Hybris51129

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    • GI Joe... WTF!

      10 years ago

      Hybris51129

      WARNING I MAY SPOIL THE MOVIE IF YOU DON'T WANT TO CHANCE IT STOP READING HERE.



      Ok I'm not a hardcore GI Joe fan but I'm knowledgeable enough to know whats right and wrong with the movie.

      1. The age old line "American Heroes" obviously never occurred to the writers because GI Joe is now under NATO. I shouldn't have to say much more about that.

      2. Cobra Commander gets (at least so far) the most confusing character background story of this year.

      3. Scarlet\Ripcord seriously what the hell was the writer smoking when he thought of this combo.

      4. Baroness flip flopping from sides more than most Democrats do in a week.

      5. Duke to quote Samuel L Jackson from XXX: State of the Union "I told you you should have shot the bitch."

      I will leave it at that before I go too far. But the bottom line is what happened to loyalty even partial loyalty to the source material?

      It's movie conversions like this that can kill or at least damage franchises (Ex: Doom the movie)

      Plus when did being All American become a forbidden term?

    • Revelation

      10 years ago

      Hybris51129

      This is kinda hard for me to write but I feel now I must come clean.

      Since the day I have signed up on RVB I have used this account as a complete false online identity complete with plausible or semi-plausible back story, happenings, plans etc...

      What started as just a junior high computer class thing had I will admit spiraled into something even I now have trouble believing a lot of the things I wrote in my journals. And most disturbing thing is I enjoyed spinning the tale of Hybris.

      If there ever was to be award given to me it would be either best hoax writer or biggest fucktard whichever you feel is right.

      To my friends rest assured that if had ever asked for advice or opinion the answer you received was genuine and honest. If you feel hurt by this then I gave the most gracious of apologies that a man can give from a online journal of sorts.

      All that I ask is that I be given a chance to start a new now that I have actually grown up.

      Jared "Hybris" Carlson

      I will try to restart a presence on RVB one of my true self so stay tuned.

    • Rewirte 50% done

      12 years ago

      Hybris51129

      Before I post the next few chapters I'll be going through the past ones and improveing them and fixing any plot holes and spelling and grammer errors. Just so you guys know.

    • I hate lawyers

      12 years ago

      Hybris51129

      I hate them. They are the reason I have been away for so long as they went over the will 3 different times to make sure that all family members agree that it is the reall will. Well aside from the legal side of things life as been quiet. I'll be getting back on more regularly now.

      btw Don't vote for Hillary please for the love of god and humanity don't.

    • Chapter 46 A Mechwarrior's Promise

      12 years ago

      Hybris51129

      Chapter 46
      A Mechwarrior's Promise

      After they had left Weber returned to his quarters to get some rest before giving all the mechs a tune up, so Jared and Kim retreated to the roof of the Mechbay that had served as their sanctuary since they got back on Dune. The sun had set and now one could see millions of stars through the cloudless sky, Jared looked around until he found Port Arthur among the stars.

      Jared: I wonder... if this is how it felt before last battle for Port Arthur?

      Kim: A mixture of fear and excitement I guess I never really felt any fear when we went out but this time.. this mission just feels ominous.

      Jared: I know but we still have a mission to do and a duty to perform, but I agree this mission is weird at best. Kim I need you to make a promise with me.

      She looked at him like he was mad but agreed to his request.

      Jared: If you or I die in this mission the other must promise to move on with their lives, lets not go back to a living hell of a life when we just got out of it right?

      Kim: ...ok I promise.

      He saw the sad look on her face and put a securing arm around her shoulders holding her close.

      Jared: I'll make this promise as well no matter what happens I will come back to you one way or another you can count on it.

      She was quiet for a moment before she hugged him tight and thanked him for it.

      Kim: You know I have been thinking what happens after this battle given if we win? I mean the Clan's have been our primary enemy for years and if they are gone who is left to face?

      Jared: Remember the great houses will always in a way be at each others throats so who ever thinks they are willing to risk war in order get whatever they will be our enemy. Besides you are forgetting about Miss Queen Bitch of the Universe who is of course the beloved sister of our boss Davion sense we have wreaked havoc with her infrastructure and of course hijacked a tank.... and of course there's Ricardo so she would be more then happy to see us.

      The thought of having a face to face meeting with Katrina Steiner was more then enough to cause her to burst out laughing.

      Kim: You know I think that would be a excellent example of “aggressive diplomacy†in action.

      Jared: Oh yeah... Excuse me lady Steiner you know me Carlson dude who took out more then a few friends of yours if you wouldn't mind please surrendering peacefully I won't have to use these supped up assault rifles to persuade you to surrender peacefully.

      Kim: You know she'd probably meet you in mech you know?
      Jared: That would make it easier just blow off the limbs and have SAR on hand to pick her up if she punches out.

      Kim: And of course being so full of her pride she wouldn't punch out therefore you could have a squad come up and pick her up that way. Yeah I think that plan would work out pretty nicely.

      Jared: Well that is of course that Davion approves of it but who knows maybe he just wants to end it once and for all honestly I think thats the best thing that could happen yes she may or may not be seen as a martyr by anyone still on her side but they would have to work very hard and quietly in order to rebuild to any sort of strength that could cause some actual damage. No if she dies then does her cause and terror.

      Kim: What do you think we'll do in between that war on Steiner?

      Jared: Well I don't know about you but I think a month on the resort planet of Sparta would be nice hell maybe I can compete there at the local mech fights.

      Kim: That would nice. We better get to bed we'll have a lot of work in the morning.

      Jared: Yeah but to tell you the truth I don't feel tired at all must be the mission jitters.

      Kim: I think I can help put you to sleep if you want.

      She has that look in her eyes again

      Chapter 47
      In to the Breech

    • A late Christmas

      12 years ago

      Hybris51129

      Merry Christmas everyone i have been at my parents so hence the lack of internet up there i'll try to post the next chapter when I can.

      NOTICE: Since I'm nearing the end of the story which I will post on fanfiction.net I will first have to rewrite the first few chapters due to plot holes and to rebuild the characters so what i post on FF and what you see on RVB will be different.

      Anyway Merry Christmas

    • Chapter 45 Clanner Special

      12 years ago

      Hybris51129

      Chapter 45
      Clanner Special

      The next 2 months to Jared at least were a blur of night and early morning patrols along the front lines. The fighting had been narrowed down to a 100 mile long 50 mile wide rectangle between the the Clanner last major base on the planet and the Davion main base. With in the "magic" box the fighting was nothing short of savage. Any unit that was sent in was chewed up and spat out on both sides with usually 25 to 50 percent of their men dead or wounded. For Weber's lance 125th Assault Lance known as the Spartans they had been lucky not lose anyone yet.

      Weber, Jared, and Kim lounged in the briefing room before Davion and Porta came in signalling the start of their new mission. Kim looked at the old man and knew that something was bothering him but what she couldn't figure out.

      Davion: As you may have heard from the rumor mill in the barracks that we are gearing up for one massive push to destory the clan base or at the very least heavly cripple them, now the plan codenamed Clanner Special is very stright foward since we are fighting on the plains we can't easily flank them so the whole opperation will be blitzkreg style but that would be the body count will be... beyond words. Which is why I have a card up my sleeve you two.

      He was pointing at Jared and Kim who had both realized that whatever they were being asked or ordered to do was risky at best.

      Davion: Porta...

      Porta: After several passes with orbiting spysat's we have found a way to destroy the whole power grid to the base automaticly opening all the gates and shuting down the turrents and sensor grid.

      She pulled out a holographic projector and threw the switch. Instantly a green 3D image of the base and the sublevels appeared.

      Porta: As you can see ing the center of the base is this large raised section shaped like a missile silo with a hole in the door well that is the main exhaust vent for the bases reactor, one of you will be given a custom made heavy gauss cannon to fire a 150 megaton nuke into that hole it will be a tight squeeze but if you aim it right it will work.

      Jared: So whats the catch?

      Davion: Catch is that you will be the very first people in we'll have a orbital bombardment long with a missile barrage from our lines to blow open the front gate to let you two in then after that you run it put the round down the hole then run like hell to the lines then with in a minute of the round being fired it will blow and take down the clans power grid.

      Kim: So is this a order or is it up to us?

      Davion rubbed the sides of his temple and looked at them both before speaking again.

      Davion: I can not order you to do this so yes it is up to two wheather or not you take this mission. Now I will tell you this... there is a very good chance that either one or both of you could die.

      Jared: Sir if we wanted a safe job then we would be flipping burgers at McKing's. Count me in.

      Kim: Same here I'm game.

      Davion noded his head and told them that they were dismissed.

      In the silence of his personal office he laid back in his back with a bottle scotch wondering to himself if he was doing the right thing.

      Someone had to do it and I gave them a choice and they made it... still I can only pray that they both make it out ok.

      Chapter 46
      A Mechwarriors Promise

    • Happy Birthday

      12 years ago

      Hybris51129

      Its my birthday! I'm 26 so I guess I'm one year closer to however long I'll live. Anyway Episode 85 is out for sponsers and I have to admit that RVB as actually gotten funny again for me at least so I think I'll stick around on the site for awhile.

      In other news...
      The next chapter should be up late tonight or tomorrow depending on what my wife as planned for us.

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  • Comments (399)

    • Tihawkie

      10 years ago

      Merry Christmas!

    • Veronox

      11 years ago

      friends?

    • DailyShow

      11 years ago

      nope, dont remember running into a Khan

    • QuackJAG

      11 years ago

      Dude, its been like ages since you have been on!

    • Neoma

      11 years ago

      Summarizing you.

    • Haybert

      12 years ago

      Where the hell are ya?
      Hope everything's alright; it'd suck if something...happened.

    • Gadwin

      12 years ago

      COME BACK!!!! smiley2.gifsmiley2.gifsmiley3.gifsmiley3.gifsmiley2.gifsmiley3.gifsmiley2.gifsmiley3.gifsmiley7.gifsmiley7.gifsmiley3.gif

    • Gadwin

      12 years ago

      Yooooo you need to come back man! Tell me, hows you? Hows the hippies? Hows the tank? The store? The wife? The family?

    • LeGeNdPiMp

      12 years ago

      how did u put all of those little video things up on ur page?

    • Hybris51129

      12 years ago

      Cool

    • Hydro626 FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold

      12 years ago

      the hitler thing makes my head hurt from laughing so much.

    • JeffSon

      12 years ago

      It's actually a Glock 22 (.40 S&W). Plus, the 9 millie's been around for close to a hundred years because of its effectiveness as a combat round.

      There's a whole slew of dead people out there who could probably attest to that effectiveness...you know, if they weren't dead and all...

    • Hybris51129

      12 years ago

      HAPPY NEW YEAR'S!

    • spikep

      12 years ago

      Happy New Year!!

    • Gadwin

      12 years ago

      Aye maybe I will get them. But not anytime soon. I forgot to mention in my journal that I have MGS: Portable Ops. But meh. I'll change that. Mehs all around!

    • spikep

      12 years ago

      Merry Christmas Hybris

    • Hybris51129

      12 years ago

      AK-47'S FOR EVERYONE!

    • RUSH2112

      12 years ago

      Happy birthday to me!
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    • RUSH2112

      12 years ago

      Whats this from?


      It's from a movie that'll be coming out next year called Hot Fuzz. It's the same people who did Shaun of the Dead and the guys who played Shaun and Ed are the main characters.

    • Gadwin

      12 years ago

      I need to catch up with the last 2 chapters lol... umm... and im learning some C++ and stuff... so.... its all like.... busy busy busy

    • thekingbeav

      12 years ago

      Ya, those threw me too, lol.

    • Hybris51129

      12 years ago

      Glad I could help!

    • Gadwin

      12 years ago

      Lol I'm watching Saving Private Ryan for the first time in class and its funny kuz I can tell some parts of whats going to happen at the beginning thanks to that gif lol

    • falchion17

      12 years ago

      oh yeah. i understand what your saying. i think conservatively minded people are fine but they are an extreme. their oldest child is in high school, not allowed to do anything with boys including: dating, movies, just hanging out. also, not even the oldest can see pg-13 movies or read anything controversial.

    • RUSH2112

      12 years ago

      Well as I posted I watched an interview between someone at CNN and the creators of ask ninja.

    • thekingbeav

      12 years ago

      And rightly so smiley8.gif

    • thekingbeav

      12 years ago

      Yaaa, well, I was a little seasick. I guess thats what happens when you live on a 20 Million Dollar housebout. smiley0.gif

    • The_Dark2

      12 years ago

      Yeah!!!

    • Hybris51129

      12 years ago

      No it just my intrest in the site is growing thin but over Thanksgiving I'm going to catch up on Season 5 and see if that will revive my former frevor.

    • The_Dark2

      12 years ago

      Have you dissapeared from RvB?!

    • Gadwin

      12 years ago

      Lol I know. It got stuck in my head that one night and for hours I was like humming it and lol yeah good stuff.

    • Hybris51129

      12 years ago

      Yes they do

    • Gadwin

      12 years ago

      Lemons taste good, eh smiley8.gif

      Post edited 10/27/06 7:17PM

    • niveK37

      12 years ago

      well it deals with the same event but this one is based on frank miller's graphic novel about it.

    • thekingbeav

      12 years ago

      o? and why is that?

      and i like the animation. good stuff. lol.

    • Gadwin

      12 years ago

      Are we ever gunna see the boogy babe again? lol

    • Shadus

      12 years ago

      there is also a third season that I should be getting sometime this coming week (hopefully wednesday)

    • Hybris51129

      12 years ago

      I AM RANDOM!

    • Bibly FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold

      12 years ago

      You have been randomly selected to randomly receive a random award of randomocity!
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    • Gadwin

      12 years ago

      Oh yeah, yeah! Comment on Shadus' journals but not mine!! lolol its cool

    • The_Dark2

      12 years ago

      Could you vote for me here?
      It will be greatly appreciated! smiley0.gif

    • The_Dark2

      12 years ago

      Contest soon! Read journal 201 and 200.

    • madeofwin

      13 years ago

      lmfao. I love that GIF on your profile *shakes head*...n00bs...

    • Hybris51129

      13 years ago

      Yeah I did get but so far I have been in grossed in writeing and Max Payne 2

    • Gadwin

      13 years ago

      They were pretty constant in the second episode and up. They had em in there in almost every single level, and that usually had lots in them. They are my fav monster in DOOM, and the Lost Soul is pretty kickass too. But they look like shit in DOOM 3.
      You did get that zip I sent you right? DoomNukem I called it lol. That was a few months ago though.
      Good times, good times. And good stuff. And you know I like good stuff. Because its good stuff. And good stuff is always good. smiley0.gif

    • Goaway

      13 years ago

      New images.

    • Hybris51129

      13 years ago

      I just noticed the award who knows maybe I can get one for writeing entire fanfic on RVB

    • Gadwin

      13 years ago

      Hey Jared. Just wanna let you know I got my first award :P
      I'm quite busy right now though. So I only have time for little things. I will read your chapter later when I have time.
      I GOT MY GMAIL
      www.hatheadmusic.com/listenframe.htm
      Download the song. Experience the amazing song from RvBTO on there!! smiley0.gifsmiley0.gifsmiley0.gifsmiley0.gif

    • Hybris51129

      13 years ago

      I still say its the site

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