exniner

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from Delano, CA

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  • Comments (3585)

    • Vader_07

      12 years ago

      Story time?

    • tom206

      12 years ago

      good day

    • Bollux

      12 years ago

      the scene

    • dorn_josh

      12 years ago

      nice pics very evil but in a good way ROCK ON MAN

    • Bollux

      12 years ago

      Hmm. Maybe if I could see a snippet of what you've written I could offer some advise.
      And to think, I only found you because of your cool sith pics.

    • DeathclouD

      12 years ago

      I can take critism.

    • GC73

      12 years ago

      good to know

      Craig.

    • Bollux

      12 years ago

      I like the idea about him wanting to die…
      It's all about originality and bringing your ego down to earth. At every moment, make things believable (Yeah, it's hard with a fantasy book), even if you feel it's wrong. The most important thing to remember about writing is that your readers don't know as much as you do, and you will always have an image of the scene/character in your head that they don't always see. As much as it appeals to have your character Swing from a branch, hanging upside down by his knees, notch an arrow (lighting it on fire with magic) and fire the bow with his teeth, only do that in extreme circumstances. My character did that once, and only once.

    • GC73

      12 years ago

      believe me i have never writtin a story with any actions in it. (for me story writing is just something you have to do in class and on PAT's (provincal achivment test for those who don't know).

      Craig.

    • DeathclouD

      12 years ago

      well thats why they call them ideas. sometimes they get shot down ^_^ Well I can't really say much cause I'm not that much of a reader so sorry.

    • Qunitvineu

      12 years ago

      okay

    • metriodpro

      12 years ago

      Sure, if you want, I'll give you 4 mods for helpin me out.

    • metriodpro

      12 years ago

      Yo hows it goin? I was wondering if you could vote for me on a contest thats going on right now. The name of the person is eeeeeaaaaaa ( I know its a weird name) and since I don't know how to link, I can tell you that you can find him on my comments list. Please if you can. Thanks!

    • pnub500

      12 years ago

      yes i did, i have 1 done, i dont like it, but it's done

    • Qunitvineu

      12 years ago

      in a minute. I just got back from camp and my wacth alerts have exploded.

    • mdfq3

      12 years ago

      so what's the story?

    • mdfq3

      12 years ago

      storytime, you say?

    • Tommykool47

      12 years ago

      oh i see

    • Tommykool47

      12 years ago

      huh?

    • jackelsrule

      12 years ago

      heck yah that is awsome did u get my messages

    • Gadgetman

      12 years ago

      Mocumentary?!?! dont you mean Documentary??? this is serious shit you dont wanna joke around about...

    • DarthJ3sus

      12 years ago

      from here on in, just keep an eye on things yourself- i don't want to give one player an advantage over another by saying "real close, but try again". ups the ante, ya kow? keep the play field level.

    • syonide31

      12 years ago

      eh, thats fine

    • DarthJ3sus

      12 years ago

      13, 16, 17

    • DarthJ3sus

      12 years ago

      three fully correct, so far.

    • DeathclouD

      12 years ago

      playing my guitar and Halo live. you?

    • syonide31

      12 years ago

      a bit of it i did, i liked what i read

    • syonide31

      12 years ago

      im gonna keep writing it, no ida how long it'll be

    • syonide31

      12 years ago

      somwethiing i felt like writing

    • syonide31

      12 years ago

      eh.... could be better, if ya want a long read look in y journal XD

    • syonide31

      12 years ago

      hola to you too

    • DrKilljoy

      12 years ago

      *thinks about it*
      That'd be pretty cool to see...SYSTEM OF A DOWN!

    • halonroney

      12 years ago

      what to join my army

    • halonroney

      12 years ago

      love ur main pic awesome aeon

    • mdfq3

      12 years ago

      you'll obtain my gratitude.

    • cripppler

      12 years ago

      thnks

    • syonide31

      12 years ago

      sorrry to here your sick too

    • Bollux

      12 years ago

      sorry, they're hard to come by.

    • Bollux

      12 years ago

      how's the sniper hunt going?

    • Vash001

      12 years ago

      hay hows it hangin

    • KillStealer

      12 years ago

      his name is voolvif monn

    • KillStealer

      12 years ago

      i have 2 good sniper pics but i will you get me a good pic of the wolf jedi

    • KillStealer

      12 years ago

      are we still talking about the wolf guy

    • Donut_tactic

      12 years ago

      That's wierd, I can see it. Oh, well, I checked your journal, and it's not what you want anyway.

    • Donut_tactic

      12 years ago

      Like this?
      sniper(2).jpg

      I'm not sure if this is what you're asking for.

    • KillStealer

      12 years ago

      have you found one yet

    • KillStealer

      12 years ago

      check out my journal

    • pnub500

      12 years ago

      i'm trying and failing so badly, but slow and steady eventually i'll get them right

    • KillStealer

      12 years ago

      cool

    • KillStealer

      12 years ago

      cool you have any yet

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