So, i've decided to take a leaf out of Storeys (kitki) book again. no pun intended.
With the resurection of my story. it needs tro be rewritten. badly. anyone wanna help?
The speaker smiled as he brushed his long, slender fingers across the brilliant magenta petals of a wild flower that grew precautiously from a rock face. His deep, majestic blue eyes followed the creeping tendrils of the plants stem to the soft, dark earth, which abruptly met with the luscious green carpet of grass that grew for miles around him. His heart swelled with the beauty of his Fathers creations. Turning his soft, handsome face to the sky, he closed his eyes and allowed the sun to bathe him, wrapping its inviting golden light around him, embracing his toned, majestically garbed body. The sun shone through his eyelids, turning all of his existence into a faded red mist.
He turned with a start to face the new speaker, his eyes opening too sharply, rendering him blind for a fraction of a second.
Ã¢â‚¬Å“Well, Gabriel? WhatÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s beautiful?Ã¢â‚¬Â
The man now identified as Gabriel had regained his sight. He smiled at his inquisitive guest, silently berating himself for his quick start. Lucifer was famous for his unexpected arrivals, so much so that almost no one was shocked when he suddenly appeared, as if from nowhere. Gabriel barely even registered that Lucifer was hovering an inch of off the ground. Angels were almost always airborne.
Lucifer was still waiting for an answer as he hovered, so Gabriel obliged in offering one.
Ã¢â‚¬Å“That wildflower,Ã¢â‚¬Â he gestured to the bright magenta smudge on the rock face, Ã¢â‚¬Å“is exquisite. DoesnÃ¢â‚¬â„¢t our Father make such beautiful pieces of art?Ã¢â‚¬Â
Lucifer shrugged indifferently.
Ã¢â‚¬Å“I could do better,Ã¢â‚¬Â he insisted, Ã¢â‚¬Å“If I were given a chance.Ã¢â‚¬Â
Gabriel smiled wearily as he sensed an impending outburst. He had heard LuciferÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s ranting a hundred times before, and he doubted this would be any different. He was almost instantly proven right in his speculation.
Ã¢â‚¬Å“ItÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s not fair, though. We call him Father, and He calls us his children. But children grow to succeed their parents! He will never die, and we shall. We will never get to take his place.Ã¢â‚¬Â
With a patient smile, GabrielÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s attention began to wane. In his mind, the magenta smudge was spouting a million more smudges, erasing the dull grey of the rock face. Lucifer went on, ignoring the fact that Gabriel had lost all interest in the one sided conversation.
Ã¢â‚¬Å“Something should be done about it. Someone should take GodÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s place.Ã¢â‚¬Â
That snapped Gabriel from his daze.
Ã¢â‚¬Å“Lucifer, you speak treasonous talk. Let me hear no more. It is not our place to say what is fair and what is not. It is for God only to judge.Ã¢â‚¬Â
Lucifer scowled moodily.
Ã¢â‚¬Å“Perhaps itÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s time that changed?Ã¢â‚¬Â He offered. His smooth, lightly tanned brow was furrowed like a cornfield, distorting his otherwise perfect face, with its flawless skin, golden-framed eyes and soft, plump, blood red lips. It was no wonder he was described as the most beautiful of all angels, and he preened himself for hours on end to keep his reputation.
Gabriel frowned to match LuciferÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s own expression. He opened his mouth to speak, but before he uttered a word, Lucifer broke into a grin, all furrows disappearing as though a flood had erased the cornfield from existence.
Ã¢â‚¬Å“IÃ¢â‚¬â„¢m kidding. God is our Father, and He alone knows whatÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s best for us. Yadayadayada. I would never even toy with the thought of considering rebelling. Learn to take a joke, will ya?Ã¢â‚¬Â
With a cocky laugh, Lucifer leaned in close to GabrielÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s face. Gabriel flushed angrily at his arrogance. Lucifer brushed his gentle lips across GabrielÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s cheek, until they rested just below his right ear.
Ã¢â‚¬Å“But, you knowÃ¢â‚¬Â¦Ã¢â‚¬Â he whispered softly, tantalisingly, Ã¢â‚¬Å“YouÃ¢â‚¬â„¢d be a great second-in-command. Right below Michael.Ã¢â‚¬Â With a tiny chuckle, Lucifer kissed Gabriel gently on the cheek. Repulsed, Gabriel yanked himself away from LuciferÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s sinful tongue. With a carefree laugh, Lucifer beat his powerful, golden wings and disappeared into the sky, knocking the wildflower from its foothold with the force of his takeoff. Before the tiny black dot that was he faded into the clouds, he called back:
Ã¢â‚¬Å“Of course, IÃ¢â‚¬â„¢d be in charge of things!Ã¢â‚¬Â
His joyous laugh lingered briefly after he had left, then, it too, disappeared into the clouds.
Gabriel brushed his delicate hand gently across the patch of skin Lucifer had contaminated. It was icy cold, as though the person who had delivered it was made of marble. He withdrew his hand with a speed that impressed even him, and then, as an afterthought, he bought his hand back up and rubbed vigorously at the marred skin. He frowned after Lucifer, then looked around for his magenta smudge. His frown deepened as he spotted the slightly mangled remains. Picking it up in his left hand he kissed it. The petals bloomed again, as beautiful as they had been minutes ago, before LuciferÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s rather crude exit. He placed it back on its foothold and smiled, content with resuming his observations.
Ã¢â‚¬Å“Beautiful,Ã¢â‚¬Â he murmured.
14 years agorikkurox
14 years agorikkurox
LAYER ONE: ON THE OUTSIDE
Name:Raye louise Seymour
Birth date: 20th april, 1990
Birth place: Gisborne, new zealand
Current Location: gisborne, new zealand
Hair Color: black and pink
Righty or Lefty:Ambidextrious
LAYER TWO: ON THE INSIDE
Your heritage: brittish/irish
Shoes you wore today: roman sandles, boots
Your weakness: gaming, fear of being forgotten
Your fears:being forgotten, having to kill my dog Millie
Your perfect pizza:double decadance Godfather
LAYER THREE: YESTERDAY, TODAY, TOMORROW
Your most overused phrase on AIM/MSN/YIM: lol, brb
Your thoughts first waking up: Is Millie okay? (woke up from a nightmare)
Your best physical feature: My ass?
Your bedtime: I don't sleep much. iunno
Your fondest memory: Being with a certain person.
LAYER FOUR: YOUR PICK
Pepsi or Coke:Dr pepper.
McDonald's or Burger King: KFC
Single or group dates: Single
Adidas or Nike: Doc Martins
Lipton Ice Tea or Nestea: Milo
Chocolate or vanilla: Strawberry
Cappuccino or coffee: Mocca
LAYER FIVE: DO YOU?
Smoke: Weed, but not anymore
Single: I...hmmm....I'm not really sure.
Take a shower: morning and night
Have a crush: Aye
Want to get married: Eventually
Believe in yourself: XD yeah, right.
Get motion sickness:yepperella
Think you're attractive: not at all, but i'm told otherwise
Think you're a health freak: hell no
Get along with your parents: No. never. you should have heard my dad when i flunked school. or when he found out i'm bi.
Like thunderstorms: YES.
LAYER SIX: IN THE PAST MONTH
Drank alcohol: last night.
Gone on a date: no
Gone to the mall: don't have one
Been on stage: nope
Eaten an entire box of Oreos:easily.
Eaten sushi: not in the past month, no
Been dumped: no, came damn close, though. hasn't been the same since.
Gone skating: yes/, love to.
Gone skinny dipping: XD no comment?
Stolen anything: yeah.
LAYER SEVEN: HAVE YOU EVER
Played a game that required removal of clothing: ^___________^ mexi is FUN
Been trashed or extremely intoxicated: Most nights
Been caught "doing something": yeah, by my mom
Been called a tease: Oooooooooooooooh yeah
LAYER EIGHT: GETTING OLDER
Age you hope to be married: late 20s early 30s
Number of Children:2 boys would be nice
How do you want to die:famously
What do you want to be when you grow up: imfamous.
LAYER NINE: IN THE OPPOSITE SEX
Best eye color?: Hazel or blue
Best hair color?: Black
Short or long hair:Shoulder length, the boofier the better
Height: 6 ft is ideal
Best first date location: Airport
Best first kiss location: Airport
LAYER TEN: IN THE NUMBERS
Number of people I could trust with my life: 3
Number of CD's: countless
Number of piercing: 14 in one ear, 8 in the other, a clit piercing, eyebrow peircing, belly bar, nipple peircing, webbing, nose, finger nails.
Number of tattoos: 0
Number of times my name has appeared in the Newspaper?: Too many. often for bad things
Number of scars on my body: Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeew............countless
14 years agorikkurox
School sucks. WOULD YOU STOP ASKING ME IF I HAD A THREESOME WITH MY BOSS?!
Then again, I guess this was only to be expected.
My biggest fear is dying and no one ever remembering me. I want to be remembered centuries from now.
Tell me something.
Can you name all of the acomplishments of George Washington? You can? What about every other president?
it's not important to someone outside America, though, is it?
Can you tell me about Hitler? of course you can-EVERYONE knows who he is. My 10 year old sister can tell me how he died.
Already in my city, I'm imfamous.
It's so much easier to be famous for something you've done wrong than for something you've done right.
i want to be a tyrant. I want to be REMEMBERED.
I will not be forgotten. I don't know how I'm goingto get there, and to be honest, nihil curo. It's only a matter of time and patiance. You will be teaching my name to your children before I die.
I will be imfamous.
14 years agorikkurox
At school in Info Management at the mo, wooo............Oh, I am LOVING this. NOT.
Ah well....mufti day today, so no bloody uniform. :P And I can't get in trouble for my newly blueified hair, either. BLUE ALL THE WAY, BITCHES!!
No, but seriously.
Blue owns your asses.
>< My new eyebrow piercing fell out last night and I didn't notice, so the wound closed over a bit before I put it back in this morning-still fsking throbbing, damn. Itchy....Oh well, at least I got it back in, eh?
*sniffle* I miss talking to Matt...and Erin and Sarah.......>< Stupid summer break. Are they ALWAYS out?! Oh well, holidays are about to start over here, too, so maybe I might be able to catch up with them then. Hope so, bored stupid now that Henry is knocked out with some hella foul strand of 'flu.
Oh no, sugar buzz from the candy I ate at interval is starting to kick in.....*giggles* Ohhh, I'm gonna get caugt online if I don't shut up....*stiffles self with a glove*
I have to go now, woooooooooork to dooooooooo!!!!!!
2019 years agorikkurox
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