ODSTJake

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    • Because I like writing journals mwhahaha

      7 years ago

      ODSTJake

      So the No Light Side Story got a little dark there at the end...

      Anyway the whole reason I wrote it was to get me out of a rut I was in after writing Ch. 13. It did its job and 14 is in the works. Everybody get stoked, but not really haha

      ...so whats new with you?

    • No Light Side Story

      7 years ago

      ODSTJake

      Charon: Part One
      My name is Garrick Jager. To fully understand me you would have to put yourself through hell and survive. Something very few men can say they’ve experienced. Here’s the funny thing though, I was only a boy when my life turned into hell.
      I grew up in the German city of Munich just my father, mother, and my blind younger sister. I loved nobody more than I did my little sister Nina. Nina always had a sense of innocence that was robbed from me by our father. Father was a hit man, the best in Germany in fact. The way he acted you could never tell he was the monster he was. He was always wearing a smile. Whether he was cooking a meal for us, beating me, or committing a murder. At the age of twelve my father took me with him to a hit and had me shoot a man in the head as he stared into my eyes. To this day I have not forgotten that man. After that day my father took me with him on every hit. He told me that I would have to continue his legacy. With every new mission my knowledge of his trade grew and soon I started becoming more involved in the hits. I had become a killing machine at the age of fourteen. My father only asked that I never mention anything to Nina. He said that she deserved a normal life, well as normal of a life she could have.
      When Nina was ten I was fifteen. I went and picked her up from school and we walked home. I enjoyed those walks more than anything. The sound of her cane clicking on the ground as we walked, the wind blowing, and the sounds of children cheering as they ran home. Everyday was the same, well except for this day. We had gotten home and our parents were frantically packing items they deemed necessary. The impossible had happened. My father had a price on his head. We were forced to relocate to the United States. The next few days were a blur of us running from train to train and flying to New York. I hated my father for this. I could handle this, but Nina and my mother couldn’t. They were terrified and untrusting of us. Nina stayed distant from me until we arrived at the apartment in New York.
      I told her everything about father and myself. She wasn’t good at hiding her expressions she constantly showed disapproval. For a ten year old she had a good sense of right and wrong, and she could tell what we were doing was wrong. Yet she was able to forgive me. She trusted me again, and for a brief while I felt like I could bear through this hell.
      A week later Nina woke me up in the middle of the night, “Brother I cannot sleep.” she whispered. I looked at her as she held on to my shoulder to confirm I was there. “What will help?” I asked. She smiled and said “Chocolate!” gleefully. I smiled back even though I knew should could not see. “Well I’ll go to the store and get some then.” I took what little American money I had and left to get Nina some chocolate. When I had returned I was greeted with the most disturbing scene in my life.
      The door had been kicked in and I feared the worst. I ran in to see two dead men on the living room floor, both their throats slit. Bloody foot prints and what looked like the trail of somebody being dragged led to my parents room. I grabbed a knife from the kitchen and walked into the room. Hanging from the ceiling fan was my poor mother. It looked like they had beaten her before hanging her. I held back my vomit until I looked at the corner of the room, at that point I threw up on the floor. Kneeling there was the corpse of my father gutted from the waist to his throat. I knew right then that they made him watch as they beat and killed my mother. Then killed him after they destroyed his mind. The gruesome sight froze me until my eyes drifted to the blood covered cane on the bed. I ran to it and grabbed it. I was trembling and eventually fell to my knees. Nina was nowhere to be seen. As I knelt there broken I heard someone enter the apartment. I rolled under the bed and listened as two men entered the room. “Wow can you believe that guy took out Jim and Xander?” The other voice replied, “That’s not what impresses me. The fact he was able to take the boss’ hand is the impressive part.” The first man spoke again, “Well he got what came to him huh. So the other kid is supposed to be home by now right?” “Yeah, I hope he screams like his sister!” The two men began to laugh and my body filled with rage I could no longer contain. I rolled out and slit the man closest to the bed Achilles tendons and imbedded the knife in the back of his head. Before the other man could even take out his gun I extended my sisters cane and hit him across the face with it. I then pounced on the man after he had fallen and beat the cane into his face until it looked like he had been shot with a shotgun. I sat down covered in blood and took a breath. Then I cried for the last time.

    • No Light: Chapter 13

      7 years ago

      ODSTJake

      Quality Work
      I laid flat on my stomach next to Felicia on a hill about two hundred meters from the ship dock. I had my sniper rifle out while Felicia had her spotter binoculars held to her face. Without moving from my rifle I spoke to Felicia, “I’ve got three in the terminal, two on the roof, two at the entrance, and three by the ship. You got anything on inferred?” She cleared her throat then spoke, “Ok two patrolling the upstairs hallway and three in the downstairs hallway.” I moved uncomfortably she purposely avoided mentioning the interior of the ship. “What about the ship?” She grunted back, “Its got a heat shield over it I can’t see inside.” I wasn’t counting on that, but I’ve learned to adjust. I turned on my radio, “Everybody check in.” Fudo was the first to reply, “Ana and I are in the back.” Next was Garrick, “I’m in the bushes by the three outside by the ship. Anymore I should know about Reap?” “We can’t see in the ship Charon. We’re to far away for x-ray. Can your visor do that?” He gave a little snort then replied, “Of course it can…its just broken right now. You know from a car crash I was in.” I chuckled back, “Should have gotten that fixed Charon.” Before Garrick could retort Topher checked in. “I’m by the terminal’s outside entrance. I also have x-ray and I can tell you no one is in the ship.” “Good job kid.” I knew I liked him. Dante finally checked in, “So Sterling I’m at the front who do I need to worry about?” I cleared my throat and started to speak, “Fudo and Ana you guys have two on the roof and two upstairs so take them out. Dante you’ve got the two outside and three inside. Charon you’ve got the three by the ship. Topher you’ve got one guy right by the door. Is everyone good to go?” All at once they replied, “Roger!” I smiled, “Alright lets do this wait for my command.” I looked through my scope and looked at the terminal two were sitting at the terminal controls and one at the water cooler. Easy enough. I took in a breath and aimed at the man by the water cooler. I fired once, he was hit in the head, as he fell to the ground I moved my aim towards the two men sitting. I fired just as one of them was standing to run out. The first man took the bullet to the head while the other was only hit in the chest. Damn. I was almost to slow to get them both with one shot. I turned on my radio, “Go.” The events that followed were like a symphony.
      Fudo and Anastasia released zip lines from their belts and shot up to the roof. They both sprinted almost silently towards the two men. Both of them shot their targets with silenced pistols and caught the bodies. They left them and entered the building through the door on the roof. I looked over at Felicia. She was smiling. She looked at me “You’d be smiling too if you saw the ways they broke those guys’ necks. It was extravagant.” Fudo came on the radio, “Go!” Dante emerged from the bushes and threw two knives into the guards standing outside and then casually walked in. Not a minute later he turned on his radio, “Go.” I do not want to ever get in a fight with Dante. As I finished my thought Charon jumped from the bushes and rolled in between the three men standing. He flicked his wrist back and two small pistols emerged from underneath his wrists. He shot two of them quick in their heads. He then moved his ankle and a knife emerged from his left boot and kicked it into the last ones jugular. He turned on his radio, “Go!” Topher then kicked down the door and shot the man in twice in chest and once in the head. He turned on his radio, “Clear!” I smiled, “Alright everyone gather your stuff and meet up at the terminal.” Again they all responded at once, “Roger.”
      Felicia and I gathered up our equipment from our spot and started walking to the terminal. She looked at me and spoke, “Your last shot was a little slow.” I kept looking forward, “I’m aware.” Her expression changed to one of concern, “Whats going on Sterling?” I sighed, “This mission is just a little personal is all.” She got closer to me and put her head on my shoulder as we walked. She smiled, “Well get through this babe and then we can put this all behind us.” I smiled back, “Yeah soon we can.” I normally don’t like getting to calm during a mission, but with Felicia who could really blame me. We made it up to the terminal everyone else was already there and the bodies had been moved. Anastasia looked up from a computer and spoke, “I already told everyone else, but it seems like as soon as we land we won’t be able to use long distance radio. The compound has a tower that blocks all unauthorized radio communications that are from other planets.” I nodded it wasn’t like my plans involved long distance radio, but it was still good to know. I looked at Anastasia, “Did you get the landing codes?” She nodded and stood up, “Yep everything is set to go.” I smiled, “Good lets get down to the…” Before I could finish my sentence I looked out the window at a man exiting the ship.

    • I've been unusually busy

      7 years ago

      ODSTJake

      So I haven't had the time to continue No Light or do anything else I had been planning on doing sadly. I've started working at a local sushi restaurant so that has taken up most of my time considering I've never made sushi until working there haha. I've also have gotten caught up in watching Death Note (fun fact its kinda terrific)

      Anyhow I hope to post something in the next few days either another chapter or a short story to help me get started. I want to write a story featuring a blind character as a main character so lets hope that comes into fruition and turns out well haha

      One last thing and seriously if you read No Light I want to see a comment please. What is your favorite and least favorite chapter? I believe hearing this will help me start it up again and evolve as a writer.

      Well to finish this off enjoy this video haha
      www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fungdb3BCNE

      -Jake /)(\

    • 7 years ago

      ODSTJake
    • No Light: Chapter 12

      7 years ago

      ODSTJake

      Battle Ready
      I woke up the next morning and began preparing my equipment. My shotgun was clean and loaded. The two new pistols I got from the armory were good to go. Both my sniper rifle and marksman rifle were ready as well. I sharpened my two knives and sat them next to the other weapons. Felicia walked into my room dressed fully in her armor. I always thought it was foolish to where such a bright color, but it worked for her. She took a seat on my bed and watched me put on my armor. “The wings on the back are a nice touch.” I smiled at her, “Well it works with my alias. The Grim Reaper is the angel of death. Plus you always called me your fallen angel.” She gave me a smirk and then pulled up her baklava. I winked at her and put on my helmet. I sheathed both knives, put both pistols on my waist, and my marksman rifle and shotgun on my back. I also attached my trauma kit to my thigh. I carried my sniper rifle and ammunition bag as we walked out. We walked passed Felicia’s room. She went inside and grabbed her gear. She walked out with the electricity gun strapped to her right thigh while an smg was on her left one , a small case bag strapped to her lower back, an assault rifle on her back, and a Kukri knife sheathed on her left shoulder. We started walking to the hanger.
      We were taking a military transport to our drop zone. I watched as Hercules trainees fueled up the ship and got everything prepared. Garrick was standing on top of it inspecting the thrusters. He was wearing full armor except for his helmet and only a single rifle on his back. He jumped off and nodded at me. He walked over to his helmet and put it on. Fudo, Anastasia, Dante, and Topher walked in all fully equipped. Fudo had a sawed off shotgun attached to each thigh, a combat knife on each calf, two pistols on his waist, and a marksman rifle on his back. Anastasia wore two smgs on her thighs with a shotgun on her back and a single pistol on her waist. Dante had two heavy pistols on his waist along with a few butterfly knives. On his back he had two heavy assault rifles, damn he looked intimidating. Topher had a sniper rifle on his back with only two pistols on his waist. A single combat knife was strapped to his chest. Topher looked at everyone and then his eyes fell upon Garrick. “Aren’t you going to get your stuff?” Garrick tilted his head and chuckled. He then ran at Topher and flicked his right wrist forward. A knife extended from the top of his fist and he aimed it at Topher’s throat. “My armor has a lot of these little surprises kid. It could be a knife, a pistol, and hell maybe even a small explosive. You never know.” The knife sheathed itself and he took a step back. I looked a Garrick, “Now that you got that out of your system lets start loading up.” We gathered some extra ammunition and started moving it into the transport. Garrick walked up to me and handed me two throwing knives. “I noticed that you weren’t wearing yours so I assumed you lost them.” I nodded, “Thanks, but why are you giving them to me?” He scoffed, “I’m not giving them to you, you dolt. I’m only loaning them to you. Three million is a lot of money so I want you at your best.” Again I nodded. He nodded back and walked away. I inspected the knives. They were high quality even personalized. The blade was black like the hilt with a dragon carved on each. I put the knives on my waist and grabbed my bag.
      Inside the transport Anastasia was digging through her bag of ammo with her helmet off. “I can’t believe I forgot to pack a silencer.” I dropped my bag, knelt down, and took out a silencer. I tossed it to her and she smiled, “Thanks.” She started to turn away then turned back, “Do you also happen to have any toxic rounds.” I laughed, reached in my bag, and threw her a clip. “They’re not toxic, but they should work just as fine for keeping the intended target quiet.” She smiled, put on her helmet, and walked away. Fudo walked in and stood behind me. “She’s always so forgetful, but when the time comes she’s one of the best.” I stood and looked at him, “I know she is.” We joined the others in the fuselage and sat down. The transport exited the hanger and I began explaining the plan as we flew.

    • Pokegeddon (or something like that)

      7 years ago

      ODSTJake

      The city is in ruins abandoned by all human life. It is night, four men exit out of a man hole dressed in hooded overcoats all wearing a different assortment of bags. One man has a red stripe across his side bag. The four men walk slowly checking every corner startled when they hear even the slightest sound. They finally make it to their destination, an abandoned supermarket as they enter and turn on their flashlights. The man with the red stripe signals them to split up. One man is digging through multiple knocked down shelves. He eventually finds a box of chocolate chip cookies. At first the man starts to put them in his pack, but then he changes his mind. He instead puts the cookies into a pocket in his coat as he makes this motion an animal runs quickly behind him. He jumps back and puts his back against another shelf. He holds his breath. He finally releases it when he thinks its safe. Then he hears a sound. He looks to his right and standing there is a large yellow rodent like creature. “PIKA-”. The man whispers to himself “Oh god no.” “-CHUUUUU!” The rodent releases a huge bolt of lightning into the man charring his skin and making him scream in pain. The light lit up the store like a Christmas tree. “PIKACHUS!” yelled one of the men.
      The remaining three men began to run towards the exit. Dodging obstacles and lightning strikes. They make it out and start to catch their breath, but their break does not last long. It is the crack of dawn and they hear a roar. They look up and a large dragon creature starts to fly down towards them. The man with the stripe makes a motion to run and exclaims “Shit Charizard!” The men start to run towards the man whole from which they came. The man in the stripe makes it there first and lifts the lid. The second man quickly makes it into the hole. The third man however trips. The man in the red stripe now knows that he must save himself and leave the other man behind. The man on the ground looks at him and cries “Rick ple please don’t lea-” before he can finish the Charizard releases fire from its mouth and decimates the man. Rick quickly closes the lid and falls down to the bottom. Rick turns on his flashlight and looks around for the second man. He is nowhere to be found. He yells in frustration “Son of a bitch Tom!”
      Tom had started running right when he reached the bottom he was to terrified. Pokemon weren’t supposed to be in that area. He reached a fork in the tunnels and for the life of him couldn’t remember which way to turn Rick always led. He went left. As Tom walked he started to hear voices. “Rick…Rick is that you?” When the voice didn’t respond he saw it. Purple smoke. He began to run “Shit shit shit!” he yelled. He finally had almost made it back to the fork, but then a purple hand grabbed his leg and he fell. His pack slipped off him as he was being dragged away. He began to scream when he saw what was pulling him. There were three creatures, two of them looked like black balls with faces floating in purple smoke repeatedly say “Ghastly.” The creature holding his foot was purple and more solid its face terrified him. It was just and head and two hands. As it dragged him into the shadow it said “Haunter.”
      Tom screamed until he was suddenly silenced. Rick had looked everywhere for Tom until he heard screams. He finally made it to the fork in the tunnels. He looked to the left and saw Toms pack. He quickly grabbed it then turned around and went right. He made it to a steel door and knocked three times. The door opened and he walked in. A man with a blue shirt started to walk with him. “Where is everyone else Rick?” “Dead Blake their dead.” Both men finally reached a place where multiple people had gathered. Rick walked over to the table that was in the center of the room and emptied his and Tom’s bags and walked away. As he left the people there rushed the table and started splitting up the food.
      Blake followed Rick into another room and closed the door behind them. A man was sitting at a desk with a lamp lit while writing in a journal. He looked up and saw Rick, “Well?” Rick looked at him with a stern look, “Pikachus and Charizards up top and I’m pretty sure we have ghost types in the sewers. We have to leave this place Oak.” Hearing this Blake spoke up, “Dad if there’s ghost types here its only a matter of time until they find us.” Oak nodded and pointed to a small sphere on his desk, “That, boys is what’s going to lead to our salvation.” He then pointed to a place on the map hanging on the wall, “And this is where we’re going to take back our world!” Rick and Blake took a closer look at the map and said in unison, “Kanto.”

    • Updates and More Drawings(mostly ponies)

      7 years ago

      ODSTJake

      So I had the idea of putting the main characters from MLP: FIM in different corps. from the Green Lantern series. The first up are Rainbow Dash in the Green Lanterns (Will) and Fluttershy in the Indigo Tribe (Compassion)
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      Next is just a page of doodles featuring Vinyl Scratch, Octavia, and Fluttershy
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      And the last one is an OC Sinestro Corp. Member
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      Okay so now the fun part. I've hit a major road block in writing No Light so that's gonna take awhile (my bad). Also I wrote a different take on the pokemon universe, sort of a prequel to the games. Since it counts as a FanFic (my opinion and probably others) I won't be posting it in my Creative Writing Corner thread. So just watch for when I post it. Here's crossing my fingers that you guys will enjoy it.

      -Jake /)(\

      *Thats a brohoof

    • Drawings

      7 years ago

      ODSTJake

      I realized in my About Me I said I draw and haven't posted any drawings so here are some.

      First Up is a Green Lantern I created for story I'm thinking about.
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      Second is an OC pony...yes I'm a brony. Anyway I'm thinking about doing more with this character (It is not me ponified...I wouldn't be a unicorn.)
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      Last is just some wolf I drew and colored quick as a warm up.
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      For those of you who missed it here's the latest Chapter of No Light Link

    • No Light: Chapter 11

      7 years ago

      ODSTJake

      Discussions
      I left Felicia’s room a couple hours later as she slept. I walked outside. Dante was smoking a cigarette looking at the sunset next to the shooting range. I walked up to him. He chuckled, “Enjoying some afternoon delight Sterling?” I smiled and sat in one of the chairs by his. He offered me a cigarette. I politely declined. He exhaled a cloud of smoke, “I know it’s a bad habit, but I need something to take the edge off. I don’t have a lady friend like you.” He ended his sentence with a smile. “Well if it makes you feel better I didn’t know I still had a lady friend until a few hours ago.” We laughed and barely noticed Anastasia and Fudo walk up and take seats around us. Fudo looked at Dante, “Did you talk to the kid?” Dante nodded, “Don’t you worry. He’ll be ready for the mission.” “Good.” Anastasia got up hugged Fudo from behind and rested her chin on his shoulder. Dante chuckled to himself, “I guess everybody’s getting some.” I overheard him and chuckled as well. Anastasia looked at us, “So which one of you is leading the team?” Dante and I looked at each other then back at her, “Why is it between Dante and me.” Fudo responded, “Dante has the most experience where as you have the highest success rate.” Dante looked at me, “I’m letting you take this one Sterling.” I nodded with agreement, “Its probably for the best I’ve been doing research on all of you so I think I know how to utilize everybody.” The all nodded back. Anastasia gave Fudo a kiss on the cheek and started to walk away. “I’ll go tell Topher, Garrick, and Felicia. Then I’m off to bed.” I waved to her, “Good luck with Charon he’s kind of a douche.” Fudo waved as well, “Good night my love.” She blew him a kiss and was out of sight.
      Fudo took out a small flask with a began to drink. “Sake?” asked Dante. “That’s racist. It’s scotch.” he laughed. He handed me the flask I took a swig then passed it to Dante. “So we prepare tomorrow then head out that night.” They both shook their heads in agreement. Dante finished his gulp and passed it back to Fudo “Mind giving me the break down then boss.” I stood up and began, “Alright so the compound is located on the Orion colony, an earth like planet about two systems from here. Only shuttles approved by the main compound can dock there. They have a dock that’s located in the Amazon jungle here on Earth. We’re going to take out that dock, steal a ship, and infiltrate the base that way. Sound good?” Again they shook they’re heads in agreement. “So we’re going to slip in right under their noses.” Dante said with a smile. Fudo smiled as well, “This is going to fun.” I laughed, “That’s what I keep telling myself.”
      We walked back into the gym to see Topher punching the bag next to the one in the wall. We walked over, “What are you doing kid? You need all the rest you can get.” Topher stopped then looked at Dante then the ground. “I just didn’t want to get to comfortable.” I walked over to the bag in the wall and ripped it out. “I’d rather have you comfortable and prepared then tired and confused.” I threw the bag on the ground. Fudo patted him on the shoulder and walked out of the gym, “You’re a good kid. You just have so much to learn.” Topher walked with Dante and myself to the mess hall. We sat at a table and started talking. Topher looked at me, “Reap, how do you do it?” I gave him a quizzical look, “Call me Sterling. Do what now?” “Kill people by exposing their flaws?” I smiled “Its honestly the easiest way. Everybody has an Achilles heal. If you can find it it’s easy to defeat any opponent.” He nodded, “Don’t you feel like you cheated.” Dante began to chuckle, as did I. “Not in the slightest. These people are trying to kill you. Just like you’re trying to kill them. I just like to increase my chances of survival.” I stood up, “Get some sleep guys, tomorrow is going to be a big day.” I left the mess hall as they continued to talk. I entered my room and turned on my monitor. It projected a picture of Julius. I stared at it and the scars on my face started to burn. “I’m going to get you this time you mother fucker. This time I’m not going to make a mistake.”

  • Comments (5)

    • Lo_Battery

      8 years ago

      New No Light chapter coming soon?

    • Lo_Battery

      8 years ago

      Pretty awesome series you have going on here!

    • caboosegrif2

      8 years ago

      hey halos awesome

    • KarmaKillzz

      9 years ago

      hey J y dont you join some of the groups on my page.

    • Cheese FIRST Member Star(s) Indication of membership status - One star is a FIRST member, two stars is Double Gold Poofs

      10 years ago

      Welcome to RT.

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