer the achilles hell thing, it's a metaphor to describe a weak spot...

    • scientist13

      13 years ago

      After a rocky start, Ed is now on his feet and has a plan to save the day but will it work in time to save Shinji from his multiple wounds. And what does Achilles's heel have to do with this most action packed story. Come back next time and find out on FULLMETALGELION!!!!![/b]

    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      The Vizard is the pwnge...

    • Rock_Steady

      13 years ago

      like the awards you got. espacially the psycho ichigo one. he looks cool in that one.

    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      Wow, nice commentary...

      Besides, nothing happened to Al, he's just lingering in the background, witing for his momemt...

    • scientist13

      13 years ago

      Oh why did they stop Ed right when he was about to do some alchemy? Could he achieve such power as to transform things with his eva? And what happened to Al? Find out on next times Fullmetalgelion!

    • Teh_master

      13 years ago

      Im a real boy

    • Galim

      13 years ago

      The idiots at WETA misspelled her name. however they clarified that at the top of the website. here is rei from the new series of Evangelion
      weta_eva18.jpg

    • eggbert666

      13 years ago

      got new pics. come check them out

    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      Thank you! I don't either, I jsut know that there are fans out there sharpening their swords right now....

    • scientist13

      13 years ago

      i see nothing wrong with your story

    • spartanace10

      13 years ago

      sup howya doin?

    • Inufreak05

      13 years ago

      read my journal

    • Trubo

      13 years ago

      due to the temp ban i asked for school related issues, i seemed to have lost all of my friends. just wanted to give you the heads up and an invite.

    • dman123

      13 years ago

      hahahahahahahahaha

    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      Intresting, thanks...

    • _shuyome_

      13 years ago

      jrwj5z
      js0nzr
      :P

    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      You said it...

      Thanks, BTW...

    • FadingLight

      13 years ago

      Just droppin a mod to a fellow jew. Dont know why. Probably cause im bored as hell and its 4 am

    • deadbeat135

      13 years ago

      damn right, DeadBeats rock! WOOOOOO

    • deadbeat135

      13 years ago

      thanks alot, although i lost my sanity years ago ^_^

    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      Umm thanks? I thought you gave me that already....

    • the_me

      13 years ago

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    • Inufreak05

      13 years ago

      check my journal

    • MisterRogers

      13 years ago

      Hey could you Vote for me smiley9.gifsmiley9.gifHere smiley9.gifsmiley9.gif

      And if you do, Thanks smiley0.gif


      Oh and A Happy New Year
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    • dman123

      13 years ago

      Im watching you >>

    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      Same to you!

    • Kumiho

      13 years ago

      Happy New Year dude!

    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      Indeed...

    • Yamato145

      13 years ago

      Ok, thanks ... I hope I get some like really fucked up unofficial one.
      I can see it now
      Yamato145 was given the smokes to many coffee grinds in the morning award by someass
      [thumbs up]

    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      The offical ones are given by the staff of RT...

      The unoffical ones by memebers of teh community, from which you must do something to earn...

    • Yamato145

      13 years ago

      btw, I am new ... could you tell me how you get awards?
      I mean I see that other people award them to you ... but is it just random or what?

    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      No prob! Glad to have someone new on board anyday!

    • Yamato145

      13 years ago

      Sanity!? What is that!?
      You mean this thing? [throws down an old plastic bag full of some gloop]
      I ain't used that in years!
      lol, but thanks for the welcome!
      Love & Peace!

    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      Yes, yes it does...

    • Ashen_God

      13 years ago

      award.jpg

      Bleach Owns ALL!!!

    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      Sure thing...

    • OKana

      13 years ago

      Fine fine, do you play halo often? check my journal if you are intrested.

    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      Not much, you?

    • OKana

      13 years ago

      What's Up

    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      Funny, I don't read that, It looks fine to me...

      Then again, I'm useing saffri...

      I'll try correcting it...

    • Killericon

      13 years ago

      you need to fix your profile man....that bit of text where you tell people to message beofre they friend request slips down to your awards section, and that offsets the site. It's annoying............

    • Deadbeat34

      13 years ago

      Thanks to you as well:

      Merry Christmas! Happy Hanukah! and seasons greetings to all other denominations!

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