rontomccloud

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from Upland, CA

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    • oh goody..

      10 years ago

      rontomccloud

      school's gonna start soon... another year of embarrasing situations ans misadventures that end up in heart break, comedy, of full out brawls.... This is gonna be awesome

      at least i'm not a freshman anymore

    • I'm Home!

      10 years ago

      rontomccloud

      need i say more?

    • Renard's vacation (so far.. 3 days)

      10 years ago

      rontomccloud

      A lovely summer day in Colorado… Renard sat in his bed and let out a sigh. He then got up, threw on some light fitting clothes, and stepped out onto the porch, a light breeze blowing past the fox’s fur as if he wasn’t even there… “One day down…. 13 more to go…†The 16-year-old fox would have preferred to stay maybe a couple of days... But his mother had sent him to visit his family in the State of Providence for two weeks.
      Yesterday, all he heard was his relatives complaining and arguing… not exactly the basis of a relaxing vacation. But he was expecting it really, with that side of his family, arguments were unavoidable sometimes. He was raised here until he was nearly not a kid about, 8 or 10… but things have changed… it felt weird to him… alien, yet familiar.
      His family has changed a lot, different fur colors, some grew, others shrank… a marriage, and arriving on his sister’s birthday... People always complimented him on timing but this was a bit much. Renard sighed, took a deep breath of the crisp, morning air, and went back inside. He couldn’t really complain though; at least he could get away from California. Sure it was familiar stomping grounds, but it was still a change of scenery.
      He sighed as he ate some concoction of meat, spices, and potatoes that was so heavily spiced it almost burned his tongue, but he decided not to say anything out of courtesy. He encountered his sister, almost running smack into her as he exited the kitchen. She was holding her side. Doing a perfect charade of pain... because she was in pain, the girl’s dark hair looking distraught. “Unhg… I think I might have appendicitis, Ren…†the older fox complained, “Or it could just be gas… Knikkiâ€Â, came Renard’s retort. He yawned. Though sometimes his older sibling was a bit of a hypochondriac, but if she really got sick, it was pretty bad. “Or it could be blockage…†she mused. “Or it could just be gas…†said Renard, not really minding, but slightly annoyed... but hey, it was early morning. Everyone is a little upset at this time of day, especially since the rehearsal dinner for the wedding was today…
      He dressed casually, as he didn’t care much for rehearsals, what mattered was the ceremony to him, but he found he couldn’t argue with tradition. He arrived, said his hellos, and sat around waiting for the food to arrive. His wait was well rewarded… Brisket, sweet beans, the classic hot dogs and hamburgers, and cola, along with other indistinguishable, yet rather good foods. Nothing happened much here… so not much worth mentioning in the span of this story. So let’s skip to…

      Renard woke up to the sounds of barking, pups screaming, and general bustle of the time before the preparation of a wedding. The fox pulled himself out of bed and got ready, he took a shower enjoying it because the rest of the day was going to be rather stressful, though nothing he couldn’t handle. “Let’s see…†he said to no one in particular as he tried to slick his brown, medium length headfur back. He looked at the incompliant locks, frustration flashing across his brown eyes. “Forget it…†he told his reflection as he wrapped a towel around his orange and white fur. It would settle on its own, he figured. He then put on his formal clothes, a earthen toned, button up shirt, and some off white slacks, throw on a couple of earth-toned sneakers with white laces and that’s a formal as Renard would want to get. Sure, he’d look common to the other males in tuxedos, but at least he was trying… kind of, but not really. If he had an actual position in the wedding other than spectator… he would have gone through the trouble of putting on a suit... But not in this fox’s case… he leaned back on the car ride to the ceremony… not much here either… just an everyday catholic wedding, a misbehaving ringbearer and flowergirl, but what else was new? After messing with the church’s piano, and other last minute obligations, he headed to the reception, some place dubbed Elk’s Lounge… and Renard soon found out it was for obvious reasons… a bunch of elk left as his now broadened family filed in.. Renard felt slightly out of place, a literal fox among elks… everything sort of flew after that.. lots of cake, drinks, dancing… All the fox remembered was dancing with a cousin and waking up in his grandma's basement… it wasn’t booze… it was probably the sugar that he had… half of both bridal and groom cake could do that to someone.

    • finally

      10 years ago

      rontomccloud

      after a week of blood,sweat and tears... not to mention miles of modem wires, ihave gotten my grandma's wireless connection to work(somehow) so i'll be around for my vacation

    • can't be on much...

      10 years ago

      rontomccloud

      the relative i'm staying with has no internet.. and i'm using another relative's' comp... so.. when i get home.. you'll get an announcement.. or a story... either or... anyway... nothing more than a friendly howl from sunny(mostly) Colorado.

      - Renard/Cirrus.(at this point.. i don't really give a damn)

    • news flash!

      10 years ago

      rontomccloud

      starting the sixteenth of july, i will not be on for two weeks due to a visit to colorado to see family... i'll check in if i can... won't be likely with my family though

    • cries of lament

      10 years ago

      rontomccloud

      at the edge of a ridge of a peaceful mountain,
      a strong young boy stands there quietly,
      yet through his facade of a passive stare,
      his tears are ripping him apart.

      he had known a man who was always there for him,
      but that is no longer so...

      he takes a deep breath and looks to the sky,
      and watches the ashes scatter...

      carried away by the currents of the wind,
      the young boy's wish and his regret

      His wish is selfish but something rather sad,
      he wished for the return of his dad.

      "i always considered you a nuisance in my sight,
      but now that you are gone...
      I'll sing to the wind to deliver my feelings
      and how i truly felt of you"

      carried away
      by the currents of the wind
      some ashes, and some cries of young lament

      if i could have just one more chance... i would have told how much i cared for you

    • ...

      10 years ago

      rontomccloud

      I found out... just now that my father died... this is the only way that i can spweak.. can't even contorl my hands... i feel sick... my hands are shaking... my eyes buiurn... my mouth is dry.... just.... i'm shattered.. yeah thats the word... precicley the word... shattered

    • Turn of the season

      10 years ago

      rontomccloud

      " hey, Gunner... we're having our trip to the river. Think you can get everyone out here in half an hour?"

      Renard hung up the phone and went to his porch. he looked at the sky and sighed. he had a good idea of what the others would do, Robert would play videogames in the hotel (ren's half brother woudn't allow him to use it after what rick and ren did to the place.. no more details)

      His ears perked and he shivered as he heard gunner's vehicle pull up into the driveway. with the others inside.

      "get in."

      "hell no gunner..."

      "why not?"

      "because the last time you drove, the end result was a missing section of highway, countless civilian injuries, an entire police force out of commision, and two destroyed military tanks"

      "the guy was dumb enough to challang me to a race..."

      "and you were stupid enough to accept"

      "none of us were hurt..."

      " i will grant you that... and you're the only one with a license...hhhhh, fine..."

    • i need a scenario...

      10 years ago

      rontomccloud

      I need a scenario for the set of characters i've made (ironically, they are real people that i go to school with, the people they are based on)

      But i need something good.. i'm running out of ideas .. the ones that i have are kinda ... off

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